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Alancaster

The Present Simple Time somehow disturbs the flow of reading. It's strange to read as if the author is telling me what to do, and that might make some readers abandon the book. The emotions were there and she managed to make me feel them, I felt the tension and pity for the heroine. The quality of book itself is well written but she could break up the paragraphs and some chapters were too long to read. I was getting bored. The story is interesting and not as repulsive as the rest of the books. She makes the heroine suffer and giving her a sad past, automatically forces me to sympathise with her. But some parts lacked description and some unpleasant moments were described too much. The characters could be worked on a bit more. But I liked the book, it makes you empathise when you read it. The plot is unique and fresh too.

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Purple_Fantasies74

Wow cool soulmates make a better end, I really recommend this book to everyone because this is the best mafia novel I have ever read but I have not read far more I will try and read this book. Also, I really appreciate your time writting good luck.

2yr
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Abigail_Okoi_Obuli

This story starts off intriguing and I like that. The writing style is good, and the overall plot is interesting. I'm not into these types of romances, but certainly this is easy to recommend. I enjoyed this, though it wasn't my usual taste.

2yr
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ANUPAM_DEBNATH

very good novel.i am very impressed to read this story

2yr
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KavMan

Hi. To be honest, i am never into romance or female leads and never thought i would ever be. But there's something different about this book and now it has successfully broken my record. Totally recommended

2yr
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Author_Bright

Whilst the rating, this book worth a complete five star. Honestly speaking I anticipate the upcoming drama and twist In this book. The plot is a nice one. Thumps up author.

2yr
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qurat_ul_ain4

A very nice start to get someone hook up to your story! Really loved the character of Ezra.. I would like you to suggest to explain the surroundings too, It would help the readers to indulge in the scene. Very well done! Recommended!

2yr
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Ariel_x

A very intriguing read, only a few chapters so far but goodness, I was hooked at a glance! The blend of the chapters and characters made it hard for me to shift my gaze away. The interaction between Ezra— I mean, Mr. Knight and Stella, so sweet!

2yr
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Zenick

Nice book you got here. I love the characters and the theme..................................................... Good job author keep it up.

2yr
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TANA_ELIS

The synopsis is totally captivating, I got drawn into this awesome world of superb writing skills from an amazing author, I love the leads and other characters as well.

2yr
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Pixie_K1ng

This is a beautiful write up, you can feel the emotions spilling from every word. the author is truly talented. Just the sypnosis alone sucks you in. 🤩🤩.

2yr
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Sophia_Yomere

Am already in love with this book, I like how the story is going and the characterization, it all just reached my expectations unexpectedly, I simply love this book.

2yr
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Missy_Castillo

An intriguing plot for a romance genre, the author's impeccable writing had successfully made me feel the fl's emotions, the trauma, the fear and anxiety. The antagonists' character traits were written distinctly that you can't hold yourself back but hold grudges against fictional characters. This is a very great book, highly recommended! 🤗

2yr
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Amzy_Bella

this novel was recommended to me and I'm not disappointed that I got to read it. it's an interesting novel that hooks you to the point. great work author

2yr
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Rin_Nurnia

Hello and an honest review from me. What a great way to start your story because it makes me intrigued to know what's actually happened to both main leads, will added this in my collection so keep up the good work author✨

2yr
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GlamDoll161

I can't explain in words how wonderful this book is. The pain the characters hearts were beautifully described. The suspense and thrill is included in every chapter. Every character has a mysterious aura about them. And the romance is top notch. I just can't put the book down.

2yr
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little_starr

The story is good. Author had written FL's past painful memories in a detailed manner. I can see FL and ML both are broken because of their past experience. i really enjoying reading this book All the best dear author

2yr
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Tanjima

I started reading the book.......Your writing is really really great🌟🌟🌟 I liked it very much🤗.........I wish you all the best...Author😇❤️

2yr
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Sage_Tranquil

Synopsis is really cool ! Romance plot is also very cool ! I fell in love with the concept of this novel at first glance. Don't drop it ! Author, keep writing in the the future.

2yr
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Elona_Alone

The synopsis alone is already intriguing . From the first chapter, I already in love with the novel . The writer have a good way of putting words in such a way that we picture who's talking . This novel is a must read

2yr
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LorettaKAuthor

Awe! The prologue had me crying for him. So broken and so beautiful. Wonderful job. I can't wait to read more. kudos for a great story start.

2yr
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Piyashere

There are very unique characters in this story. The romance you gave also touched my heart. I look forward to the continuation of your story

2yr
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Aly_Belliveed

i like the way story flows especially when there are mysteries that have yet to be unfold. Ezra is a misunderstood man that i understood why he seems so broken and so untrusting. and I know Stella can help him! looking forward for more updates soon~

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Dadevilslastcry

TBH I'm not into Romance but this one awaken my interest and I'd like to follow this story. The writer delivers the thought so right that it'll make you want to read more. Trust me.

2yr
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Sirius459

hmmmm.... many CEO story I've read but this work? it feels different from many ceo stories I read. The story feels refreshing and how the author makes relationship with every character was very good.

2yr
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KCZ_Leo

I think the book cover you made is excellent, and I also think the story's intriguing title and well-written chapters make the book appealing overall. I hope you'll continue writing novels. Enjoy your amazing day!

2yr
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imagineTishaD

The Language of the story is very well written with perfect tense and grammar. I really liked how smooth the book feel while reading. Not to mention that the book has Amazing leads 👌

2yr
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moved_44

So far this book is a wonderful one. The plot is really amazing and the first chapters captured my attention. I must say the Author really did well.

2yr
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MysteroidMan

So I was recommended to read this by my favorite author rizz and Im really glad that I did because even though I'm not into angst and romance this book seems to break the record and finally get me in. Your a really great storyteller.

2yr
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Melsdar
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I read several chapters of this book. the story is refreshing, i love the romance you create in this story. I also like your writing style as well as the characters you create. you also upload this story stably

2yr
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Alancaster

The Present Simple Time somehow disturbs the flow of reading. It's strange to read as if the author is telling me what to do, and that might make some readers abandon the book. The emotions were there and she managed to make me feel them, I felt the tension and pity for the heroine. The quality of book itself is well written but she could break up the paragraphs and some chapters were too long to read. I was getting bored. The story is interesting and not as repulsive as the rest of the books. She makes the heroine suffer and giving her a sad past, automatically forces me to sympathise with her. But some parts lacked description and some unpleasant moments were described too much. The characters could be worked on a bit more. But I liked the book, it makes you empathise when you read it. The plot is unique and fresh too.

Spoiler de révélation
1yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Purple_Fantasies74

Wow cool soulmates make a better end, I really recommend this book to everyone because this is the best mafia novel I have ever read but I have not read far more I will try and read this book. Also, I really appreciate your time writting good luck.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Abigail_Okoi_Obuli

This story starts off intriguing and I like that. The writing style is good, and the overall plot is interesting. I'm not into these types of romances, but certainly this is easy to recommend. I enjoyed this, though it wasn't my usual taste.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
ANUPAM_DEBNATH

very good novel.i am very impressed to read this story

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
KavMan

Hi. To be honest, i am never into romance or female leads and never thought i would ever be. But there's something different about this book and now it has successfully broken my record. Totally recommended

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Author_Bright

Whilst the rating, this book worth a complete five star. Honestly speaking I anticipate the upcoming drama and twist In this book. The plot is a nice one. Thumps up author.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
qurat_ul_ain4

A very nice start to get someone hook up to your story! Really loved the character of Ezra.. I would like you to suggest to explain the surroundings too, It would help the readers to indulge in the scene. Very well done! Recommended!

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Ariel_x

A very intriguing read, only a few chapters so far but goodness, I was hooked at a glance! The blend of the chapters and characters made it hard for me to shift my gaze away. The interaction between Ezra— I mean, Mr. Knight and Stella, so sweet!

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Zenick

Nice book you got here. I love the characters and the theme..................................................... Good job author keep it up.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
TANA_ELIS

The synopsis is totally captivating, I got drawn into this awesome world of superb writing skills from an amazing author, I love the leads and other characters as well.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Pixie_K1ng

This is a beautiful write up, you can feel the emotions spilling from every word. the author is truly talented. Just the sypnosis alone sucks you in. 🤩🤩.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Sophia_Yomere

Am already in love with this book, I like how the story is going and the characterization, it all just reached my expectations unexpectedly, I simply love this book.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Missy_Castillo

An intriguing plot for a romance genre, the author's impeccable writing had successfully made me feel the fl's emotions, the trauma, the fear and anxiety. The antagonists' character traits were written distinctly that you can't hold yourself back but hold grudges against fictional characters. This is a very great book, highly recommended! 🤗

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Amzy_Bella

this novel was recommended to me and I'm not disappointed that I got to read it. it's an interesting novel that hooks you to the point. great work author

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Rin_Nurnia

Hello and an honest review from me. What a great way to start your story because it makes me intrigued to know what's actually happened to both main leads, will added this in my collection so keep up the good work author✨

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
GlamDoll161

I can't explain in words how wonderful this book is. The pain the characters hearts were beautifully described. The suspense and thrill is included in every chapter. Every character has a mysterious aura about them. And the romance is top notch. I just can't put the book down.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
little_starr

The story is good. Author had written FL's past painful memories in a detailed manner. I can see FL and ML both are broken because of their past experience. i really enjoying reading this book All the best dear author

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Tanjima

I started reading the book.......Your writing is really really great🌟🌟🌟 I liked it very much🤗.........I wish you all the best...Author😇❤️

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Sage_Tranquil

Synopsis is really cool ! Romance plot is also very cool ! I fell in love with the concept of this novel at first glance. Don't drop it ! Author, keep writing in the the future.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Elona_Alone

The synopsis alone is already intriguing . From the first chapter, I already in love with the novel . The writer have a good way of putting words in such a way that we picture who's talking . This novel is a must read

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
LorettaKAuthor

Awe! The prologue had me crying for him. So broken and so beautiful. Wonderful job. I can't wait to read more. kudos for a great story start.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Piyashere

There are very unique characters in this story. The romance you gave also touched my heart. I look forward to the continuation of your story

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Aly_Belliveed

i like the way story flows especially when there are mysteries that have yet to be unfold. Ezra is a misunderstood man that i understood why he seems so broken and so untrusting. and I know Stella can help him! looking forward for more updates soon~

img
2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Dadevilslastcry

TBH I'm not into Romance but this one awaken my interest and I'd like to follow this story. The writer delivers the thought so right that it'll make you want to read more. Trust me.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Sirius459

hmmmm.... many CEO story I've read but this work? it feels different from many ceo stories I read. The story feels refreshing and how the author makes relationship with every character was very good.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
KCZ_Leo

I think the book cover you made is excellent, and I also think the story's intriguing title and well-written chapters make the book appealing overall. I hope you'll continue writing novels. Enjoy your amazing day!

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
imagineTishaD

The Language of the story is very well written with perfect tense and grammar. I really liked how smooth the book feel while reading. Not to mention that the book has Amazing leads 👌

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
moved_44

So far this book is a wonderful one. The plot is really amazing and the first chapters captured my attention. I must say the Author really did well.

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
MysteroidMan

So I was recommended to read this by my favorite author rizz and Im really glad that I did because even though I'm not into angst and romance this book seems to break the record and finally get me in. Your a really great storyteller.

2yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Melsdar
LV 10 Badge

I read several chapters of this book. the story is refreshing, i love the romance you create in this story. I also like your writing style as well as the characters you create. you also upload this story stably

2yr
Voir 0 Réponses
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