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You're the first destiny fanfic that i have seen thats both sort of long and enjoyable, and i have been getting in a lot of destiny contant as the new dlc is out soon, so when i saw your fanfic i was sucked in with how awesome it is and please if you can, can you upload more chapters.
If I could say anything about this book, is that it keeps you on the tip of your toes waiting for that juicy moment when everything clicks just perfectly. There are many ways to describe this book, but the one I feel that fits best with is the jaw dropping feeling one gets from the in depth lore, the environment, and the feeling of mystery even with prior knowledge of destiny. Then there is the magnus opus of the book which is the main character void who dives into the smallest nooks and crannies for that hidden loot that just feels like a loot driven goblin looking for their next grab. The one thing I can say is not amazing, but still good the upload schedule which is erratic at best and nothing at all at worst.
I never wrote a review before but since someone insisted I guess nobody can complain no matter how bad it sounds, first of all, I have never played nor heard of destiny before this story and naturally had to do a little dive into the wiki’s and YouTube clips for context, everything about the story is enjoyable, the gradual growth of the mc is enjoyable and the interactions and dynamics between characters is funny and gives them depth, as with all good things the only downside about this story is the long gap between updates with 1 chapter per month, I mean 12 chapters per year should be considered a crime against chumanity 💀, a truly fantastic story otherwise my review doesn’t do it justice, thank you author for introducing me to destiny hopefully I’ll also get to play it in the future 👍
Not a very descriptive guy, all I can say is that it's really good, The only actual problem, which isn't even a problem and more of a little personal annoyance, I thought that the system would play a waaaaaayyyyy bigger role than it does. The updating is random but, C'mon, we're all humans. Very good and entertaining, MWAH (Is that weird?)
I think this is really good, just wish the chapters would come out faster because the story is about to become rly interesting
The only good destiny fanfic, realistic characters, canon powers and the author pays attention the smallest details and it shows. Only complaint is update stability but at least it’s free
Best and only good destiny fic I’ve been able to find, only wish the updates would come more often
I love this story, it’s unique unlike many others on this app, and while I wish it updated a bit more frequently I do understand that people have their own circumstances in which it might hinder some updates.
this is a very good story the character are wel thought out and has a Story Line
First of all, I started reading this fic with almost 0 knowledge of destiny and like 3 hours playtime in destiny 2 and although it can be sometimes confusing a quick google is all thats needed to really enjoy the story. This book is just great all around except the update frequency but as long as its not dropped Im happy and I recommend reading it even if you dont know much or anything about destiny
Amazing destiny fic I look forward to more, the update stability is lacking but other than that its great
Loving the novel so far even if I never played the game myself I feel as if I'm there![img=recommend][img=update]
It is a very thorough fanfic that plays a part that flushes out what the vanguard was before the players in destiny 1 and it takes a very " go beyond the story" we were told and it is fairly good. Other than the update speed it has a very good flow to the story. I just hope the main protagonist gets more swords like asura or something that would be cool.
I love this story! A big thing I like about it is how canon it feels if that makes sense, even though I know it’s fanfiction there’s nothing crazy outside the destiny bounds that completely change up the story instead the Mc works within his means to become a powerful guardian himself. Also the MC taking time actually training and getting good at becoming a guardian is actually really well done it doesn’t feel like it’s taking to long nor to short the author has found the sweet spot of growing his Mc. The author also doesn’t just focus on the Mc! They also build up the other characters through interactions which is really great.
Damn good fic my only gripe is update stability, but with the chapter quality I think the trade off is absolutely worth it, on top of being a destiny fanfic which I’ve been wanting to read for quite some time.
Definitely my favourite Destiny Fanfic so far, easy to understand even for those who haven’t played the game much. Fairly easygoing majority of the time with fun characters about, with the fight scenes being well written and executed.
When will the players arrive? stopped reading at chapter 71 mainly to stock up on chapters to binge read, but also bc I'm kind of waiting until the players arrive, so I can fully immerse myself.
Best Destiny fanfic out there that’s only held down by update stability being as reliable as your drunken stepdads chances to remember to pick you up from school.
Great story with awesome character development so far. Needs more solid updates but other than that I can't complain.
This is one of my favorite stories on this app, the author updates pretty consistently and it expands on the world of destiny as a whole in a masterful way.
Loving the story so far and can’t wait for what is next. I only wish it was updated more frequently but you don’t rush art.
10/10 but I need more chapters!! Hate having to wait cause this books got me hooked
Ok ill say it i love this story. It’s really amazing especially how the characters interact with the MC. I hope this gets another update soon because it’s a story that needs to be finished.
One of the better FF ruined by the awful release that can be months between chapters and those chapters can be waaaay to short for how long the wait was. Minor Grammar issues hardly mentionable, the story sometime skips what could have been fun to read character development. There was also no real character development he just became a person used to war immediately
please continue i don't dare to catch up without you continuing can't be heart broken
I’m really happy that I found this story! I’ve searched for one that uses the plot for character development and in this story I think you can see that. Something that I like as well, is that the mc is not bound to the storyline like in other stories but makes his own. Really great job Author![img=recommend]
Love this!! The premise is really interesting, and I love Destiny lore so it's awesome. The descriptions are very creative, and the humour is great. I look forward to reading more! :D
Didnt know a single thing about Destiny series gameplay until I started reading them. 10/10 got invested in the game and one of my favourite fic of all time!! Can't wait for the next update[img=update]
I am writing this review because this story finally hit a million views!! Well, it's 1.1 million now, but that's a huge milestone. I didn't expect to hit these numbers so fast. I would like to thank all the readers for the support, the comments, and especially the reviews. You guys really keep me going, even when I don't feel like it sometimes. I know I haven't updated in 2 weeks, but life comes at me fast sometimes, and just know that I won't drop this story. I have a lot of stuff planned out but it's just hard to get going right now. Keep reading for more to come, the destiny universe is vast so let's explore it together with Void and Obsidian!!
You're the first destiny fanfic that i have seen thats both sort of long and enjoyable, and i have been getting in a lot of destiny contant as the new dlc is out soon, so when i saw your fanfic i was sucked in with how awesome it is and please if you can, can you upload more chapters.
If I could say anything about this book, is that it keeps you on the tip of your toes waiting for that juicy moment when everything clicks just perfectly. There are many ways to describe this book, but the one I feel that fits best with is the jaw dropping feeling one gets from the in depth lore, the environment, and the feeling of mystery even with prior knowledge of destiny. Then there is the magnus opus of the book which is the main character void who dives into the smallest nooks and crannies for that hidden loot that just feels like a loot driven goblin looking for their next grab. The one thing I can say is not amazing, but still good the upload schedule which is erratic at best and nothing at all at worst.
I never wrote a review before but since someone insisted I guess nobody can complain no matter how bad it sounds, first of all, I have never played nor heard of destiny before this story and naturally had to do a little dive into the wiki’s and YouTube clips for context, everything about the story is enjoyable, the gradual growth of the mc is enjoyable and the interactions and dynamics between characters is funny and gives them depth, as with all good things the only downside about this story is the long gap between updates with 1 chapter per month, I mean 12 chapters per year should be considered a crime against chumanity 💀, a truly fantastic story otherwise my review doesn’t do it justice, thank you author for introducing me to destiny hopefully I’ll also get to play it in the future 👍
Not a very descriptive guy, all I can say is that it's really good, The only actual problem, which isn't even a problem and more of a little personal annoyance, I thought that the system would play a waaaaaayyyyy bigger role than it does. The updating is random but, C'mon, we're all humans. Very good and entertaining, MWAH (Is that weird?)
I think this is really good, just wish the chapters would come out faster because the story is about to become rly interesting
The only good destiny fanfic, realistic characters, canon powers and the author pays attention the smallest details and it shows. Only complaint is update stability but at least it’s free
Best and only good destiny fic I’ve been able to find, only wish the updates would come more often
I love this story, it’s unique unlike many others on this app, and while I wish it updated a bit more frequently I do understand that people have their own circumstances in which it might hinder some updates.
this is a very good story the character are wel thought out and has a Story Line
First of all, I started reading this fic with almost 0 knowledge of destiny and like 3 hours playtime in destiny 2 and although it can be sometimes confusing a quick google is all thats needed to really enjoy the story. This book is just great all around except the update frequency but as long as its not dropped Im happy and I recommend reading it even if you dont know much or anything about destiny
Amazing destiny fic I look forward to more, the update stability is lacking but other than that its great
Loving the novel so far even if I never played the game myself I feel as if I'm there![img=recommend][img=update]
It is a very thorough fanfic that plays a part that flushes out what the vanguard was before the players in destiny 1 and it takes a very " go beyond the story" we were told and it is fairly good. Other than the update speed it has a very good flow to the story. I just hope the main protagonist gets more swords like asura or something that would be cool.
I love this story! A big thing I like about it is how canon it feels if that makes sense, even though I know it’s fanfiction there’s nothing crazy outside the destiny bounds that completely change up the story instead the Mc works within his means to become a powerful guardian himself. Also the MC taking time actually training and getting good at becoming a guardian is actually really well done it doesn’t feel like it’s taking to long nor to short the author has found the sweet spot of growing his Mc. The author also doesn’t just focus on the Mc! They also build up the other characters through interactions which is really great.
Damn good fic my only gripe is update stability, but with the chapter quality I think the trade off is absolutely worth it, on top of being a destiny fanfic which I’ve been wanting to read for quite some time.
Definitely my favourite Destiny Fanfic so far, easy to understand even for those who haven’t played the game much. Fairly easygoing majority of the time with fun characters about, with the fight scenes being well written and executed.
When will the players arrive? stopped reading at chapter 71 mainly to stock up on chapters to binge read, but also bc I'm kind of waiting until the players arrive, so I can fully immerse myself.
Best Destiny fanfic out there that’s only held down by update stability being as reliable as your drunken stepdads chances to remember to pick you up from school.
Great story with awesome character development so far. Needs more solid updates but other than that I can't complain.
This is one of my favorite stories on this app, the author updates pretty consistently and it expands on the world of destiny as a whole in a masterful way.
Loving the story so far and can’t wait for what is next. I only wish it was updated more frequently but you don’t rush art.
10/10 but I need more chapters!! Hate having to wait cause this books got me hooked
Ok ill say it i love this story. It’s really amazing especially how the characters interact with the MC. I hope this gets another update soon because it’s a story that needs to be finished.
One of the better FF ruined by the awful release that can be months between chapters and those chapters can be waaaay to short for how long the wait was. Minor Grammar issues hardly mentionable, the story sometime skips what could have been fun to read character development. There was also no real character development he just became a person used to war immediately
please continue i don't dare to catch up without you continuing can't be heart broken
I’m really happy that I found this story! I’ve searched for one that uses the plot for character development and in this story I think you can see that. Something that I like as well, is that the mc is not bound to the storyline like in other stories but makes his own. Really great job Author![img=recommend]
Love this!! The premise is really interesting, and I love Destiny lore so it's awesome. The descriptions are very creative, and the humour is great. I look forward to reading more! :D
Didnt know a single thing about Destiny series gameplay until I started reading them. 10/10 got invested in the game and one of my favourite fic of all time!! Can't wait for the next update[img=update]
I am writing this review because this story finally hit a million views!! Well, it's 1.1 million now, but that's a huge milestone. I didn't expect to hit these numbers so fast. I would like to thank all the readers for the support, the comments, and especially the reviews. You guys really keep me going, even when I don't feel like it sometimes. I know I haven't updated in 2 weeks, but life comes at me fast sometimes, and just know that I won't drop this story. I have a lot of stuff planned out but it's just hard to get going right now. Keep reading for more to come, the destiny universe is vast so let's explore it together with Void and Obsidian!!