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The Story is well written. I like that the MC is not way to OP like in other stories. Comfy pace. However you should try to upload more frequently.
It's an average Chinese cultivation novel of an idiotic MC. What makes it more idiotic is that the author gave him a cheat of a mobile but instead took away most of his brain cells. The mobile has many functions and yet the MC keeps harping about his low talents and doesn't use any of its functions. For eg the mobile has a 'baidu map' equivalent to Google maps which can show the topography as well as the location of cultivators but inspite of that he gets surrounded by demon cultivators (in ch 73) So in the end he is just a mix of non-brained Chinese MC and a normie submissive japanese MC
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Since this story is about to get buried in Webnovel I figure I'll write my first review ever. Hopefully it will be found and picked up later. It's 5 stars because it has a solid premise and also has potential. I'd honestly give it 4 stars based on what is shown as of the 36 chapters here, but 99% of people seem to have a pass or fail type of rating system so I can only adjust it in the future so as to not harm the novel. For those purely desiring an overpowered system, an OP mc, a pet taming, or an extremely fast paced novel where the MC is already in core formation or tier 3 power in less than 40 chapters... this novel isn't for you. For those who want a slower paced novel (built for a 1000+ chapters easy) with a lot of world building and some hardships where the mc is actually shown to struggle.. the target audience is somewhere in this group. This story reminds me a bit of the earlier translated web novels from when translating xuanhuan and xianxia web novels started to blow up, albeit not quite at their level yet. Now, the synopsis and title may be a little misleading, but I'd still say the story so far has been oriented around the mc's clan. I am interested if it will be like this in the far future of the story though, as it seems hard to maintain since mcs usually grow too fast for their clans to keep up without what are basically cheats, so 99% of the time they get left behind. His smartphone thankfully isn't too overpowered yet and only has 2 of the functions listed as of chapter 40. Granted, the trading currency for spirit stones seems extremely broken so I kind of hope he never gets that one. The story also "skips time" pretty frequently, but it at least makes sense. In a story of immortal cultivation where the mc is cultivating at a fairly normal pace that's bound to happen as there will be lots of downtime. There is a decent amount of explaining and world building, especially at the start, which I know can turn people off. Lastly, the author is trying to give the idea that the mc is a normal cultivator struggling with his path to immortality. Alas, he is still an mc with a couple cheat codes that give him an edge. Overall, the story has potential and hopefully the author can grow with this one. It is a tough writing style/novel to attempt and it's not for everyone to like.
it's worth it, im hoping to pick this novel, even the story is slow that's the good part of being cultivator. it's worth it, im hoping to pick this novel, even the story is slow that's the good part of being cultivator.
The fact that the MC, doesn't become a foundation cultivator off the bat, sits right with me, and the pacing is amazing in this novel. If you want a nice and good quality novel to read this is the one.
Very slow, 40 chapters and the protagonist is just an NPC who is only in the story to narrate, he literally does nothing, 40 years of time skip is still weak, the synopsis is a lie since the cell phone only appears in 2 chapters and still it's useless
I dont really get it, why the pople here give 1 star ratings. There so many reallly trash trash novels that people give 5 stars and to this one you give 1 star? I dont think that it derserves 1 star. Story develepment is slow, many cultivation novels are the same. He has a „system“ not really. He has phone that can help him in many things like, Upgrading his cultivation Manual or saving data. But he didnt really use it much and he is not OP right now. Wich is good. I think that Starting from chapter 40-60 he will use it more and more. But like the title says its the story is not only about mc getting stronger. Its avout whole clan getting stronger. Until now the story is ok. Not amazing but ok. I would rate it 8/10. ( Most of the storys here on webnovel are 2/10) Give it a try guys😁
Good cultivation novel, with steady pace and realistic characters. ÈEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE33EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Waste of time. Though it was have been good since it had so many reviews but I was wrong. ..................................................
I love the pace of the novel.The protagonist’ s isn’t overpowered.Also loving his dao companion.This novel has huge potential.Really hope it gets picked.
Not bad tbh just typical story not really with any cheats smart phone barely exists with all the op stories ig it's kinda a breath of fresh air pretty chill pacing.
The novel is good with a nice development I don't know why people want novels to go so fast without introducing how the world they are living is.
looking forward to reading more. character development could be better, it's very slow paced, the first 30 chapters feel like set up for the actual story so far
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The author writes like a child, he tells and doesn't show, it's literally "The MC did this, the MC did that, cue timeskip" every character is poorly written and it's like reading robots interacting.
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In this novel, for those wondering the smartphone has got barely any mention and is a magical treasure used to copy cultivation methods. It is a great novel and I hope this gets voted and gets selected. Until now it doesn't make the protagonist invincible or grant any special powers. Really good writing and this is the most realistic form of cultivation in a really long time. Please voTE!!!
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Actually very good by this websites standards. Ignore the first three chapters, they are basically just info dumps. Anyways i hope this is picked, cuz the rest are pretty bad.
This is very good, the pacing is not too fast and steady for me the way I like it, I just wonder why the MC is not using his phones abilities that much? In any case I need more chapters please
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Extremely bad book. Read 19 chapters and its a sure drop book do not choose it. I wasted time on it, and i rarely say so. Maybe it's better after 30-40 or whatever chapter but you really can eat cactus, if you able to read until then.
Very nice book, I Iike the pacing and the world building. The author seems well versed in his writing, and the paragraphs and plot points run smoothly. %E3%80%8Apart%E2%91%A0%E3%83%BB%E3%83%91%E3%83%BC%E3%83%86%E3%82%A3%E3%83%BC%E3%81%B8%E5%90%91%E3%81%8B%E3%81%86%E7%9D%80%E8%A1%A3%E5%B0%BB%E3%80%8B%E3%80%80no-365%E3%80%90%E4%BD%95%E3%81%8B%E3%81%A8/
MC redefined the concept of stupidity, all his clan has been chased by enemies and he used his name for registrated in the system of an another clan.
Spoiler de révélation Almost 40years old(25chapters) still weak asf and used cheat only once that too only to better his own cultivation method let alone help family or clan ... Can't even understand why use name as smartphone to decieve it's just low lvl cheat system nothing special
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Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . . Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . . Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . . Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . .
This is the dumbest Mc & author I have read in my life ? How can a Mc have a system phone supreme treasure and not u use it ? He could have deduct countless supreme cultivation methods predict the future with the fate if something will have to the Lu clan? Bro is already at his 40’s doing both but cultivating normally like some idiot he can deduce countles pills formula I bet that girl is going to betray him dumb b*****d he just use the phone to deduct some low level cultivation method one when he 18 and forgot about it it be. Like 25 years It frustrating lol trash trash trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️
The Story is well written. I like that the MC is not way to OP like in other stories. Comfy pace. However you should try to upload more frequently.
It's an average Chinese cultivation novel of an idiotic MC. What makes it more idiotic is that the author gave him a cheat of a mobile but instead took away most of his brain cells. The mobile has many functions and yet the MC keeps harping about his low talents and doesn't use any of its functions. For eg the mobile has a 'baidu map' equivalent to Google maps which can show the topography as well as the location of cultivators but inspite of that he gets surrounded by demon cultivators (in ch 73) So in the end he is just a mix of non-brained Chinese MC and a normie submissive japanese MC
Spoiler de révélation Since this story is about to get buried in Webnovel I figure I'll write my first review ever. Hopefully it will be found and picked up later. It's 5 stars because it has a solid premise and also has potential. I'd honestly give it 4 stars based on what is shown as of the 36 chapters here, but 99% of people seem to have a pass or fail type of rating system so I can only adjust it in the future so as to not harm the novel. For those purely desiring an overpowered system, an OP mc, a pet taming, or an extremely fast paced novel where the MC is already in core formation or tier 3 power in less than 40 chapters... this novel isn't for you. For those who want a slower paced novel (built for a 1000+ chapters easy) with a lot of world building and some hardships where the mc is actually shown to struggle.. the target audience is somewhere in this group. This story reminds me a bit of the earlier translated web novels from when translating xuanhuan and xianxia web novels started to blow up, albeit not quite at their level yet. Now, the synopsis and title may be a little misleading, but I'd still say the story so far has been oriented around the mc's clan. I am interested if it will be like this in the far future of the story though, as it seems hard to maintain since mcs usually grow too fast for their clans to keep up without what are basically cheats, so 99% of the time they get left behind. His smartphone thankfully isn't too overpowered yet and only has 2 of the functions listed as of chapter 40. Granted, the trading currency for spirit stones seems extremely broken so I kind of hope he never gets that one. The story also "skips time" pretty frequently, but it at least makes sense. In a story of immortal cultivation where the mc is cultivating at a fairly normal pace that's bound to happen as there will be lots of downtime. There is a decent amount of explaining and world building, especially at the start, which I know can turn people off. Lastly, the author is trying to give the idea that the mc is a normal cultivator struggling with his path to immortality. Alas, he is still an mc with a couple cheat codes that give him an edge. Overall, the story has potential and hopefully the author can grow with this one. It is a tough writing style/novel to attempt and it's not for everyone to like.
it's worth it, im hoping to pick this novel, even the story is slow that's the good part of being cultivator. it's worth it, im hoping to pick this novel, even the story is slow that's the good part of being cultivator.
The fact that the MC, doesn't become a foundation cultivator off the bat, sits right with me, and the pacing is amazing in this novel. If you want a nice and good quality novel to read this is the one.
Very slow, 40 chapters and the protagonist is just an NPC who is only in the story to narrate, he literally does nothing, 40 years of time skip is still weak, the synopsis is a lie since the cell phone only appears in 2 chapters and still it's useless
I dont really get it, why the pople here give 1 star ratings. There so many reallly trash trash novels that people give 5 stars and to this one you give 1 star? I dont think that it derserves 1 star. Story develepment is slow, many cultivation novels are the same. He has a „system“ not really. He has phone that can help him in many things like, Upgrading his cultivation Manual or saving data. But he didnt really use it much and he is not OP right now. Wich is good. I think that Starting from chapter 40-60 he will use it more and more. But like the title says its the story is not only about mc getting stronger. Its avout whole clan getting stronger. Until now the story is ok. Not amazing but ok. I would rate it 8/10. ( Most of the storys here on webnovel are 2/10) Give it a try guys😁
Good cultivation novel, with steady pace and realistic characters. ÈEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE33EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. . Very good novel. .
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Waste of time. Though it was have been good since it had so many reviews but I was wrong. ..................................................
I love the pace of the novel.The protagonist’ s isn’t overpowered.Also loving his dao companion.This novel has huge potential.Really hope it gets picked.
Not bad tbh just typical story not really with any cheats smart phone barely exists with all the op stories ig it's kinda a breath of fresh air pretty chill pacing.
The novel is good with a nice development I don't know why people want novels to go so fast without introducing how the world they are living is.
looking forward to reading more. character development could be better, it's very slow paced, the first 30 chapters feel like set up for the actual story so far
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The author writes like a child, he tells and doesn't show, it's literally "The MC did this, the MC did that, cue timeskip" every character is poorly written and it's like reading robots interacting.
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Spoiler de révélation In this novel, for those wondering the smartphone has got barely any mention and is a magical treasure used to copy cultivation methods. It is a great novel and I hope this gets voted and gets selected. Until now it doesn't make the protagonist invincible or grant any special powers. Really good writing and this is the most realistic form of cultivation in a really long time. Please voTE!!!
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Actually very good by this websites standards. Ignore the first three chapters, they are basically just info dumps. Anyways i hope this is picked, cuz the rest are pretty bad.
This is very good, the pacing is not too fast and steady for me the way I like it, I just wonder why the MC is not using his phones abilities that much? In any case I need more chapters please
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Extremely bad book. Read 19 chapters and its a sure drop book do not choose it. I wasted time on it, and i rarely say so. Maybe it's better after 30-40 or whatever chapter but you really can eat cactus, if you able to read until then.
Very nice book, I Iike the pacing and the world building. The author seems well versed in his writing, and the paragraphs and plot points run smoothly. %E3%80%8Apart%E2%91%A0%E3%83%BB%E3%83%91%E3%83%BC%E3%83%86%E3%82%A3%E3%83%BC%E3%81%B8%E5%90%91%E3%81%8B%E3%81%86%E7%9D%80%E8%A1%A3%E5%B0%BB%E3%80%8B%E3%80%80no-365%E3%80%90%E4%BD%95%E3%81%8B%E3%81%A8/
MC redefined the concept of stupidity, all his clan has been chased by enemies and he used his name for registrated in the system of an another clan.
Spoiler de révélation Almost 40years old(25chapters) still weak asf and used cheat only once that too only to better his own cultivation method let alone help family or clan ... Can't even understand why use name as smartphone to decieve it's just low lvl cheat system nothing special
I pray 🙏 that this gets picked 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . . Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . . Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . . Muito boa tem um ótimo desenvolvimento, uma pena ter gastado 3 capítulos com a introdução, mas espero q seja escolhida. . .
This is the dumbest Mc & author I have read in my life ? How can a Mc have a system phone supreme treasure and not u use it ? He could have deduct countless supreme cultivation methods predict the future with the fate if something will have to the Lu clan? Bro is already at his 40’s doing both but cultivating normally like some idiot he can deduce countles pills formula I bet that girl is going to betray him dumb b*****d he just use the phone to deduct some low level cultivation method one when he 18 and forgot about it it be. Like 25 years It frustrating lol trash trash trash 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️