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Obviously, it is a non-harem unless there is a twist, the novel has a good release rate and the writing quality is just okay but don't want those author's note in the exposition otherwise everything else is good. I am curious about how the character will turn out to be and suggest author nim to upload more.
I can't do much of a review because of the low chapter BUT I will say that the character here has so much potential 😉 I hope in the future chapter the author-san will explain the world's power system and characters background and origin as we are currently at chapter *5 And I hope the author will avoid some cringe situation in the future if you can't just go with the flow .«This a noharem novel for those who might asked » PS sorry for the bad English
This novel has much potential. And i do like that it is a "nonharem", i'm personally not a big fan of those. Good plot, good foreshadowing, i couldn't really concentrate much because of the author's notes in between the chapter paragraphs, but overall solid story. Good job Author!
Obviously, it is a non-harem unless there is a twist, the novel has a good release rate and the writing quality is just okay but don't want those author's note in the exposition otherwise everything else is good. I am curious about how the character will turn out to be and suggest author nim to upload more.
I can't do much of a review because of the low chapter BUT I will say that the character here has so much potential 😉 I hope in the future chapter the author-san will explain the world's power system and characters background and origin as we are currently at chapter *5 And I hope the author will avoid some cringe situation in the future if you can't just go with the flow .«This a noharem novel for those who might asked » PS sorry for the bad English
This novel has much potential. And i do like that it is a "nonharem", i'm personally not a big fan of those. Good plot, good foreshadowing, i couldn't really concentrate much because of the author's notes in between the chapter paragraphs, but overall solid story. Good job Author!