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Way too many wife's. Most of them dont even matter at all.
ch 0 -1 SPOILERS! DO NOT LOOK IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE SPOILED! Updated Stat block and descriptions
Reality Bender System, Marvel
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
The mc is pretty pathetic
Please for the love of god edit your chapters.
Did you forget New Order from Star and Stripes?
ch 0 8 Experiments & New Ideas
MHA: The Fresh Blood
Anime & Comics · The_Fae_Child
Begging for a system despite pretty much being god and being able to create what he wishes. The first thing he does is begging for a system like a loser. I dont know why this annoys me but for this alone im going to drop the novel.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within
Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass
The only thing I want to say is that dont make the harem to big. Harems are already trash but your story is decent enough for me to ignore it. In my opinion harems ruin every story because its is so forced and unneeded just to satisfy the authors fantasy. Just dont have a pokemon collector where the mc collcts every girl to walk the earth.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
Jean and Wanda are perfect for Queens because of their powers. Siduri can be a good queen for the story as well if you develope her character.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
Why do you give her such big disadvantages? Despite having a system and being the main character she has no advantage over any of the other characters. She litterally cant even cultivate to a high lvl because her talent is so trash. How is she going to be strong? This is the make it or break it part of the story that will determine if I stick with the novel.Nothing is more annoying then seeing a weak mc with no chance of getting stronger constantly getting f**ked by the story with no wins. Im not some sadist who loves seeing the mc in a constant losing situation. Author you need to balance the carrot and the stick not just the stick. She needs to have a power up that can at the very least keep up with those arround her.
ch 58 Chapter 58: Bai Hao’s Nirvana
Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
Fantasy · DaoistDumbledore
Am I the only one feeling annoyed with Sif? Sonething about her character is just really annoying every since she joins Layla. It doesnt help that she is just a muscle brained jealous girlfriend as well. I love everything else about the story so far and despite how stupid Layla can be I don't really feel any annoyance there.
ch 101 Chapter: 101
The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)
Movies · StarWaves
Still no reason to tell anyone anything. Secrets like those are best kept till your death and she can juat go on living as before. Like there is not reason to tell anyone your secrets no matter the situation.
It was then that I realized the mistake that I had not told my story before I became a kuroka.
Trying to enjoy harem life in the anime world by granting peoples wish
Anime & Comics · ShirooYuki
If the goddesses doesnt get punished at the end of this im going to drop.
ch 40 Terrible first meeting
New God of the forge
Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
Are we going to forget that the MC just got replaced? Or in this case going back to the original. Is our previous just gone now until she inverse again?
ch 41 Chapter 39: the Saving mission
Date a phantom (Date a live fanfic)
Fantasy · yatsumi_taki
I cant bring my self to feel sorry for the mc. You did a poor job explaining the issues she is going through and i feel that they are not really issues at all. Whatever problems she is going through are not problems at all and you wrote it really poorly so I cant really feel sorry for her at all.
ch 56 Chapter 56: "The girl who doesn't trust anyone"
Honkai: Kiana happiness, Become the stigma of the Kaslana family
Video Games · KayokoDaaa
Just write in their pov? Doesnt have to focus on her every chapter. I dont know if I missed anything but she has no reason to leave her house and they didn't give her any good one. Very forced plot just for the sake of getting mc to do something.
"I cannot leave them out there to deal with everything alone. Wang Chao and I are going to take some men and leave tomorrow in the hopes that we might catch up to them. We want you to come."
Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm
Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666
Ok this seems very interesting so far and im willing to give this a shot. Author for all that is good in the world dont make this a harem and if you dont know how to write romance dont add any at all. People seem to think you need romance or harem in every story for it to be good my god.
ch 0 1 The Triple Portion of A Bad Luck
Reborn: My Two Systems at War
Sci-fi · AnonymUser
This mc is pretty meh. Also he has only known her for a short amount of time so calm down? This whole story so far is just nonsense.
ch 11 Can't Leave You Behind!
World First Paladin
Fantasy · ShovelingKnight
This is just a copy paste of the original novel with a fmc si in the mix. Nothing really changes and nothing new happens. If you want to read this novel go find the original. This novel gives you the illusion of being decent but if you have read the original then this is just a straight copy. The mc being female doesnt really add anything fresh to an already boring world as well. I would like to repeat again that despite having a fmc the story is at least 90% identical to the original in terms of story and mc being female hardly makes a difference. Ok I have ranted long enough about copy and paste and what not.
Reborn After A Death March
Anime & Comics · Calamity95