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I love the novel despite not being OK with many things but I just want to ask. When will all the soul pieces join back together? I really don't like how they all their own personality and sometimes the clones are better than the main body itself. The doctor is the best though. I hope you have a plan to join all clones together before they all start their own relationship because having multiple bodies and girlfriends seems like cheating in a manner.
all in all outstanding novel, the characters interact seamlessly, any suspension of disbelief feels logical, and the enemies are new and fresh.
Honestly one of my favorite Marvel fics in general, I really like the way the trading system was implemented. Also adore Kai, by far my favorite fictional character.
Good nivle to read if you are a fan of Maverl universe. The story is balanced throughout and has lot of twists and turns. and there is no Harem as of now that's +1 from me
I like the multiple pov of the fanfic which is quite unique as said by the author in the pinned comment that the story is going to be Multiple POV and lead of the same person but after reading quite a lot it feels like the clones are not the same person anymore with their different personalities and all. I read many comments about people having problem same as mine that they want to know if the clones will continue with their different personalities or they gonna be one lead again or not. Till now author have not replied to any of the comment which tells me that the clones will be different person at one point in the story which is quite a turn off for me. Having clones like naruto or a same mind clone is not bad but clones with different personalities and someday they might become different individual person is quite detrimental for the story , Unless the author cough out what he is planning , I have to go for 3 star as I dnt like reading Different MCs POV.
It is one of the best marvel fanfic i have ever read. Gave me goosebumps. Detailed and good writing. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly really enjoy the novel and am currently on CHP 81+. The grammar could use some editing but easily understood. The one thing dragging this down would be the clones. I initially enjoyed it but they started getting their own personality and stuff, which a lot of ppl including me don't like. It honestly feels like 3 different persons and not a single individual with hive mind. Saying they're the same person soul doesn't do much when you can't tell at all
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Definitely Recommend to read! This has been a fun read for me, I'mma say it's light while being action and also, I love that the Author explore things that has been forgotten!
everything is perfect like perfect perfect but like I want more fighting scene's scene's where he will suffer to win scene's where he will try to upgrade his shortcomings but like most author's you do you, nice plot nice story good update. thnx.
The author writing focuses on the drama and the interaction rather than a full blown OP protagonist who can fight the world. I understand the concept of the clones, but not quite sure that I love it. The romance is unexpectedly good here. I didn't expect that. If you're searching for a wholesome and relaxing story, you can choose to read the fic. (chapter 82-84 is rough, just skip it if you don't like it) Overall Nice job Author!
the story is great, I'm at chapter14 and there is no Canon happening but I'm OK with this not to mention there are no signs of harem yet (let's hope never)
The story is both interesting and with enough humour to keep the story fresh. I wasn’t sure I would like this story as I’m a bit sick of system’s but I have really enjoyed the novel. The system is one that I haven’t really encountered before. I found the romance to be surprisingly good. Some small mistake with grammar but nothing too noticeable.
Despite what all the complaining nenas say about clones, they were never a mistake, they are practically only 3 different characters. The story is very well done, it perfectly conveys the feelings and the things that happen, it makes you emotional and gives you goosebumps, the characters are developed, they have life and you feel when reading. So for all those who don't like something: close the osico nobody is interested in your complaints, if you don't like it don't read it and that's it
reviewing at chap 106 . this fic style is quite different from all other fic . this fic is all about enjoyment.... seriously, it's one of those fic... where you don't have any expectations, but you still want to read, with popcorn near you . overall i love this fic
Nice story overall....i like you cloning idea....and together with lite jokes it's awesome....one question though....when are you planning to cure Natasha and will she meets with other widows in future.....if you want to take some inspiration you can also try other Marvel universe...like zombie or ultimate Hulk or fantastic four or x men.....there are stories of incursion marvel too try them... overall thanks for nice story
Sei que é um comentário em português, mas tanto faz. Sua história e maravilhosa e continue de um fã estrangeiro .,.................................
A Good story but the clone thing that have almost gonna became separate independent individual. For me the story became bad because of it. its my opinion so no offense sorry
Great story told in multiple POVs that are fun and engaging. I especially like Kia's point of view and powers. The story is written really well and flows smoothly.
overall story is told is great but making clones and giving them each different personalities brings a unique taste to it. story in novel stars from chapter 4 first 3 are the background
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Would highly recomend this story. a very relaxed novel that always seems to put a smile on my face :))
Please make it harem since Natasha Gwen and maybe she-hulk because it would make sense since he gets stronger everyday from drinking the gene-optimization fluid increase's everything and it's the three best women in movie universe for marvel.
one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you for your work
Writing quality would be 0 starts if giving 0 stars was possible. Everything else is 3 stars. .
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I love the novel despite not being OK with many things but I just want to ask. When will all the soul pieces join back together? I really don't like how they all their own personality and sometimes the clones are better than the main body itself. The doctor is the best though. I hope you have a plan to join all clones together before they all start their own relationship because having multiple bodies and girlfriends seems like cheating in a manner.
all in all outstanding novel, the characters interact seamlessly, any suspension of disbelief feels logical, and the enemies are new and fresh.
Honestly one of my favorite Marvel fics in general, I really like the way the trading system was implemented. Also adore Kai, by far my favorite fictional character.
Good nivle to read if you are a fan of Maverl universe. The story is balanced throughout and has lot of twists and turns. and there is no Harem as of now that's +1 from me
I like the multiple pov of the fanfic which is quite unique as said by the author in the pinned comment that the story is going to be Multiple POV and lead of the same person but after reading quite a lot it feels like the clones are not the same person anymore with their different personalities and all. I read many comments about people having problem same as mine that they want to know if the clones will continue with their different personalities or they gonna be one lead again or not. Till now author have not replied to any of the comment which tells me that the clones will be different person at one point in the story which is quite a turn off for me. Having clones like naruto or a same mind clone is not bad but clones with different personalities and someday they might become different individual person is quite detrimental for the story , Unless the author cough out what he is planning , I have to go for 3 star as I dnt like reading Different MCs POV.
It is one of the best marvel fanfic i have ever read. Gave me goosebumps. Detailed and good writing. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly really enjoy the novel and am currently on CHP 81+. The grammar could use some editing but easily understood. The one thing dragging this down would be the clones. I initially enjoyed it but they started getting their own personality and stuff, which a lot of ppl including me don't like. It honestly feels like 3 different persons and not a single individual with hive mind. Saying they're the same person soul doesn't do much when you can't tell at all
Spoiler de révélation Definitely Recommend to read! This has been a fun read for me, I'mma say it's light while being action and also, I love that the Author explore things that has been forgotten!
everything is perfect like perfect perfect but like I want more fighting scene's scene's where he will suffer to win scene's where he will try to upgrade his shortcomings but like most author's you do you, nice plot nice story good update. thnx.
The author writing focuses on the drama and the interaction rather than a full blown OP protagonist who can fight the world. I understand the concept of the clones, but not quite sure that I love it. The romance is unexpectedly good here. I didn't expect that. If you're searching for a wholesome and relaxing story, you can choose to read the fic. (chapter 82-84 is rough, just skip it if you don't like it) Overall Nice job Author!
the story is great, I'm at chapter14 and there is no Canon happening but I'm OK with this not to mention there are no signs of harem yet (let's hope never)
The story is both interesting and with enough humour to keep the story fresh. I wasn’t sure I would like this story as I’m a bit sick of system’s but I have really enjoyed the novel. The system is one that I haven’t really encountered before. I found the romance to be surprisingly good. Some small mistake with grammar but nothing too noticeable.
Despite what all the complaining nenas say about clones, they were never a mistake, they are practically only 3 different characters. The story is very well done, it perfectly conveys the feelings and the things that happen, it makes you emotional and gives you goosebumps, the characters are developed, they have life and you feel when reading. So for all those who don't like something: close the osico nobody is interested in your complaints, if you don't like it don't read it and that's it
reviewing at chap 106 . this fic style is quite different from all other fic . this fic is all about enjoyment.... seriously, it's one of those fic... where you don't have any expectations, but you still want to read, with popcorn near you . overall i love this fic
Nice story overall....i like you cloning idea....and together with lite jokes it's awesome....one question though....when are you planning to cure Natasha and will she meets with other widows in future.....if you want to take some inspiration you can also try other Marvel universe...like zombie or ultimate Hulk or fantastic four or x men.....there are stories of incursion marvel too try them... overall thanks for nice story
Sei que é um comentário em português, mas tanto faz. Sua história e maravilhosa e continue de um fã estrangeiro .,.................................
A Good story but the clone thing that have almost gonna became separate independent individual. For me the story became bad because of it. its my opinion so no offense sorry
Great story told in multiple POVs that are fun and engaging. I especially like Kia's point of view and powers. The story is written really well and flows smoothly.
overall story is told is great but making clones and giving them each different personalities brings a unique taste to it. story in novel stars from chapter 4 first 3 are the background
Spoiler de révélation Would highly recomend this story. a very relaxed novel that always seems to put a smile on my face :))
Please make it harem since Natasha Gwen and maybe she-hulk because it would make sense since he gets stronger everyday from drinking the gene-optimization fluid increase's everything and it's the three best women in movie universe for marvel.
one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you for your work
Writing quality would be 0 starts if giving 0 stars was possible. Everything else is 3 stars. .
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