63Critiques
4.14
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................
Most Important thing - I enjoy the fic, so, FULL STARS! Not gonna give a proper review coz AUTHOR hasn't finish the story yet!
As Grafian said, i was looking forward for him to build things from scratch (dr. stone style), but no we go directly into the future and the only things we know about him are the few flashbacks because the author was too lazy to make an epilogue. Great idea Bad Execution. Even though it's a non-harem fanfic(a good thing because people that likes harem Clearly never been in a relationship before)
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
Trash novel. Would not recommend. Not having a harem doesnt add anything to the already falling apart storyline
It's good but the flashbacks make it seem like reading 2 different stories so like there's not really a decent build up. Maybe delete all the flashbacks and create 1 arc solely for the past? Timeskips are fine just dont skip parts that are major like maybe FIGHTING ODIN,ZEUS,HELA AND SEALING 666.
el A va antes que el B por eso C le gana a D pero sin mencionar que E le gusta F pero G quiere ver el mundo arder pero H no lo permitira ya que I fue una vez su maestro que le dejo una gran enseñanza pero J es el villano que el mundo requiere sin mencionar que K tuvo que sacrificarse por el bien de la trama, L era solo un solitario que queria una vida tranquila, pero fue culpa de M que ahora su vida era un calvario, N solo mira todo lo que esta pasando como un espectador mas, sin mencionar que su hermana Ñ, esta tramando la mayor travesura de todas... continuara.
the author is willing to destroy his fic just for Canon DxD, and become their baby sister. Meanwhile, the timeline itself is very confusing, he lives in historical times, but the author cuts more Time and throw away his struggle for power. I think the 5 star is the Spam account
Побольше бы таких фанфиков и жизнь была бы на капельку легче. Спасибо автору и Побольше тебе энергии.................................[img=exp]
this is funny how this fanfics name is dimensional group chat as sorcerer supreme but there is no mention of group chat till ch 47 I am still reading but man names dimensional group chat and there is no group chat what a hypocrisy is it something else anyway . sorry for bad English . English is 4th language to me I learned English after 3 other language and still learning so yeah that's that
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
No harem Nuff said......................................................................................................................................
Not much to say as when I first read this I don't know but I think I dropped it like 12chaps later? But then I suddenly had a urge to read some multiverse chat group type ff and then remember that this is one so I picked it up earlier in the morning and then skipped it and went directly to vol3 as the author stated that the chat group would only appear there so I pretty much went directly from chap60 so I don't have much to say in this but do expect a very entertaining read, very recommended....
It’ a good story in general but I wanted a chat fix story as a main focus thi has it but only starts chapter 66 and it wasn’ the main focu s
waku waku waku waku waku waku waku. at first its a little bit bland. but later it will be waku waku. hope the author always do the best
please remove the group chat................................................................................................................................................
This fic is worse than bad, because it might actually be good, but the author butchered it in chapter. There's no story. Period. The whole time it feels like I'm reading the ending of the book. Why should I bother? Just to suffer?
Did I hear a non harem fr sign me up 5 stars from the start no reading needed I calculated everything with my Asian brain the best type of brain
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Other reviews already stated this but I might as well say the same thing just so my review can give some balance to the other 5 star reviews who only care that it's not harem. Long story short the author wrote the end of the story in the first few chapters then went on to enjoy life of the mc afterwards in a slice of life style. No details or plot just the epilogue. Then after the tourney arc we get some weird bs chat room arc and a random god he needs to kill because his mom was murdered and he needs power. But for such a serious goal for the mc you used a slice of life fun thing like a chat room for his power trip? This whole story is such a mess and the author clearly doesn't know what he is doing even if he thinks he does. SPOILER - Adding Anya from SpyxFamily into the chat room was a big mistake. Not to mention Iruma is also annoying and a bad character to add. You have an infinite number of characters from everywhere to choose from, im sure you can find actually decent and likable characters to pick from.
Not Harem? 5/5 . . . . . Me obligan a 150 caracteres.. ni modo. No se cuando acabe este mensaje.. espero que pronto.. Pues no será pronto todavía. Ahora?
it's good but I drop this because of dimension group chat. well I just want dxd fanfic .............................,.........................
Hi, I'm Jin. I'm rating this 5 stars because the author is my cousin...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
5 stars! Why? Because I'm here! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
No cursed harem for once? And dxd? Gold, I don’t care if this is absolute trash I’m giving it 5 stars since harem is worse than ruining all the plot and having the mc become god but hide because a toddler might find and kill him
I like the idea, but you suck at making it happen. I love the no harem part, (can’t even find a story without one) Grammar is nice too. The only thing I dislike is world building and story telling. You’re awful at it. I thought it was going to be a simple reincarnation story, wrong! It’s just a jumble of plot lines, completely messy and unorganized. I’m not reading this.
Hi, uhmm, Am I allowed to rate my FanFic with 5 stars? I hope I won't get arrested for this.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................Legazin..............................................
Most Important thing - I enjoy the fic, so, FULL STARS! Not gonna give a proper review coz AUTHOR hasn't finish the story yet!
As Grafian said, i was looking forward for him to build things from scratch (dr. stone style), but no we go directly into the future and the only things we know about him are the few flashbacks because the author was too lazy to make an epilogue. Great idea Bad Execution. Even though it's a non-harem fanfic(a good thing because people that likes harem Clearly never been in a relationship before)
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
Trash novel. Would not recommend. Not having a harem doesnt add anything to the already falling apart storyline
It's good but the flashbacks make it seem like reading 2 different stories so like there's not really a decent build up. Maybe delete all the flashbacks and create 1 arc solely for the past? Timeskips are fine just dont skip parts that are major like maybe FIGHTING ODIN,ZEUS,HELA AND SEALING 666.
el A va antes que el B por eso C le gana a D pero sin mencionar que E le gusta F pero G quiere ver el mundo arder pero H no lo permitira ya que I fue una vez su maestro que le dejo una gran enseñanza pero J es el villano que el mundo requiere sin mencionar que K tuvo que sacrificarse por el bien de la trama, L era solo un solitario que queria una vida tranquila, pero fue culpa de M que ahora su vida era un calvario, N solo mira todo lo que esta pasando como un espectador mas, sin mencionar que su hermana Ñ, esta tramando la mayor travesura de todas... continuara.
the author is willing to destroy his fic just for Canon DxD, and become their baby sister. Meanwhile, the timeline itself is very confusing, he lives in historical times, but the author cuts more Time and throw away his struggle for power. I think the 5 star is the Spam account
Побольше бы таких фанфиков и жизнь была бы на капельку легче. Спасибо автору и Побольше тебе энергии.................................[img=exp]
this is funny how this fanfics name is dimensional group chat as sorcerer supreme but there is no mention of group chat till ch 47 I am still reading but man names dimensional group chat and there is no group chat what a hypocrisy is it something else anyway . sorry for bad English . English is 4th language to me I learned English after 3 other language and still learning so yeah that's that
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
No harem Nuff said......................................................................................................................................
Not much to say as when I first read this I don't know but I think I dropped it like 12chaps later? But then I suddenly had a urge to read some multiverse chat group type ff and then remember that this is one so I picked it up earlier in the morning and then skipped it and went directly to vol3 as the author stated that the chat group would only appear there so I pretty much went directly from chap60 so I don't have much to say in this but do expect a very entertaining read, very recommended....
It’ a good story in general but I wanted a chat fix story as a main focus thi has it but only starts chapter 66 and it wasn’ the main focu s
waku waku waku waku waku waku waku. at first its a little bit bland. but later it will be waku waku. hope the author always do the best
please remove the group chat................................................................................................................................................
This fic is worse than bad, because it might actually be good, but the author butchered it in chapter. There's no story. Period. The whole time it feels like I'm reading the ending of the book. Why should I bother? Just to suffer?
Did I hear a non harem fr sign me up 5 stars from the start no reading needed I calculated everything with my Asian brain the best type of brain
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Other reviews already stated this but I might as well say the same thing just so my review can give some balance to the other 5 star reviews who only care that it's not harem. Long story short the author wrote the end of the story in the first few chapters then went on to enjoy life of the mc afterwards in a slice of life style. No details or plot just the epilogue. Then after the tourney arc we get some weird bs chat room arc and a random god he needs to kill because his mom was murdered and he needs power. But for such a serious goal for the mc you used a slice of life fun thing like a chat room for his power trip? This whole story is such a mess and the author clearly doesn't know what he is doing even if he thinks he does. SPOILER - Adding Anya from SpyxFamily into the chat room was a big mistake. Not to mention Iruma is also annoying and a bad character to add. You have an infinite number of characters from everywhere to choose from, im sure you can find actually decent and likable characters to pick from.
Not Harem? 5/5 . . . . . Me obligan a 150 caracteres.. ni modo. No se cuando acabe este mensaje.. espero que pronto.. Pues no será pronto todavía. Ahora?
it's good but I drop this because of dimension group chat. well I just want dxd fanfic .............................,.........................
Hi, I'm Jin. I'm rating this 5 stars because the author is my cousin...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
5 stars! Why? Because I'm here! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
No cursed harem for once? And dxd? Gold, I don’t care if this is absolute trash I’m giving it 5 stars since harem is worse than ruining all the plot and having the mc become god but hide because a toddler might find and kill him
I like the idea, but you suck at making it happen. I love the no harem part, (can’t even find a story without one) Grammar is nice too. The only thing I dislike is world building and story telling. You’re awful at it. I thought it was going to be a simple reincarnation story, wrong! It’s just a jumble of plot lines, completely messy and unorganized. I’m not reading this.
Hi, uhmm, Am I allowed to rate my FanFic with 5 stars? I hope I won't get arrested for this.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]