Isekaied in RWBY

LV 6

TFH

... you know... if you wrote in your synopsys of your novel that mc goes to RWBY with NOTHING BUT his knowledge about the plot... but 5 chapters in he has... cursed energy from jujutsu kaisen. Mana from re: zero, haki from one piece, touki from DxD and more... are you F serious?

LV 13

WillowsEcho

I don’t have proper words for how boring and bad this is, 90% of it is just describing things, 8% of MC’s thoughts, and 2% of uninteresting dialogue. An example of what not to do.

LV 4

omnigamergt

honestly im not one to do reviews let alone rate badly but this has to be the worst title ive ever seen ................................................

LV 2

Dragon_FRUITs

All I got to say, the narration is boring. although the concept was fine, and the plot is bland, no character introduction, but self development. don't know it is because I like fast pace. so not for people like me. keep up the good work and improve. all the best.

LV 1

PrinceOfThisWorld

Want a writing tip? Choose ONE anime power system, choose an environment conducive to first arc development, focus on plot development. Your first Gamer story is a thousand times better than this one. Doing this was a huge waste of time and energy, no one likes to read about someone capable of doing anything just by imagining it. Be happy.

LV 3

Phase_MorningStar

I Really Like The FF Although The MC Has A Lot Of Different Power System He Isn't Immediately Op He Is Still Weak Because He Doesn't Have Anyone To Teach Him And He Knows That And He Needs To Research From The Beginning Without Any Guide

LV 13

KodiakGod

you saying that he went to rwby with nothing was a lie. He obviously went with a body that can use tons of different animes energies with the power of bulls#it. The way he unlocked mana was just circulating it though his body or to the 'gate', how does he even know it really exists and how to do it, all he had was a theory, that doesn't mean it should work.

LV 1

TIFOEL

Я очень не доволен. Прочитал до момента попытки Алхимии... УДАЧНОЙ попытки алхимии! И на этом моменте я решил сдаться. Это явно не моя чашка чая. Не хочу читать про героя, который по ПАМЯТИ нарисовал круг и который работал... почему-то! Очень странно. Я был в порядке с проклятой энергией... и попытками героя почувствовать магию. Просто потому что магия в этом аниме есть из канона. Как и проклятая энергия у гримм. Но алхимия... и работает!? Не понятно что с аурой... в общем много странностей и плюс к плохому написанию и сумбурности я ставлю плохие баллы и гневный комментарий.

LV 1

adrian_mena

Pesima historia, sus otros FF estan mucho mejor desarrolados que este, y el sistema de energias es ridiculo aprendio 5 tipos de energias diferentes de Mundos/Realidades diferentes solo por que si, honestamente para ser una reescritura de su otro FF RWBY isekai es muy lamentable

LV 2

GaZe_Zero

I mean it’s good in the sense that it has no grammar issues, updates regularly, and stuff. 2 Main issues is that most of it is actually just the thoughts of the mc and the rest is him getting broken power like cursed energy in the 2nd chapter, makes the synopsis misleading

LV 2

CephJester

It's entertaining. Don't care about powers or anything, because it's entertaining to read.... Look too far into it, and you're just looking for a reason to criticize. Anywho-, the writing quality is pretty good, with only a few grammar errors across a few chapters. The updates seem pretty good, especially with how hectic these past few months have been across the globe. Story development has been reasonably paced, and I easily spent three hours reading. The character design seems to match with how I remember some of the characters and their brief flashback scenes, and our protagonist is entertaining to follow along in the story. And the world background is pretty good with mentions of the cities, countries, and where he's going, alongside the environment.

LV 4

Magos_Dominus_8298

Absolutly horrenderous, The entire novel feels like cheap copy-paste of wiki pages that are in „top 10 best anime powers”. The description is plain lie, introduction of powers feels like „it works because I refuse to acknowledge logic and lore behind it”. Characters besides MC (who feels like a cheap formula of„typical shounen protagonist traits” combined) are very plain and one sided. The shameless „lore writing” cannot be even called one as Author took concepts from other works and mismashed them together without even trying to keep some sort of originality. The Main Protagnist as I have stated before is just typical bland and uninteresting shonen protagonist, his entire thought process and self awarness can put those typical Young masters to shame! Protagonist makes decisions not based on his experience or backstory but because „he can”, I doubt the Author meant for the Protagonist to be ”your typical rightous sect leader who will sacrifice everything for greater good” but honestly that’s how Hero feels like especialy during first 9~10 chapters. In summary, this sort of quality is just an insult to readers and the amount of cringe and Shame it has brought to my soul by the „ability theft” will require prolonged therapy

LV 13

Bunkerfreak_HD

Have to say, this is one the best ff's that i read so far and i rlly like the concept of mixing the powers of diffrent anime and mangas but not making it op.

LV 3

Zenron

Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................

LV 4

Fgs_Chrome

Honestly, To much freaking details and explanations. like seriously. I'm glad you know your stuff and all but making entire chapters basically info dump kills the story fast. it's fine to give a brief explanation but don't use the entire freaking chapter. The story had an interesting concept and was looking forward to reading it but not so much anymore. only like 5 chaps at most and I'm already dropping it because I hate info dumps. If you don't mind that kind of thing then this might be a good story for you. Heck I don't even mind slow building stories as long as it's entertaining and doesn't have mile long explanations. That's why I'm giving a lot a 3 because I neither like nor hate this story other than the fact I'm dropping it. My suggestion to you author is to not put to much information and explanations in the chapters. If we are curious about something, then we can look it up to find out ourselves. Not hating on ya but just giving some advice. I'm a writer to though I don't post stories online because I don't want to have to get a schedule to upload chaps. Anyways, good luck and enjoy.

LV 14

Destroyer404

Bruh, the narrating is boring, sorry but I am just gonna state facts here not some BStery. There is no to a little story development, most of it is just information about curse energy and other s"it and the mc is still weak af I mean cmon you have what? Curse Energy, Senjutsu and Magic. MAGIC! the thing the so called dumb gods from rwby remove and "he has" magic but still extremely weak and no im not complaining about him being scared thats a fact no matter what. Anyone who gets summoned to another world will lead people to be scared for their life.

LV 1

Thehighesthol1

this one story is quite messy, hey writers, why don't you continue the Fanfiction chat group, I think it's better and it's a shame the story fell suddenly due to your obsession with RBWB

LV 1

MaliciousIronHill

First 10 chapters mostly consists of: Stolen/Rewritten pages from anime abilities pages, MC who is in complete different and dangerous enviroment acting like he knows what he's doing and amount of John Sue that nobody thought could be achieved. The Whole fanfiction description can be dumped as right from the start MC just unleashes the power of Anime(which is not even a spoiler tbh as I myself would have wished I knew it) which contradicts with the whole idea of using wisdom and shrewdness to adapt. Oh and Author steals ability designs from succesful manga series/anime series not bothering to even make it semi original

LV 14

Asura_Of_Gluttony

It’s really good