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Kin To Shadows

Anime & Comics 37 Chapitres 1.1M Affichage
Auteur: Shanhe11916

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Synopsis

An ordinary lazer was reincarnated as Shikamaru with some extra features, let’s see if we can change the games

P.s I don’t own any of the animes and cartoons

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  1. Shanhe11916
    Shanhe11916 Contribué 136
  2. Reistlan
    Reistlan Contribué 20
  3. Boris_Davidovic
    Boris_Davidovic Contribué 16

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Rank -- Classement Power Stone
Stone -- Power stone

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_Wessix4Ever

it's cool and shikamaru as the oc is unique but the poor English really hurts the story and makes it difficult to sit though some parts I highly recommend finding someone to edit the fic

2yr
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Ice_Tea_5062

Disgusting... What kind of writing style is this? As if a 10-year-old child was put at the keyboard and asked to write how he would live in different universes

2yr
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Golias

it's interesting, really, but it's more of a monologue, apart from that after a while the interactions seem exaggerated and superfluous, it ends up not making much sense, too much information, too much rhetoric, too much randomness. In the end, the concept is good, but very poorly executed.

1yr
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Shanhe11916

Didn’t want to give myself 5 stars because i know i don't deserve it and didn’t want to give myself the lower than four because that would ruin my day. But please, You guys can honestly rate the story

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2yr
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MrHollow

A really great story. ThenMc doesn't act stupid, he is realistic, and also has a great sense of humor if I say so myself. All in all, a good story to read.

2yr
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All_GoodNamesRGone

A preety good story and we don’t see shikamaru as an oc as much as i would like and he has powers but not something over the top and the timing for power ups and training time is very reasonable definitely the best shikamaru oc out there

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2yr
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Raheem_Dillon

The story is good so far.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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Boris_Davidovic

I didn't notice its finally been updated. Yes oh my god all of my yes. Loving it keep up the good work. Very realistic story. Will be giving my votes/power stones whatever here from now on.

1yr
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Akbarreads

the novel is a mess I hope you could string together all the beads of ideas you have I see potential in your writing but it is all over the place all the best keep going

2yr
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isabel_andrade

I always like to look at new perspectives on what happens when the element of intelligence and absurdity is implemented. This story has exactly that, and I liked it. lol lol

1yr
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ANANTA

Just coz like the story so i rate all 5 stars, hope that MC becomes OP overall especially in IQ & Wisdom. Hope that it completes without dropping.

1yr
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Shadowless98

The concept for training and system and the choice of character were quite interesting, however when he begins to show off in front of other people and performs his techniques becomes a little cringe. Not very smart and rather difficult to believe in.

1yr
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seal_teamvi

dropping because he is hiding his power

1yr
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GodOfLight

it's cool and shikamaru as the oc is unique but the poor English really hurts the story and makes it difficult to sit though some parts I highly recommend finding someone to edit the fic

1yr
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Alex_Boen

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1yr
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Swayam_Patel

one of the good naruto fics out there just try to Inc the output

1yr
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Daoistf6mRSI

Certain things I will say 1 This is a wonderful story in a strange way 2 How can you put credence to these words without interruption 3 You are more talented than you know 4 Despite the talent you are the product of hard work 5 Listen champ, you are an artist with your punch I will gladly support you on the way

1yr
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ReadFalcon

Pretty cool concept but is pretty messy with all the different techniques and system features the author borrows from dozens of different sources. The English is a bit rough but is still readable. This fic does fall into the pitfall of making most of the adults seem stupid while trying to make the MC look cool. Could be worth a read if you like crossover system fics and don't mind the rough writing.

1yr
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Gustavo_Cobos

Ibas bien pero luego se revolvió todo EXP exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

1yr
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