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I was here just for the brother-sister dynamic. It had it for first, like 7 chapters, then it was left it in the dust, and I got bored.
Pretty good novel, although personally, his sister being sorry or whatever doesn't explain him going out of his way to help his sister get strong enough to kill him. I'm sure it will get a proper explanation at some point in the novel, but at around chapter 40, many of his actions to help his sister (who is destined to kill him), make no sense, and make an otherwise smart mc seem dumb. Overall, good novel.
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Ok? Not too bad but not too good either but it can be improved with time. Update is quite stable but sometimes its not due to various reason reason that are reasonable. The novel overall is good.
sorry but I'll stop at chapter 24, I just don't like reading novels where the Mc who in theory should be the demon king, taking such cowardly actions as bringing those people who will be his enemies to his side, he had a good story, but this "family" "of 50 people" thing spoiled my experience, it would be more fun for me to be feared than loved...
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An excellent narrative comprised of many elements of fantasy, drama, romance, and tragedy. There are many ideas that are ensured to grant many readers retention-rate and I would be foolish enough to say that this story is in anyway vague. The concept of villains is exhibited and executed really well in this field, although the perspective may not be of my flavor, it is bound to gather other readers. The character interactions within the story seem naturally constructed and written, the setting seems so distinct and breathable, and the general atompshere that this novel shares is otherworldly. I urge you to check this novel out and give it a try before judging things too harshly. Keep it up, Author. A fantastic read in my view.
I like this book. Found the name interesting > read synopsis > like plot > and not an overly complicated writing style > cool scenes and dialogue > post review
Since I had never heard of the concept of pairing up two individuals from such different worlds, I think it was a fine story. I also found it interesting that the male main character didn't indicate that he was also like the female character. This story doesn't start off by giving the main characters a ton of authority, which I thought was a pleasant change from previous books. It enables things to accumulate.
My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra Arroyo Lane, Albuquerque, New Mexico, 87104. This is my confession. If you're watching this tape, I'm probably dead– murdered by my brother-in-law, Hank Schrader. Hank has been building a meth empire for over a year now, and using me as his chemist. Shortly after my 50th birthday, he asked that I use my chemistry knowledge to cook methamphetamine, which he would then sell using connections that he made through his career with the DEA. I was... astounded. I... I always thought Hank was a very moral man, and I was particularly vulnerable at the time – something he knew and took advantage of. I was reeling from a cancer diagnosis that was poised to bankrupt my family. Hank took me in on a ride-along and showed me just how much money even a small meth operation could make. And I was weak. I didn't want my family to go into financial ruin, so I agreed. Hank had a partner, a businessman named Gustavo Fring. Hank sold me into servitude to
great novel so far. I hope the author keeps the line of reasoning and follows the proposed theme until the end of the novel. I believe the work has great potential.
I will be honest, after Lysander becomes a women I lost interest. There was no need for this 'plot' twist. It adds no value to the story.
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Review at Chapter 48: This is a great novel that I have enjoyed greatly throughout my entire time reading it. The writing quality is fantastic and pacing is good. However, I almost dropped it at chapter 44 that added a new twist to the character but decided to keep reading for a bit longer to see if the twist is sorted since I love the book so much. (Book is also missing gender bender tag.) Keep up the great work author!
I was genuinely disappointed when I clicked next and there was no more. I'm in love with this story and I usually don't read ML books. I'm also partially in love with ML. I love how your writing style perfectly shows his psyche without being too obvious about it, helps me relate and understand his motives and desires more. As well as forcing me to emotionally invest in the well being of a fictional character for the first time in a while, thanks... I think. 😅
Honestly a great story, quite a different take on these authors being reincarnated into their own books and it was honestly a story that genuinely hooked me in and had my 100% attention only thing I dislike is that MC, He complains about being weak but tries to make his enemies stronger, and when asked *spoiler* for what skill and what he wanted it for he just says to protect his family instead of a growth booster or something.. Anyways apart from that keep it up author, loving the story
Its a nice novel but it not the villain people are expecting its like a anti-hero got Stockholm syndrome? Not really sure how else to describe it but its a good novel y'all should check it out as long as you are not here for a evil MC.
Book is interesting and heading in a cool direction. It is still relativley new but shows potential, keep up the good work author Dan I am excited to continue reading.
nothing more to say the. Novel will say for it self. the plot is in point no chapters that are useless(fillers). if you like villan MC like me and are bored to read the same boring stuff this is for you
Writing Quality was very impressive, the only fault I have with this story is it started off very quickly, MC was stabbed and fully reincarnated in 1 chapter with not much background, other than that amazing story, KEEP IT UP MY BESTO FRIENDO!
This book is soo amazing! I love it soo much. The plot is amazing, characters, world I love it all! It’s soo good I just want to keep reading it forever. Honestly it deserves the five stars! Hope it updates soon!
Good novel, friendly writing style, perfect grammar, and this novel has potential I am looking forward to booking in the future....................................
The story is very well written and I totally recommend reading it! Though, while I don't believe that a baby would remember being in a womb, it's very creative and unique!
This is a cool story, the idea is pretty good, though I get confused sometimes when reading, some things weren't too clear. But overall it's very interesting, I couldn't really stop reading since i started. Thanking the author for such a good story.
I love reading this novel, especially the mc, he’s my favorite, a very good novel author[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow, okay, i was taken by surprise, it is true that the story is a little hurried, but thats all for the better since it keeps the reader’s attention. Idk why the male kept acting so dumb like a baby for ages and if they can hear each other’s thoughts, wouldnt she be still be able to hear his thoughts? Well, i think i’ll keep reading.
I like it, but it feels way too inconsistent. It feels like the author had an idea of what the novel would be, but then he completely changed it. Like, why would Eve shower him with so much love if she was going to betray him? It just doesn’t make much sense to me.
Well, first of all the ideas of having a twin transmigration is all good and new and amazing. Like I don't have more words for it. First ML leading novel and I am liking it. Well, whoever is reading my review, to them all, try reading it guys..if u are bored with all that same stuff and want something fresh. Novel recommended..[img=recommend] You won't regret it..
First of all, I really like the story and I really hope the MC becomes a powerhouse where even her sister can't stop. That's up to the author anyways. The general story is good but I do not like all the characters and some of the info given out by the author is kind of like spoilers. Some sequences are not well connected but still understandable. That's the negative. The positives are that this book is executing the plot well. The plot seems to be top notch and so far up to 10 chapters it felt interesting and every end of each chapter felt like a cliffhanger to keep me absorbed. I like addictive novels and this is one of them.
This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.
I was here just for the brother-sister dynamic. It had it for first, like 7 chapters, then it was left it in the dust, and I got bored.
Pretty good novel, although personally, his sister being sorry or whatever doesn't explain him going out of his way to help his sister get strong enough to kill him. I'm sure it will get a proper explanation at some point in the novel, but at around chapter 40, many of his actions to help his sister (who is destined to kill him), make no sense, and make an otherwise smart mc seem dumb. Overall, good novel.
Spoiler de révélation Ok? Not too bad but not too good either but it can be improved with time. Update is quite stable but sometimes its not due to various reason reason that are reasonable. The novel overall is good.
sorry but I'll stop at chapter 24, I just don't like reading novels where the Mc who in theory should be the demon king, taking such cowardly actions as bringing those people who will be his enemies to his side, he had a good story, but this "family" "of 50 people" thing spoiled my experience, it would be more fun for me to be feared than loved...
Spoiler de révélation An excellent narrative comprised of many elements of fantasy, drama, romance, and tragedy. There are many ideas that are ensured to grant many readers retention-rate and I would be foolish enough to say that this story is in anyway vague. The concept of villains is exhibited and executed really well in this field, although the perspective may not be of my flavor, it is bound to gather other readers. The character interactions within the story seem naturally constructed and written, the setting seems so distinct and breathable, and the general atompshere that this novel shares is otherworldly. I urge you to check this novel out and give it a try before judging things too harshly. Keep it up, Author. A fantastic read in my view.
I like this book. Found the name interesting > read synopsis > like plot > and not an overly complicated writing style > cool scenes and dialogue > post review
Since I had never heard of the concept of pairing up two individuals from such different worlds, I think it was a fine story. I also found it interesting that the male main character didn't indicate that he was also like the female character. This story doesn't start off by giving the main characters a ton of authority, which I thought was a pleasant change from previous books. It enables things to accumulate.
My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra Arroyo Lane, Albuquerque, New Mexico, 87104. This is my confession. If you're watching this tape, I'm probably dead– murdered by my brother-in-law, Hank Schrader. Hank has been building a meth empire for over a year now, and using me as his chemist. Shortly after my 50th birthday, he asked that I use my chemistry knowledge to cook methamphetamine, which he would then sell using connections that he made through his career with the DEA. I was... astounded. I... I always thought Hank was a very moral man, and I was particularly vulnerable at the time – something he knew and took advantage of. I was reeling from a cancer diagnosis that was poised to bankrupt my family. Hank took me in on a ride-along and showed me just how much money even a small meth operation could make. And I was weak. I didn't want my family to go into financial ruin, so I agreed. Hank had a partner, a businessman named Gustavo Fring. Hank sold me into servitude to
great novel so far. I hope the author keeps the line of reasoning and follows the proposed theme until the end of the novel. I believe the work has great potential.
I will be honest, after Lysander becomes a women I lost interest. There was no need for this 'plot' twist. It adds no value to the story.
Spoiler de révélation Review at Chapter 48: This is a great novel that I have enjoyed greatly throughout my entire time reading it. The writing quality is fantastic and pacing is good. However, I almost dropped it at chapter 44 that added a new twist to the character but decided to keep reading for a bit longer to see if the twist is sorted since I love the book so much. (Book is also missing gender bender tag.) Keep up the great work author!
I was genuinely disappointed when I clicked next and there was no more. I'm in love with this story and I usually don't read ML books. I'm also partially in love with ML. I love how your writing style perfectly shows his psyche without being too obvious about it, helps me relate and understand his motives and desires more. As well as forcing me to emotionally invest in the well being of a fictional character for the first time in a while, thanks... I think. 😅
Honestly a great story, quite a different take on these authors being reincarnated into their own books and it was honestly a story that genuinely hooked me in and had my 100% attention only thing I dislike is that MC, He complains about being weak but tries to make his enemies stronger, and when asked *spoiler* for what skill and what he wanted it for he just says to protect his family instead of a growth booster or something.. Anyways apart from that keep it up author, loving the story
Its a nice novel but it not the villain people are expecting its like a anti-hero got Stockholm syndrome? Not really sure how else to describe it but its a good novel y'all should check it out as long as you are not here for a evil MC.
Book is interesting and heading in a cool direction. It is still relativley new but shows potential, keep up the good work author Dan I am excited to continue reading.
nothing more to say the. Novel will say for it self. the plot is in point no chapters that are useless(fillers). if you like villan MC like me and are bored to read the same boring stuff this is for you
Writing Quality was very impressive, the only fault I have with this story is it started off very quickly, MC was stabbed and fully reincarnated in 1 chapter with not much background, other than that amazing story, KEEP IT UP MY BESTO FRIENDO!
This book is soo amazing! I love it soo much. The plot is amazing, characters, world I love it all! It’s soo good I just want to keep reading it forever. Honestly it deserves the five stars! Hope it updates soon!
Good novel, friendly writing style, perfect grammar, and this novel has potential I am looking forward to booking in the future....................................
The story is very well written and I totally recommend reading it! Though, while I don't believe that a baby would remember being in a womb, it's very creative and unique!
This is a cool story, the idea is pretty good, though I get confused sometimes when reading, some things weren't too clear. But overall it's very interesting, I couldn't really stop reading since i started. Thanking the author for such a good story.
I love reading this novel, especially the mc, he’s my favorite, a very good novel author[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow, okay, i was taken by surprise, it is true that the story is a little hurried, but thats all for the better since it keeps the reader’s attention. Idk why the male kept acting so dumb like a baby for ages and if they can hear each other’s thoughts, wouldnt she be still be able to hear his thoughts? Well, i think i’ll keep reading.
I like it, but it feels way too inconsistent. It feels like the author had an idea of what the novel would be, but then he completely changed it. Like, why would Eve shower him with so much love if she was going to betray him? It just doesn’t make much sense to me.
Well, first of all the ideas of having a twin transmigration is all good and new and amazing. Like I don't have more words for it. First ML leading novel and I am liking it. Well, whoever is reading my review, to them all, try reading it guys..if u are bored with all that same stuff and want something fresh. Novel recommended..[img=recommend] You won't regret it..
First of all, I really like the story and I really hope the MC becomes a powerhouse where even her sister can't stop. That's up to the author anyways. The general story is good but I do not like all the characters and some of the info given out by the author is kind of like spoilers. Some sequences are not well connected but still understandable. That's the negative. The positives are that this book is executing the plot well. The plot seems to be top notch and so far up to 10 chapters it felt interesting and every end of each chapter felt like a cliffhanger to keep me absorbed. I like addictive novels and this is one of them.
This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.