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I finally finished. I actually really liked it. deff with the read!! recommend. better then most books on here. obviously there were some things, like any book, I was hoping to see play out or more of or differently, and even though the entire book was not romance the middle did get a little bit overly romantic maybe but it was still good. a lot of twists and turns, even things I didn't see coming.. especially for being her first book. feel like the writer maybe isn't from America, cas some things didn't sound right. like in New York two dad's are going to be hooked on football before soccer, or how it seemed like they never used car seats. lol I loved how you get to see all the important characters stories play out, like how a show goes back and forth. I would have liked to see Suzy actually realizing who she was, or his Mon finding out about J's, just some little things. I also would not have minded a few more chapters in the end to better get into everyone's situations. after chapter 100 something, the grammar started to slack a little and that's when it seemed to linger a little on the same theme. but like I said much better then most stories on here, it didn't seem rushed in the end, it's not leaving you with a ton of unanswered questions and you can understand it. good job!! I would read a sequel, maybe events in between end and epilogue or years later or the kids adventure or something. good job!
Such a great read. I love the romantic story of Zachary and Amy, it’s them against the world instead of the third party /mistress cliché.
This was a lovely work! The plot remained interesting and the story line was well developed. It is hard to leave a review without spoilers!!! There were so many great aspects of this story.
Pleasantly surprised GREAT book. You will love all the characters. Ending leaves you fulfilled. Action, drama, romance, comedy Honestly can’t wait to read more of your books your a really brilliant author. Please read it’s 10/10
It really is not your typical baby mama story. Do not get fooled by the very first setting in the story, the first forced night together, it gets a million times better later on and no slow chapters or annoying subplots. I love reading about pu**y-whipped male leads, who just give their all to their female counterparts and this story just delivered. I liked it, a lot!!!!
Finally!!!!! Not your typical baby mama has come to an end. This was my first book! Like I said, I am no professional but I would like to thank you all for your support and taking the time to read my work. I am both proud and disappointed in this book but I'm learning. I wish to do better in my next book (Whose title i changed to 'The ex-con and the painter'. Look forward to it. Again, thank you for your patience and support. From Miabella, NYTBM signing out Xx.
I love the comic relief not all serious without a little sense of humor thanks author for writing this lovely book. please read this book it's fun[img=update]
the beginning was good, that after 150 chapters it was just absurd, disappointing.................................................................
This book is one of the best in my reading history ..... it got me hooked. I absolutely recommend this book because everything about it is on point
The story hooks ya. The update stability has you wondering when, or if, you’ll ever get your next fix
Incredible story with only a handful of minor Grammatical errors, which I believe a majority of people can look past. Story will draw you in and keep you reading.
This novel got me hooked the moment I read the name of the novel 🙈 and when i started reading it oh my God it was faaaaaaab!! Amy and Zach are jus toooooooo cute to handle....i keep squealing everytime i read abt dem.... The author has like created such an in-depth story with so much mystery and beautiful relationships between all the characters ..right from Zach and Xavier and George 's brotherhood ...to amy with Stella and the other from West side and wit Victoria....it's jus sooo nice to read such beautiful relationships blooming.... u are doing an amazing job dear author !! looking forward to how the story goes ahead.. and any and Zach with their lill bun❤️❤️💓 u guys will not regret reading it at all !! do give it a try .... completely worth it !!!
I love this book.❤️ I can't stop reading it whenever I start with with it. The story is amazing and the way it has written. Hopefully is has a sequel story.
I liked how the story started but then for it to really pick up it takes around 150 chapters, the hole deal with Amy's pregnancy, how she dealt with it don't really settle with me. She is not your typical baby Mama but she is your typical self-centered, rightous idiot
Just love how they are both attracted to each other from the start, altough their encounter was nothing great. He is the type of overbearring CEO that i love and of all the things she is an hacker love this pair.
It's a good website for amazing books and comic and I happy to review it it should be number one on the website of books and comic hfjdjskdbskskdjdjd
I enjoy reading this book. The writter is indeed talented and very consistant. one of the best books I have read. I would recommend it for anyone at anytime
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[img=recommend] pretty interesting😎😎😎😎😎😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏 it's good I really like it
Amazing book Author ❤️❤️❤️ Just started today and now I cannot stop myself from reading more. FL and ML have awesome chemistry together. Loved it. Keep it up.
Dear Author, well done! The story has an interesting plot, your characters are expressive, and all the descriptions are nicely written. You did great work!
Spoiler de révélation
This is just the right romance novel for you if you're looking for some fluffy romance!💖😌 Although, the MC and ML will experience a long distance 'relationship' it won't stop the two of them from having their sweet interactions!😍 Reading this will make your heart feel full because of these three things! 💕 Romantic relationships ✔️ Family relationships ✔️ Friendships ✔️ I don't need to talk about the writing style and grammar in this novel, it's clear with the stars that I gave to this novel! 👌 so you guys should try it out! Ps: Zach is such a husband material character! He's the reason why the romance in this novel is so sweet 🤧😍✨
✓ Amazing plot! ✓ Not overly amazing FL to the point that you would puke but brilliant nonetheless! ✓ Caring, flirt and powerful ML ✓ Great story! ✓ Word and description clarity - slowburn and pace is kind of just steady... This story is worth a read! You won't regret it!
You see the gif below? That's how you will feel every time you read this and our fl and ml's exchange <3 GIVE THIS BOOK A GO <3 You won't regret it! One of the best good-feeling book I have read! Thank you for sharing this story with us, author!
A heartwarming love story with smart and not so overpowered FL and Cool , bossy and overprotective ML. 💖Plot is great with mystery ,suspense, romance and mature content. 😉 To future viewers :- You will not regret reading this story. It's definitely worth it.
I finally finished. I actually really liked it. deff with the read!! recommend. better then most books on here. obviously there were some things, like any book, I was hoping to see play out or more of or differently, and even though the entire book was not romance the middle did get a little bit overly romantic maybe but it was still good. a lot of twists and turns, even things I didn't see coming.. especially for being her first book. feel like the writer maybe isn't from America, cas some things didn't sound right. like in New York two dad's are going to be hooked on football before soccer, or how it seemed like they never used car seats. lol I loved how you get to see all the important characters stories play out, like how a show goes back and forth. I would have liked to see Suzy actually realizing who she was, or his Mon finding out about J's, just some little things. I also would not have minded a few more chapters in the end to better get into everyone's situations. after chapter 100 something, the grammar started to slack a little and that's when it seemed to linger a little on the same theme. but like I said much better then most stories on here, it didn't seem rushed in the end, it's not leaving you with a ton of unanswered questions and you can understand it. good job!! I would read a sequel, maybe events in between end and epilogue or years later or the kids adventure or something. good job!
Such a great read. I love the romantic story of Zachary and Amy, it’s them against the world instead of the third party /mistress cliché.
This was a lovely work! The plot remained interesting and the story line was well developed. It is hard to leave a review without spoilers!!! There were so many great aspects of this story.
Pleasantly surprised GREAT book. You will love all the characters. Ending leaves you fulfilled. Action, drama, romance, comedy Honestly can’t wait to read more of your books your a really brilliant author. Please read it’s 10/10
It really is not your typical baby mama story. Do not get fooled by the very first setting in the story, the first forced night together, it gets a million times better later on and no slow chapters or annoying subplots. I love reading about pu**y-whipped male leads, who just give their all to their female counterparts and this story just delivered. I liked it, a lot!!!!
Finally!!!!! Not your typical baby mama has come to an end. This was my first book! Like I said, I am no professional but I would like to thank you all for your support and taking the time to read my work. I am both proud and disappointed in this book but I'm learning. I wish to do better in my next book (Whose title i changed to 'The ex-con and the painter'. Look forward to it. Again, thank you for your patience and support. From Miabella, NYTBM signing out Xx.
I love the comic relief not all serious without a little sense of humor thanks author for writing this lovely book. please read this book it's fun[img=update]
the beginning was good, that after 150 chapters it was just absurd, disappointing.................................................................
This book is one of the best in my reading history ..... it got me hooked. I absolutely recommend this book because everything about it is on point
The story hooks ya. The update stability has you wondering when, or if, you’ll ever get your next fix
Incredible story with only a handful of minor Grammatical errors, which I believe a majority of people can look past. Story will draw you in and keep you reading.
This novel got me hooked the moment I read the name of the novel 🙈 and when i started reading it oh my God it was faaaaaaab!! Amy and Zach are jus toooooooo cute to handle....i keep squealing everytime i read abt dem.... The author has like created such an in-depth story with so much mystery and beautiful relationships between all the characters ..right from Zach and Xavier and George 's brotherhood ...to amy with Stella and the other from West side and wit Victoria....it's jus sooo nice to read such beautiful relationships blooming.... u are doing an amazing job dear author !! looking forward to how the story goes ahead.. and any and Zach with their lill bun❤️❤️💓 u guys will not regret reading it at all !! do give it a try .... completely worth it !!!
I love this book.❤️ I can't stop reading it whenever I start with with it. The story is amazing and the way it has written. Hopefully is has a sequel story.
I liked how the story started but then for it to really pick up it takes around 150 chapters, the hole deal with Amy's pregnancy, how she dealt with it don't really settle with me. She is not your typical baby Mama but she is your typical self-centered, rightous idiot
Just love how they are both attracted to each other from the start, altough their encounter was nothing great. He is the type of overbearring CEO that i love and of all the things she is an hacker love this pair.
It's a good website for amazing books and comic and I happy to review it it should be number one on the website of books and comic hfjdjskdbskskdjdjd
I enjoy reading this book. The writter is indeed talented and very consistant. one of the best books I have read. I would recommend it for anyone at anytime
The msbshsvvxczbznskqkbzvvxvxbxmxkxkskdbbxnxkxjslamzncbvrbdksmxn cbfhskmzn bfvdbdkkz bfbejsklzm cbdbejkzm nnfbrhjwskz kmxnbsbehskxnbrehehizk bcvrvjwkxmxbfbh
[img=recommend] pretty interesting😎😎😎😎😎😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏 it's good I really like it
Amazing book Author ❤️❤️❤️ Just started today and now I cannot stop myself from reading more. FL and ML have awesome chemistry together. Loved it. Keep it up.
Dear Author, well done! The story has an interesting plot, your characters are expressive, and all the descriptions are nicely written. You did great work!
Spoiler de révélation This is just the right romance novel for you if you're looking for some fluffy romance!💖😌 Although, the MC and ML will experience a long distance 'relationship' it won't stop the two of them from having their sweet interactions!😍 Reading this will make your heart feel full because of these three things! 💕 Romantic relationships ✔️ Family relationships ✔️ Friendships ✔️ I don't need to talk about the writing style and grammar in this novel, it's clear with the stars that I gave to this novel! 👌 so you guys should try it out! Ps: Zach is such a husband material character! He's the reason why the romance in this novel is so sweet 🤧😍✨
✓ Amazing plot! ✓ Not overly amazing FL to the point that you would puke but brilliant nonetheless! ✓ Caring, flirt and powerful ML ✓ Great story! ✓ Word and description clarity - slowburn and pace is kind of just steady... This story is worth a read! You won't regret it!
You see the gif below? That's how you will feel every time you read this and our fl and ml's exchange <3 GIVE THIS BOOK A GO <3 You won't regret it! One of the best good-feeling book I have read! Thank you for sharing this story with us, author!
A heartwarming love story with smart and not so overpowered FL and Cool , bossy and overprotective ML. 💖Plot is great with mystery ,suspense, romance and mature content. 😉 To future viewers :- You will not regret reading this story. It's definitely worth it.