Webnovel Author: Ready_ - Novel Collection

I would not call that first comment 'simple English', but I was expecting examples of what you did not appreciate, you know, so that I may write better, I do hope that you take the time to do so, since you surely did not forget everything that you read, right?

Indeed, thanks for reading the story

I wasn’t expecting a review on this old story, so thanks, and the length and such is definitely hurting the narrative, I am planning on rewriting it eventually though

Not certain I quite get what you are trying to say, would you mind explaining exactly what seems to be giving you the ick?

Good grammar, a rather interesting premise and an atypical power system and a world that is in the same vein, not much else to say, it's a solid read.

Yes, he remains a skeleton throughout the story, his physical appearance will barely change, only evolving in terms of strength, abilities and such