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The last few chapters are total garbage .................................................. ..................................................
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terrible .............................................................................................................................................
Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...
GARBAGE [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Garbage story,strange fetishes of the author and r*pe.Read it if you really want to see the potential love interest get r*ped. And there's even a patreon for this garbage
On this page there are stories that despite great support you won't like and others that despite zero support you will like, but this one is a shame, the romance is terrible, the system is too much, the story goes nowhere and I try of putting together many plots that do not finish ordering
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this story would've been good if it was just slice of life with nice family bonding moments and no romance or anything of the sort. As it is now it just hurts to read this.
Be Prepared the authors likes to randomly have chapters not on Webnovel and, have to be bought on Patreon. It ruins a lot of the flow of the book and money.
Kekurangannya ada pada BNHA , gua jujur ya, itu bab sampah sih menurut gw. Sekarang ini udah mulai bagus, ga cringe amat, kek awal cerita .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. . . . . .,.,. .,., ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,
Hello friend, I really liked your story, I'm Spanish and it cost me to translate it into Spanish just to be able to read it and I'll make a comment if you could give me permission to publish your story in Spanish on another page of course I will be able to get the right to the story (I mean you) please I await your approval.
bro I really liked your story I write to you if you could give me permission to translate your story into Spanish ..........................
The writer only cares about money rather than his interest in readers If you're going to care about the money, stop the novel instead The hero's personality is not good, especially since he continues to fear Saitama even though Izayoi is much stronger than Saitama Also, the hero's personality is very frivolous and his behavior is immature
dropped this at chapter 42, one of the main reason is how disgusting dumb this guy is
I don't recommend this for those of you who don't like cringe MCs with a bad sense of humor. The MC in this book is like Rio SeireiGensouki but a more annoying disgusting version named Akira. The MC is a big baby, he obviously has a harem, but he's so hypocritical and keeps making other girls he hasn't eaten wait for so long; just for the MC's stupid inner drama like character development? There's not even any character development at all, I think the MC's personality just changes so inconsistently that I can't stand it every time Akira speaks. Hahaha I'm serious, Akira is so annoying when he speaks and I always cringe with his every word which is expected from Indonesians - although I'm also Indonesian, but my cringe level is not that high!
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I should have known it would be like this through the previous book, the MC was too indecisive and lacked motivation or purpose. Just collecting pokemon what's more, some important content needs to be accessed through patre*n, I know you want to have money but it's just not satisfying.
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Lack of tags and asking for money just to see some scenes in the book like chapter 62
Spoiler de révélation
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Overall, it's a boring story. Honestly, the first chapter might be good, but the further this chapter goes, the story gets boring and makes no sense at all.
As much as the updates is fast and all, the rest of the things needed to have a popular fanfic are utterly trash. 1. English needs be improved otherwise readers will drop within 30 chapters. 2. The OC is too trusting even though he already tasted the cruelty of reality before getting reincarnated, and then there's this System that contradicts itself because when Akira was surprised that the world includes Highschool DxD, the System said that "he didn't ask", even if he ask, his "authority is not high enough" which is the reason of contradictory. 3. The Development of the story is much worse due to the failure of improving or at least readable grammar. 4. Lastly, the world is in shambles, author threw in so many Anime that doesn't fit properly with each other that it also causes the plot to go haywire as if you're trying to comprehend Multiverse Theory itself.
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The last few chapters are total garbage .................................................. ..................................................
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terrible .............................................................................................................................................
Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...Bad ending and a waste of time...
GARBAGE [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Garbage story,strange fetishes of the author and r*pe.Read it if you really want to see the potential love interest get r*ped. And there's even a patreon for this garbage
On this page there are stories that despite great support you won't like and others that despite zero support you will like, but this one is a shame, the romance is terrible, the system is too much, the story goes nowhere and I try of putting together many plots that do not finish ordering
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this story would've been good if it was just slice of life with nice family bonding moments and no romance or anything of the sort. As it is now it just hurts to read this.
Be Prepared the authors likes to randomly have chapters not on Webnovel and, have to be bought on Patreon. It ruins a lot of the flow of the book and money.
Kekurangannya ada pada BNHA , gua jujur ya, itu bab sampah sih menurut gw. Sekarang ini udah mulai bagus, ga cringe amat, kek awal cerita .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. . . . . .,.,. .,., ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,
Hello friend, I really liked your story, I'm Spanish and it cost me to translate it into Spanish just to be able to read it and I'll make a comment if you could give me permission to publish your story in Spanish on another page of course I will be able to get the right to the story (I mean you) please I await your approval.
bro I really liked your story I write to you if you could give me permission to translate your story into Spanish ..........................
The writer only cares about money rather than his interest in readers If you're going to care about the money, stop the novel instead The hero's personality is not good, especially since he continues to fear Saitama even though Izayoi is much stronger than Saitama Also, the hero's personality is very frivolous and his behavior is immature
dropped this at chapter 42, one of the main reason is how disgusting dumb this guy is
I don't recommend this for those of you who don't like cringe MCs with a bad sense of humor. The MC in this book is like Rio SeireiGensouki but a more annoying disgusting version named Akira. The MC is a big baby, he obviously has a harem, but he's so hypocritical and keeps making other girls he hasn't eaten wait for so long; just for the MC's stupid inner drama like character development? There's not even any character development at all, I think the MC's personality just changes so inconsistently that I can't stand it every time Akira speaks. Hahaha I'm serious, Akira is so annoying when he speaks and I always cringe with his every word which is expected from Indonesians - although I'm also Indonesian, but my cringe level is not that high!
,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ .......................................................................... ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ,......................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ .........................................................................
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I should have known it would be like this through the previous book, the MC was too indecisive and lacked motivation or purpose. Just collecting pokemon what's more, some important content needs to be accessed through patre*n, I know you want to have money but it's just not satisfying.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Lack of tags and asking for money just to see some scenes in the book like chapter 62
Spoiler de révélation [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Overall, it's a boring story. Honestly, the first chapter might be good, but the further this chapter goes, the story gets boring and makes no sense at all.
As much as the updates is fast and all, the rest of the things needed to have a popular fanfic are utterly trash. 1. English needs be improved otherwise readers will drop within 30 chapters. 2. The OC is too trusting even though he already tasted the cruelty of reality before getting reincarnated, and then there's this System that contradicts itself because when Akira was surprised that the world includes Highschool DxD, the System said that "he didn't ask", even if he ask, his "authority is not high enough" which is the reason of contradictory. 3. The Development of the story is much worse due to the failure of improving or at least readable grammar. 4. Lastly, the world is in shambles, author threw in so many Anime that doesn't fit properly with each other that it also causes the plot to go haywire as if you're trying to comprehend Multiverse Theory itself.