In Ben 10 as Kevin Levin

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Shane_Town

this is an awesome idea and just in the one chapter author did an awesome job I hope for more chapters it truly would be a waste to lose this story before getting to dive into it

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Charlotte_Mage

when i first saw this, i though it would be a quick new thing and i was right, it was so quick because i didnt realize how addictive it was 👍💜 i am totally hooked, the character for me is well fleshed out and although you think the story or romance is rushed it is writen in such a way that it makes you feel like you have seen a long journy of how it happend, the only thing i would want more would be more chapters 😂 its amazing i would love there to be more chapter releases but i dont want the authors health to get affected but i would still love more haha. keep up the fantabulas work. 💫

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GoldenLionKing

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Waldiney_Silva_1333

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Aayann_

I like this Ben 10 fic, almost all Ben 10 fic has ben is mc now this is something new, i am really looking forward to your story l.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

The story is interesting, the only bad thing is the few chapters. #The protagonist is not an Asian. The protagonist is a pragmatic person, he is not a psychopath or an Asian beta who is even more pathetic in the presence of any woman.

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elpepe

Es una buena lectura [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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_AngLes_DeViL

One THE best ben 10 fanfics out there, my only concern is the update stability

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GodOfLight

История интересная, единственный минус - мало глав. #Главный герой не азиат. Главный герой – человек прагматичный, он не психопат и не азиат-бета, который в присутствии любой женщины становится еще более жалким.

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JokerHighJack

Read up to the latest chapter. Chapter 11. It is a good an interesting story however the spelling and grammar need a lot of work. Not the worse but definitely needs some revisions.

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Isnube022

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Waldiney_Silva_1333

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Lizrock

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Wanderley_Sobral

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Wanderley_Sobral

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Darkiling

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axel_santander

I like this fic,🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

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SilenceMute

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