Minecraft Dungeons {Rise Of The Heroes}

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TofSpades

Honestly, you're making me quite interested in this book with your writing style. It's like everything who write is enough and not enough at the same time which makes me want more and more. Also, nice depiction on the plotline so far. Can't wait for more :)

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Barion_Trident

I have never played nor got into contact with Minecraft so this is a brand new concept for me, I see you are on the very first steps of writting, I'm the same so a bit of friendly advice, always put on a tittle on the chapter that relates to the content of it, also a bit more eloboration on the scenes would help you a lot, all in all its got potential so I hope you keep going : )

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Aucheras

This is a nice story so far. I hope the author decides to continue with it. The character interactions are witty and fun to read. The video game aspect is nicely done and I know it's Minecraft, but it also reminds me of watching the Lego movies. Nicely done.

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LordYangStar

It is a short and entertaining read. As I progress, the small details and the effort to enter the world of Minecraft are quite noticeable. The only thing I could change would be to break up the paragraphs more to make them easier to read. The rest is entertaining, and it shows that the author has a good track record as a writer.

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Hassy_101

This is my first time reading Such, Although I watch them a lot. It was a good read for me. It was well written. Paragraphing the dialogues would have been much better though.

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Excelsior_x

The story is good and the written also. It was the first time reading a book with such short chapters, so I do not know what to feel about that. The story overall progresses great but since we have short chapters there is no time spent on the characters, world building or on the fighting itself. Overall I liked it and would like to see where it goes. more chapters please. Ghost is my MVP

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Yassybella

Thanks for the free read. The quality of English grammar is fantastic though spotted some minor errors that did not affect the story's plot. Keep it up author!

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Jude_K_1656

I like your style; fantastic. It reminds me of the action, the thrill of not being killed in fear. There were grammar errors, but they did not affect the story's substance. Worth reading!

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Jude_K_1656

For those who love minecraft, this is for you guys. Grammars ok though not that perfect ,but still you can easily understand the story perfectly.

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Rayne_Rue

This was really an interesting book and loved the characters ,I loved the descriptions and all the creation initially,giving this book an honest review ,I would like to recommend it first and then say ,it was really a great read and I enjoyed it,they ars a few mistakes but who doesn't make mistakes anyway and these mistakes don't stop this book from being the best great work Author ...correct the few mistakes and make this book the best love your work.

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Dinessu

i have never played minecraft but it makes me want to go and play it after reading your story. I really love the concept of the video game makes me think of the movie wreck it ralph.

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SMwrites

Honestly, Not much bad can be said. It's not written like you'r average story. It's more like the main characters are the characters in an MMORPG and are completing quests. Quite interesting to read.

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AMonarch

I like the character interactions a lot but I wish the author would spend more time to develop the world and the characters themselves such as giving each one of them purpose and something they want to pursue. I think updating the novel would also be good. If these changes are made, I think the novel would be an amazing read.

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RomanceFanatic028

Starting was little slow paced for me because of the short chapters. but overall, the plot was really amazing and your writing style was very simple. I really liked that. So if you are a new reader then try it, it is really an interesting story.

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Rathowm

You have to love Minecraft and adventures, and this novel delivers those perfectly. Entertaining chapters are easy to read, action scenes are fun and the characters are charming. Keep it up!

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Mediocre_author

It's a great introduction to the overarching story. I appreciated the foreword giving a brief background of each individual character. The one piece of criticism I have is to make every chapter about three times the length you've been making them. Keep writing! You're doing great!

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Deranwoods

It's a fairly short experience, but I can tell that you have a lot of passion for the source material. The main thing that needs to be improved are your set pieces. The story is progressing but there's not many memorable moments to remember as they pass by too quickly. Otherwise, I hope you continue to write this story, as it is a niche that not many others will satisfy.