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One of the better FF ruined by the awful release that can be months between chapters and those chapters can be waaaay to short for how long the wait was. Minor Grammar issues hardly mentionable, the story sometime skips what could have been fun to read character development. There was also no real character development he just became a person used to war immediately
please continue i don't dare to catch up without you continuing can't be heart broken
I’m really happy that I found this story! I’ve searched for one that uses the plot for character development and in this story I think you can see that. Something that I like as well, is that the mc is not bound to the storyline like in other stories but makes his own. Really great job Author![img=recommend]
Love this!! The premise is really interesting, and I love Destiny lore so it's awesome. The descriptions are very creative, and the humour is great. I look forward to reading more! :D
Didnt know a single thing about Destiny series gameplay until I started reading them. 10/10 got invested in the game and one of my favourite fic of all time!! Can't wait for the next update[img=update]
Love the synopsis genuinely and the whole idea of the ML being transported into the game as an NPC before the players arrived! Also like the name of the ML in the gamee! Added to collections lol-look forward to reading more
It's a very good novel I recommend it to anyone who likes the legendary mechanic
Honestly I thought I already wrote a review but I guess I was wrong. This is one of the lonely few destiny fanfics that I’ve actually enjoyed. Well written and enraptures you in the narrative that’s set out for you. The characters are likable and all the conversations feel real. I appreciate you writing this story author-san. Keep up the hard work!
One of the funniest books I have read in a long time. The writing is sharp and sarcastic, not at all what I was expecting but in the best way possible. Keep it up author because your character interactions are legendary. I for one am looking forward to future chapters.
very interesting Story with much Research done into the destiny lore. i myself Played Just a little Bit of destiny 2 until forsaken without caring about the Lore too much, i can still follows and enjoy this Story. also gives a Point of View in how strong everyone really should be which Just cant be shown properly in the games even non destiny Players will probably find this very interesting. thank you author for making this masterpiece
The best Destiny fanfic I‘ve found, the only limitation is the sparser-than-ideal updates, but I really enjoy the MC and I can’t wait to see how he develops with the story!!
overall I enjoy the story. when Destiny first came out. I was hyped about it but I didn't have the money to buy it myself so I had always watched others play it. I kind of broke off after or during my watching the Vault of Glass DLC raid. my interest was reabsorbed by destiny 2 much later and even played it myself but I didn't consider it good enough after getting like halfway through the story. I enjoyed the story of destiny but never had a chance to learn its lore so I might not understand everything that I'd happening except the basic since it's been years but I can still reasonably enjoy this story
one of the best of destiny that I have read, a lot of creativity and effort on the part of the author, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.One suggestion would be to update more, please.
Very well written and fun to read the first few missions left a little to be desired but after that it’s been smooth and good and most of all consistent…. What can I say I wait for new chapters as we speak I can be a bad read if I’m 81 ch in and still reading 🤣😊
Top-tier fanfic. Mc is still not OP 80+ chapters in, which is a good thing. The Mc although not OP, is skilled and talented. His cheat doesn't break world balance. His character is well-developed and likable, and his interactions with others are engaging. The only flaw in this whole book, is that author sometimes forgets to upload.
still w8ing for the players need some spoilers when r they going to appear, author-kun?
THE MC IS A HUNTER.. My Crayon Factory Is Going Bankrupt, I NEED A TITAN. slow updates, sometimes I forget this novel even exists. Everything else is good.
............................................ As a destiny player i like the story and recommend to read ( is a fic so dont expect is all canon, bat in the magiority a self insert in the lore ;)
I love it an I wish more of it faster, but don't post faster if is lowered In quality
As a vivid Destiny 2 player this is a fantastic peice of work, definitely gives a new light to seeing destiny differently!
First, I would like to say good pacing mc doesn’t immediatly get enough power to end the world. Second, good interaction with character that we don’t get to see the author does a good job bringing everyone to life. I don’t know if your planning this or not author but since it’s no longer a game he wouldn’t be bound to balancing mechanics. So what I mean to say is mc should be able to fully kit himself in exotics and cross classes. For example felwinter is a warlock that can shoulder charge.
I have only played Destiny a few times but I don't find it hard to keep up with the story. the humour is amazing
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] heavily based on destiny, will need at least some background knowledge [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I never really thought I needed a destiny ff until it appeared and even more so when the story is logical and well told. There are a few defects such as the "spoilers" that appear wildly but for being the first Destiny FF that I read, it seems incredible to me and it gives me that "beautiful" desire to wait for the next chapter. There is not much to criticize, it is Destiny, you already know how it goes and how it is innovative it allows it to be different from the classic FF like the "hp" ones that you already know the entire plot just by knowing that the mc will go to gryffindor
very descriptive and fun to read, I hadn't played the game so i didn't know how the world worked but it was well worded enough for me to understand!
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Let's Go!!!!The story writing is awesome It hooks you right from the start Need more Like right now!!!!
Based on the title it’s self explanatory being Destiny Fanfic. I’ve been reading this causally for a few months now and I can say that it’s really good. I used to be really into D1 and was a week 1 player even though I was a kid and would get kicked from the raid team because of it it still was one of the best games I’ve ever played. The Author of this story does a really well job of encapsulating the world of destiny and even though it’s a system fic it’s not awful. I would definitely recommend reading this or saving it for later to see what it has to offer. Also Author short capes or long ones for Hunters because personally I think the short ones are better for no chance of accidentally stepping on it…make this happen
Ok ill say it i love this story. It’s really amazing especially how the characters interact with the MC. I hope this gets another update soon because it’s a story that needs to be finished.
One of the better FF ruined by the awful release that can be months between chapters and those chapters can be waaaay to short for how long the wait was. Minor Grammar issues hardly mentionable, the story sometime skips what could have been fun to read character development. There was also no real character development he just became a person used to war immediately
please continue i don't dare to catch up without you continuing can't be heart broken
I’m really happy that I found this story! I’ve searched for one that uses the plot for character development and in this story I think you can see that. Something that I like as well, is that the mc is not bound to the storyline like in other stories but makes his own. Really great job Author![img=recommend]
Love this!! The premise is really interesting, and I love Destiny lore so it's awesome. The descriptions are very creative, and the humour is great. I look forward to reading more! :D
Didnt know a single thing about Destiny series gameplay until I started reading them. 10/10 got invested in the game and one of my favourite fic of all time!! Can't wait for the next update[img=update]
Love the synopsis genuinely and the whole idea of the ML being transported into the game as an NPC before the players arrived! Also like the name of the ML in the gamee! Added to collections lol-look forward to reading more
It's a very good novel I recommend it to anyone who likes the legendary mechanic
Honestly I thought I already wrote a review but I guess I was wrong. This is one of the lonely few destiny fanfics that I’ve actually enjoyed. Well written and enraptures you in the narrative that’s set out for you. The characters are likable and all the conversations feel real. I appreciate you writing this story author-san. Keep up the hard work!
One of the funniest books I have read in a long time. The writing is sharp and sarcastic, not at all what I was expecting but in the best way possible. Keep it up author because your character interactions are legendary. I for one am looking forward to future chapters.
very interesting Story with much Research done into the destiny lore. i myself Played Just a little Bit of destiny 2 until forsaken without caring about the Lore too much, i can still follows and enjoy this Story. also gives a Point of View in how strong everyone really should be which Just cant be shown properly in the games even non destiny Players will probably find this very interesting. thank you author for making this masterpiece
The best Destiny fanfic I‘ve found, the only limitation is the sparser-than-ideal updates, but I really enjoy the MC and I can’t wait to see how he develops with the story!!
overall I enjoy the story. when Destiny first came out. I was hyped about it but I didn't have the money to buy it myself so I had always watched others play it. I kind of broke off after or during my watching the Vault of Glass DLC raid. my interest was reabsorbed by destiny 2 much later and even played it myself but I didn't consider it good enough after getting like halfway through the story. I enjoyed the story of destiny but never had a chance to learn its lore so I might not understand everything that I'd happening except the basic since it's been years but I can still reasonably enjoy this story
one of the best of destiny that I have read, a lot of creativity and effort on the part of the author, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.One suggestion would be to update more, please.
Very well written and fun to read the first few missions left a little to be desired but after that it’s been smooth and good and most of all consistent…. What can I say I wait for new chapters as we speak I can be a bad read if I’m 81 ch in and still reading 🤣😊
Top-tier fanfic. Mc is still not OP 80+ chapters in, which is a good thing. The Mc although not OP, is skilled and talented. His cheat doesn't break world balance. His character is well-developed and likable, and his interactions with others are engaging. The only flaw in this whole book, is that author sometimes forgets to upload.
still w8ing for the players need some spoilers when r they going to appear, author-kun?
THE MC IS A HUNTER.. My Crayon Factory Is Going Bankrupt, I NEED A TITAN. slow updates, sometimes I forget this novel even exists. Everything else is good.
............................................ As a destiny player i like the story and recommend to read ( is a fic so dont expect is all canon, bat in the magiority a self insert in the lore ;)
I love it an I wish more of it faster, but don't post faster if is lowered In quality
As a vivid Destiny 2 player this is a fantastic peice of work, definitely gives a new light to seeing destiny differently!
First, I would like to say good pacing mc doesn’t immediatly get enough power to end the world. Second, good interaction with character that we don’t get to see the author does a good job bringing everyone to life. I don’t know if your planning this or not author but since it’s no longer a game he wouldn’t be bound to balancing mechanics. So what I mean to say is mc should be able to fully kit himself in exotics and cross classes. For example felwinter is a warlock that can shoulder charge.
I have only played Destiny a few times but I don't find it hard to keep up with the story. the humour is amazing
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] heavily based on destiny, will need at least some background knowledge [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I never really thought I needed a destiny ff until it appeared and even more so when the story is logical and well told. There are a few defects such as the "spoilers" that appear wildly but for being the first Destiny FF that I read, it seems incredible to me and it gives me that "beautiful" desire to wait for the next chapter. There is not much to criticize, it is Destiny, you already know how it goes and how it is innovative it allows it to be different from the classic FF like the "hp" ones that you already know the entire plot just by knowing that the mc will go to gryffindor
very descriptive and fun to read, I hadn't played the game so i didn't know how the world worked but it was well worded enough for me to understand!
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Let's Go!!!!The story writing is awesome It hooks you right from the start Need more Like right now!!!!
Based on the title it’s self explanatory being Destiny Fanfic. I’ve been reading this causally for a few months now and I can say that it’s really good. I used to be really into D1 and was a week 1 player even though I was a kid and would get kicked from the raid team because of it it still was one of the best games I’ve ever played. The Author of this story does a really well job of encapsulating the world of destiny and even though it’s a system fic it’s not awful. I would definitely recommend reading this or saving it for later to see what it has to offer. Also Author short capes or long ones for Hunters because personally I think the short ones are better for no chance of accidentally stepping on it…make this happen
Ok ill say it i love this story. It’s really amazing especially how the characters interact with the MC. I hope this gets another update soon because it’s a story that needs to be finished.