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The Story has a very interesting take on the merchant/shop type systems and I love how the author ties all the diffrent POV's together. He adds in Omake type chapters you want to skip but can't as it ties together the actions of his MC with future direction of the story. It is all very well written and keeps you drawn into the progress of the story no instant power ups, and the MC is very human in his personality and there is a lot of character building put into the story better fleshing out he man he used to be.
It's an incredible story. I enjoy transmigration, action, and system stories, and this one marks all my boxes. Will I have read several stories where the Mc has clones, this is the only one where the clones actually feel like another individual and not just a decoy to draw away suspicion or do unsavory actions. The market system is nice , and you put short stories showing how the market is not just a system for the Mc but a community.
I have read since he got gwen as a gf. but I want to know will his clone get women or he himself will cheat on gwen. I am a non harem person so I wanted clarification and if even his clone gets women I hope you can tell me.
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The main plot, which initially offered what seemed like a unique and refreshing take, unfortunately devolved into a predictable narrative filled with overused tropes about overcoming personal obstacles. Totally not worth it, if you have read any other story you can basically expect what will happen.
Thank you for the hard work. The story is closed appropriately despite unintended and non ideal situations. The concept of multiple characters is rare and has been well executed, with each character having their own development.
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Thank you so much for your hard work piggy all 5 star except update stability I want to give it 1 star but I didn’t read the story in a year so we’ll do on 3 stars 😂 truly thank you
This is my second time reading this and the first time i could barely reach the 6th chapter this time i continued as after the tenth it became a lot better and is a good read
I don't have anything to read right now. So, I'm rereading this. And seen how is this low rated than some trash FF. Also forgot to review after finished this FF 3x.
The story started off good and it was entertaining.. but then stopped being so, because of the constant unnecessary drama and endless fighting scenes.. it got boring quick...
Teve algumas coisas que não gostei, mas isso é normal em fanfics, mas foi muito melhor do que pensei que seria, espero que o autor volte a postar logo, recomendo que leiam.
Nice one. The writing is a little rough with pacing all over the place but the author got good ideas. And they also execute it well. There're moments where I laughed out loud or smiled because of some lines. Honestly, there're some uhh moments but remember this is webnovel, every writer here are amateurs. I've already built some tolerance for this. I recommend this.
Reviews really spat on the clone idea but it really is a solution for fan fic to add more char prog without touching the material too much left and right and add pov. i like it^^
This is one of my top 2 Marvel/Avengers Fanfiction and i have read around 15-20 so far I must admit i wasn't going to read it at first but i'm Glad i did it's amazing and you can tell the author loves writing it.
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The story beginning is fine, but later after our hero got himself a clone and not one, story goes downhill.
read to chapter 17 so far and have to say, while the story itself is decent the grammar is bad, tenses change so often or are just used wrong that is hurts, if the grammar was better it would likely be a FF with above average quality, but as is reading it is a core, one can understand what is meant, but it is annoying when you constantly find mistakes and that takes away all the fun in reading. And for someone of MCs alleged background he is too much of a nice person, or would innocent fit better? But yeah, while in itself it would probably be quite good it is ruined by the grammar.
It is one of the most exciting fanfic in my collection and it really good. So I think people should atleast give it a go till chp 50 and I am sure you will like it.
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I really like this novel. I hope you keep up this strong writing and not drop half way through 😀😃😄😁😁😆😅 keep it going don't drop or else I'll hunting you down
Too much focus on the clones and apparently the 2 clones are not clones anymore because the can do whatever they want like the fighr with the doctor clone Too much unnecessary drama between the clones Tldr the clones don't obey the mc and they do what they want
the best book I have ever read in my 3 year using this app, highly recommended to dose that are look for a good world building, character development, and a evenly op character.
At first I don't want to read it because of the clone thing but thank God I did. I love the 3 MC's, different personalities even if they share the same soul. I like the power progression also and the omniversal merchant system concept is awesome. The plot progression is also great and I love the emotional scenes, it never fails to make me cry. The is great for me definitely on my top 5. Thank you for sharing such an awesome story. 👏👏👏👏👏💖💖💖💖👑👑👑👑
Hi, I am the author of the book who will shamelessly review my story. I plan for an ordinary mc in the Marvelverse. The story is greatly influenced by the slice of life genre. It consists of multiple POV and lead, to show the effect of an environment affecting the same person. Hope you enjoy the story. P.S. The MC had lost his memory of his family, in which it will play a big part later on in the story
Spoiler de révélation The Story has a very interesting take on the merchant/shop type systems and I love how the author ties all the diffrent POV's together. He adds in Omake type chapters you want to skip but can't as it ties together the actions of his MC with future direction of the story. It is all very well written and keeps you drawn into the progress of the story no instant power ups, and the MC is very human in his personality and there is a lot of character building put into the story better fleshing out he man he used to be.
It's an incredible story. I enjoy transmigration, action, and system stories, and this one marks all my boxes. Will I have read several stories where the Mc has clones, this is the only one where the clones actually feel like another individual and not just a decoy to draw away suspicion or do unsavory actions. The market system is nice , and you put short stories showing how the market is not just a system for the Mc but a community.
I have read since he got gwen as a gf. but I want to know will his clone get women or he himself will cheat on gwen. I am a non harem person so I wanted clarification and if even his clone gets women I hope you can tell me.
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The main plot, which initially offered what seemed like a unique and refreshing take, unfortunately devolved into a predictable narrative filled with overused tropes about overcoming personal obstacles. Totally not worth it, if you have read any other story you can basically expect what will happen.
Thank you for the hard work. The story is closed appropriately despite unintended and non ideal situations. The concept of multiple characters is rare and has been well executed, with each character having their own development.
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Thank you so much for your hard work piggy all 5 star except update stability I want to give it 1 star but I didn’t read the story in a year so we’ll do on 3 stars 😂 truly thank you
This is my second time reading this and the first time i could barely reach the 6th chapter this time i continued as after the tenth it became a lot better and is a good read
I don't have anything to read right now. So, I'm rereading this. And seen how is this low rated than some trash FF. Also forgot to review after finished this FF 3x.
The story started off good and it was entertaining.. but then stopped being so, because of the constant unnecessary drama and endless fighting scenes.. it got boring quick...
Teve algumas coisas que não gostei, mas isso é normal em fanfics, mas foi muito melhor do que pensei que seria, espero que o autor volte a postar logo, recomendo que leiam.
Nice one. The writing is a little rough with pacing all over the place but the author got good ideas. And they also execute it well. There're moments where I laughed out loud or smiled because of some lines. Honestly, there're some uhh moments but remember this is webnovel, every writer here are amateurs. I've already built some tolerance for this. I recommend this.
Reviews really spat on the clone idea but it really is a solution for fan fic to add more char prog without touching the material too much left and right and add pov. i like it^^
This is one of my top 2 Marvel/Avengers Fanfiction and i have read around 15-20 so far I must admit i wasn't going to read it at first but i'm Glad i did it's amazing and you can tell the author loves writing it.
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The story beginning is fine, but later after our hero got himself a clone and not one, story goes downhill.
read to chapter 17 so far and have to say, while the story itself is decent the grammar is bad, tenses change so often or are just used wrong that is hurts, if the grammar was better it would likely be a FF with above average quality, but as is reading it is a core, one can understand what is meant, but it is annoying when you constantly find mistakes and that takes away all the fun in reading. And for someone of MCs alleged background he is too much of a nice person, or would innocent fit better? But yeah, while in itself it would probably be quite good it is ruined by the grammar.
It is one of the most exciting fanfic in my collection and it really good. So I think people should atleast give it a go till chp 50 and I am sure you will like it.
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I really like this novel. I hope you keep up this strong writing and not drop half way through 😀😃😄😁😁😆😅 keep it going don't drop or else I'll hunting you down
Too much focus on the clones and apparently the 2 clones are not clones anymore because the can do whatever they want like the fighr with the doctor clone Too much unnecessary drama between the clones Tldr the clones don't obey the mc and they do what they want
the best book I have ever read in my 3 year using this app, highly recommended to dose that are look for a good world building, character development, and a evenly op character.
At first I don't want to read it because of the clone thing but thank God I did. I love the 3 MC's, different personalities even if they share the same soul. I like the power progression also and the omniversal merchant system concept is awesome. The plot progression is also great and I love the emotional scenes, it never fails to make me cry. The is great for me definitely on my top 5. Thank you for sharing such an awesome story. 👏👏👏👏👏💖💖💖💖👑👑👑👑
Hi, I am the author of the book who will shamelessly review my story. I plan for an ordinary mc in the Marvelverse. The story is greatly influenced by the slice of life genre. It consists of multiple POV and lead, to show the effect of an environment affecting the same person. Hope you enjoy the story. P.S. The MC had lost his memory of his family, in which it will play a big part later on in the story
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