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You can ask questions here, there may be some discreet spoilers in the answers, so read this only if you think it will not ruin your reading experience. In the other review posted by me, there are also answers that could have spoilers, beware.
Hi, My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
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I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing
Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.
The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.
the plot is very loved it, the characters especially to the main characters are admiring and I continue to read it by the way I like the synopsis. its very interesting.
Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel. Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️
Really unique power system and anarchy world. It is very exciting to read what will happen next as it is always something new and unexpected, I recommend it!
I liked everything about the story, it is pretty good with descriptions and definitely exciting, Kudos to the author. I am gonna read this till the end and wish to see more spicy content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️
So afar its been pretty good, i liked the start and also our belived ml, who reminds me of me sometimes, this book is definitely worth reading and I’d asvice everyone to come read it[img=recommend]
Hello, I am the author. The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting. I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that. I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel. I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic). The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.
You can ask questions here, there may be some discreet spoilers in the answers, so read this only if you think it will not ruin your reading experience. In the other review posted by me, there are also answers that could have spoilers, beware.
Hi, My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
Spoiler de révélation I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing
Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.
The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.
the plot is very loved it, the characters especially to the main characters are admiring and I continue to read it by the way I like the synopsis. its very interesting.
Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel. Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️
Really unique power system and anarchy world. It is very exciting to read what will happen next as it is always something new and unexpected, I recommend it!
I liked everything about the story, it is pretty good with descriptions and definitely exciting, Kudos to the author. I am gonna read this till the end and wish to see more spicy content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️
So afar its been pretty good, i liked the start and also our belived ml, who reminds me of me sometimes, this book is definitely worth reading and I’d asvice everyone to come read it[img=recommend]
Hello, I am the author. The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting. I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that. I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel. I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic). The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.