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love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I wi
I quite liked the story, the only thing I would have to criticize is that there comes a point where I don't know if it's supposed to be a Gundam fik or a Geass fik.
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can anyone tell me that ir the author can not update or her dropped this fanfic
I’ve read a LOT of Code Geass stories. In fact I’m not exaggerating when I say I’ve read thousands and thousands of fanfics, Webnovels and Lights novels, so believ me when I say I always enjoy a new spin or idea when it comes to web novels. This is quite a unique story when it comes to Codw Geass, and anyone who is a fan looking for a new story or plot, this is a MUST read!
the reviews are... ahm~ controversial?? I see that mc does have character development (likely), and it doesn't seem much bad, I really love code geass and it's my first time reading a ff on it. fingers crossed hope it's gonna be good
The story was slow but good, MC doesn't have a goal now, but he will. It's good story somewhat just need some work on grammar. Anyway i really thank you for your dedication for this Code Geass FF. [img=recommend]👏👏👏👏
only on chapter 2 but had to say it. the writing so far feels like a script in a play. it feels robotic. like its not meant to be read but watched on a stage.
to lazy to write LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
Un desorden no total, no hay lógica en muchas cosas, no hay buenos propósitos, el protagonista se vuelve loco cada rato, eso y mucho más destruye todo
The mc doesn't do anything at all he doesn't even have any goals. Plus around chapters 6 I think he gets a girl pregnant then stays for a few years then leaves just because it will cause him problems the mc is just so unlikable for me I just cant read anymore
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Этот фанфик один из немногих по CG но почему каноничная история? он столько бабочек раздавил... люди не должны были родиться те же самые! Просто из-за взаимодействия персонажа с людьми из канона. Буду следить и дальше, но сюжет не понравился.
Came back to the book after a couple of months and i can safely say that nothing has happened for almost 86 chapters. side characters screaming at each other in robots is the norm. Plus the dude is still a cuck so theres that too
The best Code Geass Fanfic that is available on this platform. Really love how the story is developed and the character development of MCs. How our main lead react to the things that happens is quite funny to read. As a fan of Code Geass, I would wholeheartly recommended this. Although it's advisable to have some knowledge about Code Geass beforehand. Updating Stability is also good. Gets chapters daily. Which is quite awesome. Hope author continues this Fanfic till the end. It might get a bit boring because of the pace but otherwise this Fanfic is pure gem to all the Code Geass fans present on this platform. I have been here since there were probably around 60~70 chapters and in the start. And I can definitely say that I like this Fanfic. Yes, there was no clear goal for MC in the start of the story, but what can he do? he was transmigrated a very long time before the start of the plot. And the ML and his feelings are realistic. There might be some loopholes but that can be ignored easily. (PS. I just realised that I didn't gave this Fanfic a review XD)
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
i likes the start soms wat bug the the Guy became a **** and he Just left wife and child behind because he is emortel end left Them with the Sandnes that they could not buurt there huisband
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Muy buena serie la verdad y para ser el primer fan fic de code geass que leo la verdad me sorprendió lo entretenida que es y la verdad sería genial si se queda con la compañía de Marianne ya es quien mejor se adapta a su personalidad, por qué si hay algo que le encontré algo tedioso es que habla mucho de su esposa pero esa relación es más como un simple relleno digo el mismo dice que no pasó mucho tiempo con ella después de tener el hijo como para que le siga afectando tanto
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
There is very little understanding of Code Geass in this story, and that bothered me, but my biggest gripe was how aimless the protagonist was. In a dozen chapters there was never any kind of declared or implied purpose for the MC. He just floated around like a jellyfish. You did a good job creating a sense of progression over the decades, and for a bit you showed that you can stay in the pocket and deliver meaningful character interaction, but you ran afoul of starting a story over a century before the source start and then wanting to rush to that start without altering anything. It made Alister very impactless, almost neutered as a protagonist.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Pretty Bad If you Like Code Geass. The Author butchers the History with in the CG Universe with in the First 20 chapters when he weites about the ww's and america which ist by that Point ( after the Britisch Isles where lost Napoleon and a failed Revolution from Washington ) was reformt into the Holly Britannien Empire. so overall Just a Bad story that Kind of resambles the true glory of Code Geass thank you very much
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have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I will be there I love of my heart emoji and then I love and I will text when I’m done with I’m going to get the car and I’ll come back to your apartment to pick it just in to the house so that we don’t get a bunch more of stuff to get rid off of it so that we won’t be able to go get stuff for the house car is there any chance of it that I can come over there to help with the car if I need anything I don’t want it to go be in my house I have don’t have a problem getting a new vehicle because I’m not getting it a lot anymore so just let you guys go and I’ll go to your house if I you know and get the money so I don’t want to be in there I don’t have any to get the money for the house is there anyway I have no problem getting my car and then I don’t have want to go get my money I don’t know what else to do that I have a good day and I’ll see if you guys can get it just don’t be safe love and I will be talk to me love you have fun and I hope you’re welcome to go get it is I don’t have a great weekend bye see if you can come over and I will see talk soon I have a safe drive safe love and I’ll be careful I wi
I quite liked the story, the only thing I would have to criticize is that there comes a point where I don't know if it's supposed to be a Gundam fik or a Geass fik.
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can anyone tell me that ir the author can not update or her dropped this fanfic
I’ve read a LOT of Code Geass stories. In fact I’m not exaggerating when I say I’ve read thousands and thousands of fanfics, Webnovels and Lights novels, so believ me when I say I always enjoy a new spin or idea when it comes to web novels. This is quite a unique story when it comes to Codw Geass, and anyone who is a fan looking for a new story or plot, this is a MUST read!
the reviews are... ahm~ controversial?? I see that mc does have character development (likely), and it doesn't seem much bad, I really love code geass and it's my first time reading a ff on it. fingers crossed hope it's gonna be good
The story was slow but good, MC doesn't have a goal now, but he will. It's good story somewhat just need some work on grammar. Anyway i really thank you for your dedication for this Code Geass FF. [img=recommend]👏👏👏👏
only on chapter 2 but had to say it. the writing so far feels like a script in a play. it feels robotic. like its not meant to be read but watched on a stage.
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Un desorden no total, no hay lógica en muchas cosas, no hay buenos propósitos, el protagonista se vuelve loco cada rato, eso y mucho más destruye todo
The mc doesn't do anything at all he doesn't even have any goals. Plus around chapters 6 I think he gets a girl pregnant then stays for a few years then leaves just because it will cause him problems the mc is just so unlikable for me I just cant read anymore
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Этот фанфик один из немногих по CG но почему каноничная история? он столько бабочек раздавил... люди не должны были родиться те же самые! Просто из-за взаимодействия персонажа с людьми из канона. Буду следить и дальше, но сюжет не понравился.
Came back to the book after a couple of months and i can safely say that nothing has happened for almost 86 chapters. side characters screaming at each other in robots is the norm. Plus the dude is still a cuck so theres that too
The best Code Geass Fanfic that is available on this platform. Really love how the story is developed and the character development of MCs. How our main lead react to the things that happens is quite funny to read. As a fan of Code Geass, I would wholeheartly recommended this. Although it's advisable to have some knowledge about Code Geass beforehand. Updating Stability is also good. Gets chapters daily. Which is quite awesome. Hope author continues this Fanfic till the end. It might get a bit boring because of the pace but otherwise this Fanfic is pure gem to all the Code Geass fans present on this platform. I have been here since there were probably around 60~70 chapters and in the start. And I can definitely say that I like this Fanfic. Yes, there was no clear goal for MC in the start of the story, but what can he do? he was transmigrated a very long time before the start of the plot. And the ML and his feelings are realistic. There might be some loopholes but that can be ignored easily. (PS. I just realised that I didn't gave this Fanfic a review XD)
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
i likes the start soms wat bug the the Guy became a **** and he Just left wife and child behind because he is emortel end left Them with the Sandnes that they could not buurt there huisband
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Muy buena serie la verdad y para ser el primer fan fic de code geass que leo la verdad me sorprendió lo entretenida que es y la verdad sería genial si se queda con la compañía de Marianne ya es quien mejor se adapta a su personalidad, por qué si hay algo que le encontré algo tedioso es que habla mucho de su esposa pero esa relación es más como un simple relleno digo el mismo dice que no pasó mucho tiempo con ella después de tener el hijo como para que le siga afectando tanto
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
There is very little understanding of Code Geass in this story, and that bothered me, but my biggest gripe was how aimless the protagonist was. In a dozen chapters there was never any kind of declared or implied purpose for the MC. He just floated around like a jellyfish. You did a good job creating a sense of progression over the decades, and for a bit you showed that you can stay in the pocket and deliver meaningful character interaction, but you ran afoul of starting a story over a century before the source start and then wanting to rush to that start without altering anything. It made Alister very impactless, almost neutered as a protagonist.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Pretty Bad If you Like Code Geass. The Author butchers the History with in the CG Universe with in the First 20 chapters when he weites about the ww's and america which ist by that Point ( after the Britisch Isles where lost Napoleon and a failed Revolution from Washington ) was reformt into the Holly Britannien Empire. so overall Just a Bad story that Kind of resambles the true glory of Code Geass thank you very much
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