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This is a delight, gold rated fanfic! I cannot imagine how Luffy's story will be if it goes like this!!
What a highly recommended one piece funfic, many wild one piece theories included in the story are very reasonable. [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
This is an absolute masterpiece. A gem amidst a sea of stones. I spent hours searching for good one piece fanfics and this is one of the few I have found (3 altogether). I can't wait to read another one written by the author and I wholeheartedly recommend this for any one.
Very good book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I adore the tense fighting and ending !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope to see more from the Author!!!!!!!!
I honestly prefer the story until after Impel Down arc. It felt like Smoker was making the difference that he wanted, but its hard to say that now. With most of the characters and places in the New World having been decimated by Blackbeard, with most characters and their homes being dead or destroyed, it feels like if he had done nothing the world would be fine. It doesn’t help that little was shown of what he did during the timeskip, so all I can say for certain is that the world is worse off having had him in it, which kind of makes the story and his goals feel worthless. Sure not everything is worse, but most of that is before Impel Down. I do wish I could give the story more, but honestly after the recent chapter where the Roger, Redhair, and Whitebeard pirates as well as the Mink Tribe all die for basically nothing, I can’t rate it higher.
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high teir(-A to +S) onepiece fic, no edgelord mc or megahacks, on chapter 70~, mc is a marine of garp's faction, and his ambition aligns with his justice, to fell the sky, go against the heavens and tear down the celestial dragons and free the world from their reign warning, mc will not be preserving cannon and will be trying to save people(how dare he) based on his knowledge
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Its an okay story but there are too many inconsistencies and he dosent act like he knows what going on when he has the information already. The inconsistencies make it hard to read and the author couldn't even get MC's age right
very well built. the theories included and the way story is progressing can make it one of the top 3 in op ff ever, if not the best. there is no inconsistency and plot holes too, not even forced plot .everything is progressing very well, and even though there is only one last arc right now, and the story end is already basically understood , i am still looking forward to it
Incredible story, I can't stop reading, it has a lot of potential and the author put it to good use in this story. well although the world government is a bit stupid after all they also went with Luffy so I have nothing to complain about, they are simply stupid and very trusting.
One of my favorite one piece fanfic , Smoker as an Mc hasn't been done before I think so it's a breath of fresh air. The character development is great and there are little to no grammatical mistakes . There are some oc characters but I love all of em, especially Cancer . I just wished it updated more often ,but I'll rather pick quality over quantity . So a pretty good read in general.
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Listen, I'm not glazing or meat riding or anything. But, this book is soo good, I can't read other fanfics the same. I liked the very idea from the start, but this story completely shocked me to the bone. Character development, story building, interesting plot.
No puedo decir nada más aparte de que me encanta la historia y sigue con ella porque de verdad que enserio es la mejor que he leído que involucra un protagonista MC que es reencarnación de alguien como smoke que hace de la marine un verdadero héroe en un mundo como lo es ONE PIECE donde se supone solo los piratas son el centro de todo por lo que 10 de 10 de mi parte 👍👍
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Solo puedo decir WHOO por qué enserio me encanta la historia espero siga y los capítulos lleguen porque la historia es tanto emocionante como adictiva por lo que te deseo lo mejor en lo que hagas para que puedas seguir publicando la tanto como se te sea posible ✌️
This is a great piece of work my favorite OP ffic so far. keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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i didnt read the manga nor did i watch the anime. but for some reason i really like this fanfic.
My god, what an absolute banger of a story. I'm at a loss of words. Honestly, not one of the, but 'the' best one piece fanfic I have ever read. Hands down. There's no equal.What masterful storytelling, what character development, what depth of writing...Author, please write an original book. You have the skill.
Been keeping up with the story for a while and I just finished reading the last chapter of Volume 1. This is one of my favorite One Piece fics and I must say that the plot is great, the characters and the world feel like they belong in One Piece, and that there is a noticeable improvement in quality the more you read.
this is the best fanfic I have ever read even if I never get to read another fanfic Aston as I get to read this one I will be happy as of chapter 97 I'm so exited as to what going to happen next chapter I also like how your willing to kill off important characters like that person also I just love the personality and actions of all the characters like smoker gion cancer and even the side characters like the old man from ohara I just love this fanfic
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This is a delight, gold rated fanfic! I cannot imagine how Luffy's story will be if it goes like this!!
What a highly recommended one piece funfic, many wild one piece theories included in the story are very reasonable. [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
This is an absolute masterpiece. A gem amidst a sea of stones. I spent hours searching for good one piece fanfics and this is one of the few I have found (3 altogether). I can't wait to read another one written by the author and I wholeheartedly recommend this for any one.
Very good book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I adore the tense fighting and ending !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope to see more from the Author!!!!!!!!
I honestly prefer the story until after Impel Down arc. It felt like Smoker was making the difference that he wanted, but its hard to say that now. With most of the characters and places in the New World having been decimated by Blackbeard, with most characters and their homes being dead or destroyed, it feels like if he had done nothing the world would be fine. It doesn’t help that little was shown of what he did during the timeskip, so all I can say for certain is that the world is worse off having had him in it, which kind of makes the story and his goals feel worthless. Sure not everything is worse, but most of that is before Impel Down. I do wish I could give the story more, but honestly after the recent chapter where the Roger, Redhair, and Whitebeard pirates as well as the Mink Tribe all die for basically nothing, I can’t rate it higher.
Spoiler de révélation high teir(-A to +S) onepiece fic, no edgelord mc or megahacks, on chapter 70~, mc is a marine of garp's faction, and his ambition aligns with his justice, to fell the sky, go against the heavens and tear down the celestial dragons and free the world from their reign warning, mc will not be preserving cannon and will be trying to save people(how dare he) based on his knowledge
Spoiler de révélation Its an okay story but there are too many inconsistencies and he dosent act like he knows what going on when he has the information already. The inconsistencies make it hard to read and the author couldn't even get MC's age right
very well built. the theories included and the way story is progressing can make it one of the top 3 in op ff ever, if not the best. there is no inconsistency and plot holes too, not even forced plot .everything is progressing very well, and even though there is only one last arc right now, and the story end is already basically understood , i am still looking forward to it
Incredible story, I can't stop reading, it has a lot of potential and the author put it to good use in this story. well although the world government is a bit stupid after all they also went with Luffy so I have nothing to complain about, they are simply stupid and very trusting.
One of my favorite one piece fanfic , Smoker as an Mc hasn't been done before I think so it's a breath of fresh air. The character development is great and there are little to no grammatical mistakes . There are some oc characters but I love all of em, especially Cancer . I just wished it updated more often ,but I'll rather pick quality over quantity . So a pretty good read in general.
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Listen, I'm not glazing or meat riding or anything. But, this book is soo good, I can't read other fanfics the same. I liked the very idea from the start, but this story completely shocked me to the bone. Character development, story building, interesting plot.
No puedo decir nada más aparte de que me encanta la historia y sigue con ella porque de verdad que enserio es la mejor que he leído que involucra un protagonista MC que es reencarnación de alguien como smoke que hace de la marine un verdadero héroe en un mundo como lo es ONE PIECE donde se supone solo los piratas son el centro de todo por lo que 10 de 10 de mi parte 👍👍
Spoiler de révélation Solo puedo decir WHOO por qué enserio me encanta la historia espero siga y los capítulos lleguen porque la historia es tanto emocionante como adictiva por lo que te deseo lo mejor en lo que hagas para que puedas seguir publicando la tanto como se te sea posible ✌️
This is a great piece of work my favorite OP ffic so far. keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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i didnt read the manga nor did i watch the anime. but for some reason i really like this fanfic.
My god, what an absolute banger of a story. I'm at a loss of words. Honestly, not one of the, but 'the' best one piece fanfic I have ever read. Hands down. There's no equal.What masterful storytelling, what character development, what depth of writing...Author, please write an original book. You have the skill.
Been keeping up with the story for a while and I just finished reading the last chapter of Volume 1. This is one of my favorite One Piece fics and I must say that the plot is great, the characters and the world feel like they belong in One Piece, and that there is a noticeable improvement in quality the more you read.
this is the best fanfic I have ever read even if I never get to read another fanfic Aston as I get to read this one I will be happy as of chapter 97 I'm so exited as to what going to happen next chapter I also like how your willing to kill off important characters like that person also I just love the personality and actions of all the characters like smoker gion cancer and even the side characters like the old man from ohara I just love this fanfic
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