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Love this story of the strong FL. The relationship between the ML and the FL is a true equal relationship in marriage where they are both partners in life.
It is so poorly edited that it's distracting. The translator is just lazy. Trying to understand the pronouns and who's who is giving me an headache. Gosh!
Written like a baby book: "There was a dog. The dog was named Spot. Spot liked to run." Names mixed up, too.
very interesting,if you are the type that get bored easily after reading a few chapters,then this story is for,bcs you won't know how you finished it.
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the plot and characters are good but the writing is mehhh for me. not so enjoyable to read. the used of correct and suitable words is weak. Pls search the correct terms bfore write/translate. that are what i feel when i read from chapter 1-10. thank you. mind my english, not my first language.
Could have been a good read. Unfortunately it’s a lazily edited MTL, so I couldn’t get into it. If I have to stop and re-read a sentence 3x just so I can figure out what it’s supposed to mean then I’m not going to be immersed in the story. I’ve honestly had enough with machine translations. Please hire real translators and editors WebNovel.
apart from when reading "Li Yu and his sister" where it should be "Li Yu and her brother", everything else is fine. [img=recommend]
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Love this kind of stories, rebirth sounds cliche and sometimes redundant but I still love it. Reading something like this with a strong heroine makes it more fun. Can't wait for this to be pick up and start realeasing new chapters. Vote vote🤗🤗🤗 🥰🥰🥰
Can not wait for more chapters. Love the stronge FL and her relationnship with her family. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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I really enjoyed this book so far . The story is interesting. The story moves at a good pace and the characters are relatable. So far so good
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This is novel is of a great quality in its genre. The female lead is very independent but also listens others, she doesn't give me any second hand embarrassment. And the male lead is a reasonable man. The flow of the story is good and it keeps on moving. I liked this story because the stressful situations tended to be wrapped up quickly without making me live in anxiety. I also liked the altruistic character of the female lead without her being Mary Sue. Would recommend this to everyone.
I'm not bored, the story is good so far with some interesting characters, but because its a sample story in all fairness I cannot give it full points. Plus its early yet, in addition I think the translator/s seem to have challenges using their pronouns especially when it came to the FL sections in the story by interchanging it with he and she and related pronouns (his, himself etc, her, herself). In a case like this edit or grammar checks needs to be done. I do like the FL, however she and her close family members aka aunt etc. really made me feel inadequate as they did so much stuff in 24 hours, makes us readers look lazy. I cannot say much about the Ml as I believe he was just introduced to the story. I sincerely hopes the story gets picked and will have no trouble sending my energy stones to this one.
If a foodie is reading this book they Will Not Be Disapointed, If a regular person is looking for a fun read , they will be contented. Add a foodie and avid reader and you gwt a great novel to enjoy.
the story so good .except for a few confusions with the names and things. otherwise it's good I wonder if anyone know the raw name of the novel?
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Is it completed or there are any side stories left? Overall, i quite like it, except isn't the ending of 2nd Prince too simple? Anyway, I'm done with this ooooooooneeeeee. On to the next. Which book/novel should i read next? Those completed ones would be better.
Love this story of the strong FL. The relationship between the ML and the FL is a true equal relationship in marriage where they are both partners in life.
It is so poorly edited that it's distracting. The translator is just lazy. Trying to understand the pronouns and who's who is giving me an headache. Gosh!
Written like a baby book: "There was a dog. The dog was named Spot. Spot liked to run." Names mixed up, too.
very interesting,if you are the type that get bored easily after reading a few chapters,then this story is for,bcs you won't know how you finished it.
Spoiler de révélation the plot and characters are good but the writing is mehhh for me. not so enjoyable to read. the used of correct and suitable words is weak. Pls search the correct terms bfore write/translate. that are what i feel when i read from chapter 1-10. thank you. mind my english, not my first language.
Could have been a good read. Unfortunately it’s a lazily edited MTL, so I couldn’t get into it. If I have to stop and re-read a sentence 3x just so I can figure out what it’s supposed to mean then I’m not going to be immersed in the story. I’ve honestly had enough with machine translations. Please hire real translators and editors WebNovel.
apart from when reading "Li Yu and his sister" where it should be "Li Yu and her brother", everything else is fine. [img=recommend]
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Love this kind of stories, rebirth sounds cliche and sometimes redundant but I still love it. Reading something like this with a strong heroine makes it more fun. Can't wait for this to be pick up and start realeasing new chapters. Vote vote🤗🤗🤗 🥰🥰🥰
Can not wait for more chapters. Love the stronge FL and her relationnship with her family. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
She is delightful nd smart. She plans ahead and carries out her plans. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]Cant wait to see how she rules the world!!!!!!
I really enjoyed this book so far . The story is interesting. The story moves at a good pace and the characters are relatable. So far so good
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This is novel is of a great quality in its genre. The female lead is very independent but also listens others, she doesn't give me any second hand embarrassment. And the male lead is a reasonable man. The flow of the story is good and it keeps on moving. I liked this story because the stressful situations tended to be wrapped up quickly without making me live in anxiety. I also liked the altruistic character of the female lead without her being Mary Sue. Would recommend this to everyone.
I'm not bored, the story is good so far with some interesting characters, but because its a sample story in all fairness I cannot give it full points. Plus its early yet, in addition I think the translator/s seem to have challenges using their pronouns especially when it came to the FL sections in the story by interchanging it with he and she and related pronouns (his, himself etc, her, herself). In a case like this edit or grammar checks needs to be done. I do like the FL, however she and her close family members aka aunt etc. really made me feel inadequate as they did so much stuff in 24 hours, makes us readers look lazy. I cannot say much about the Ml as I believe he was just introduced to the story. I sincerely hopes the story gets picked and will have no trouble sending my energy stones to this one.
If a foodie is reading this book they Will Not Be Disapointed, If a regular person is looking for a fun read , they will be contented. Add a foodie and avid reader and you gwt a great novel to enjoy.
the story so good .except for a few confusions with the names and things. otherwise it's good I wonder if anyone know the raw name of the novel?
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Is it completed or there are any side stories left? Overall, i quite like it, except isn't the ending of 2nd Prince too simple? Anyway, I'm done with this ooooooooneeeeee. On to the next. Which book/novel should i read next? Those completed ones would be better.