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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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This novel is well-written thus far, and I think it has potential to become a good novel to read. From the first 24 chapters, the novel's strongest aspect is the quality of the writing and the balancing of the characters. I feel like the achievements of each character is realistic with the setting, though the value of the currency is unclear and I do question how realistic buying a high-end vr machine is with the wage of a convenience store worker. Going into the future, I think that, so long as it continues with this level of quality and power scaling, this will become one of the better vr novels, however, if the power scaling isn't done well, it'll be a generic novel that doesn't stand out. I'd also like a bit more world building, but it's not urgent, since it's not a main focus of the novel.
This novel is well-written thus far, and I think it has potential to become a good novel to read. From the first 24 chapters, the novel's strongest aspect is the quality of the writing and the balancing of the characters. I feel like the achievements of each character is realistic with the setting, though the value of the currency is unclear and I do question how realistic buying a high-end vr machine is with the wage of a convenience store worker. Going into the future, I think that, so long as it continues with this level of quality and power scaling, this will become one of the better vr novels, however, if the power scaling isn't done well, it'll be a generic novel that doesn't stand out. I'd also like a bit more world building, but it's not urgent, since it's not a main focus of the novel.