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A sensational book you can tell...after reading few chapters, I think the author deserves an applaud. specially recommended well done author
Full five for the book cover and the title, the story idea. It has lots of potential only an editor is lacking who can make it a gem. Keep going...
Interesting idea, I like how the world is shaping up. If you start posting daily with good grammar then this could be popular. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
the grammar is god awful. like this person barely knows English at all. MC does not adapt to the new world very well and does not pick up on the small things you wouldn't notice immediately. I do not recommend it.
The plot is interesting. The characters' interactions are well made and coherent with how the relation between male and female are in that world. I want to know more about the other empires/power and if any man is trying to build a revolution army or something like that with what happens to them when they lose the war.
This criminal is about to learn in alternative reality he is in for a fight in the journey past the arc of women. His landladies will be mean. It is Chase Norris like a lonely Texas Ranger in my eyes are seeing this well developed piece of literature I cannot stop enjoying!
The plot is interesting but very common, I trust you for making something very unique out of this, I also like the male lead, kinda reminds me of Cobra, so globally your plot is good but i suggest you to download Grammarly, it will help you to drastically improve your writing
Terrible writing quality that's been getting progressively worse. Dude used 2 instead of two in dialogue... Here's an example of what you can expect every sentence to look like: "we're you there"
Utterly disappointed in this novel, so much wasted potential by grammar and unstable characters. A gender reversal world where the roles reversed but goblins aren't affected and sometimes girls act like their roles aren't reversed.
I'm going to be honest as ever, as I would expect everyone else, who isn't a bot, to do the same. The story isn't good, but it's not bad. The grammar isn't good, sometimes you don't even know who's talking. You also have numerous sentences inside a quote without a break. I'm not a professional neither is many people. But I know those who are giving five stars saying it's the best novel they've ever read is straight up lying. I don't know if you've run this over with a grammar checker or use the money you get and get an editor; But the grammar and the story telling is off. I'm not trying to be harsh here. I believe this could be an insanely decent story (Although I'm not a fan of girls in covers for a story that has nothing to do with them) ; Clickbaiting etc (I dislike it,) but this story has a chance to be decent. Why not look at the reviews, ask people what can be done. That is what this is here for!
A unique and interesting entry into the story, built upon a great premise. Finally a story where the dynamic is reversed between men and women. A whole different world. Must Read.
excellent book and the execution of action and character matches the story, and not to talk the concept of this book is excellent, I think with time it will become a great book
As far as I've read, this book isn't bad! TBH! The entire plot is amazing, a cooking up skills of writing has sprang up. Author, well-done, it ain't easy to write! You hit a good point on lesson giving!!! XD.
I like how the female’s are powerful compared to men, you don’t really see a lot of this unless it’s where the female is more dominant or something like a reverse harem, I really like it and it gives me a lot of inspiration. It’s a unique novel idea.
This novel is excellent and has potential. The world in this novel is ruled by women and the Mc isekai here. I wonder if he will be princess carried too. I'd love to see that. I also can't wait until the magic is shown, and perhaps the Mc can take down a dragon.
Honestly the story was great even though the grammar is more strange than my English of my own novel but good brown keep it up ,and PAHH !-
Great book. Don't have anything else to say. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . stil lcan't post?. . . . . . . . . . . yup now can.
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This story has cured my human limitations and allowed me to truly become an ultimate being. I don't have much else to say as my focus is utterly turned to my new capacities but the book is quite nice, certain people will surely find the premise absolutely baller and I would recommend to follow through with your interest.
The grammar is pretty bad and it’s sad that the author is from the US. I could barely get thru the 2nd chapter.
Great book. ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
author please heed my advice and run the chapters through Google doc it'll help you out tremendously with the errors that everyone is complaining about, sadly I'm pulling out of this novel
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The rating shows how enjoyable readers found it. So I won't go into email bc plenty other reviews do, but. All I wanted was a novel with a world social structure that was different and not there for no apparent reason so I could see how others would imagine it, but no, it's a harem. Women apparently are obsessed with kidnappings and it generally doesn't make sense to me.
It's actually as bad as the reviews say... The Grammer plus not one likable bone in the MC... The bad grammar isn't the usual. It is messed up in just about every way possible. And despite how gritty the Author seems to want this story to be it's very clear the MC has a super power called plot armor... It's not hidden very well.
A sensational book you can tell...after reading few chapters, I think the author deserves an applaud. specially recommended well done author
Full five for the book cover and the title, the story idea. It has lots of potential only an editor is lacking who can make it a gem. Keep going...
Interesting idea, I like how the world is shaping up. If you start posting daily with good grammar then this could be popular. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
the grammar is god awful. like this person barely knows English at all. MC does not adapt to the new world very well and does not pick up on the small things you wouldn't notice immediately. I do not recommend it.
The plot is interesting. The characters' interactions are well made and coherent with how the relation between male and female are in that world. I want to know more about the other empires/power and if any man is trying to build a revolution army or something like that with what happens to them when they lose the war.
This criminal is about to learn in alternative reality he is in for a fight in the journey past the arc of women. His landladies will be mean. It is Chase Norris like a lonely Texas Ranger in my eyes are seeing this well developed piece of literature I cannot stop enjoying!
The plot is interesting but very common, I trust you for making something very unique out of this, I also like the male lead, kinda reminds me of Cobra, so globally your plot is good but i suggest you to download Grammarly, it will help you to drastically improve your writing
Terrible writing quality that's been getting progressively worse. Dude used 2 instead of two in dialogue... Here's an example of what you can expect every sentence to look like: "we're you there"
Utterly disappointed in this novel, so much wasted potential by grammar and unstable characters. A gender reversal world where the roles reversed but goblins aren't affected and sometimes girls act like their roles aren't reversed.
I'm going to be honest as ever, as I would expect everyone else, who isn't a bot, to do the same. The story isn't good, but it's not bad. The grammar isn't good, sometimes you don't even know who's talking. You also have numerous sentences inside a quote without a break. I'm not a professional neither is many people. But I know those who are giving five stars saying it's the best novel they've ever read is straight up lying. I don't know if you've run this over with a grammar checker or use the money you get and get an editor; But the grammar and the story telling is off. I'm not trying to be harsh here. I believe this could be an insanely decent story (Although I'm not a fan of girls in covers for a story that has nothing to do with them) ; Clickbaiting etc (I dislike it,) but this story has a chance to be decent. Why not look at the reviews, ask people what can be done. That is what this is here for!
A unique and interesting entry into the story, built upon a great premise. Finally a story where the dynamic is reversed between men and women. A whole different world. Must Read.
excellent book and the execution of action and character matches the story, and not to talk the concept of this book is excellent, I think with time it will become a great book
As far as I've read, this book isn't bad! TBH! The entire plot is amazing, a cooking up skills of writing has sprang up. Author, well-done, it ain't easy to write! You hit a good point on lesson giving!!! XD.
I like how the female’s are powerful compared to men, you don’t really see a lot of this unless it’s where the female is more dominant or something like a reverse harem, I really like it and it gives me a lot of inspiration. It’s a unique novel idea.
This novel is excellent and has potential. The world in this novel is ruled by women and the Mc isekai here. I wonder if he will be princess carried too. I'd love to see that. I also can't wait until the magic is shown, and perhaps the Mc can take down a dragon.
Honestly the story was great even though the grammar is more strange than my English of my own novel but good brown keep it up ,and PAHH !-
Great book. Don't have anything else to say. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . stil lcan't post?. . . . . . . . . . . yup now can.
Spoiler de révélation This story has cured my human limitations and allowed me to truly become an ultimate being. I don't have much else to say as my focus is utterly turned to my new capacities but the book is quite nice, certain people will surely find the premise absolutely baller and I would recommend to follow through with your interest.
The grammar is pretty bad and it’s sad that the author is from the US. I could barely get thru the 2nd chapter.
Great book. ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
author please heed my advice and run the chapters through Google doc it'll help you out tremendously with the errors that everyone is complaining about, sadly I'm pulling out of this novel
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