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I understand if the story is slow. But this is wrong advertised. It would be better to say that there is no system since it is very underutilized. It is said to be clan cultivation novel but I have not seen MC help anyone. There are multiple time skips but I don't feel any progress. It is different, but not "good" different. There have only been 20 chapters till this though.
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Trial Read Review (only from synopsis): (IOHOSBICPAHTTP) - So this guy is in a world where this virtual game can merge with reality. He levels up one skill (the fireball, supposably) and it becomes super OP that it can literally blast a hole through the earth. Honestly, can’t see much potential in this one. It’s like any other virtual reality power and does not seem to have much diversity in its plot. This will have to go in my maybe read list. (1MTDBIABT) - Guy gets doomsday system one month before doomsday. This sounds like an interesting plot with some potential (I hope). All I wish for is it to not be like on of those trashy apocalyptic novels.I will put this on my read list for now. (MCCIE) - Guy dies then his conscience goes into an eyeball. It can evolve and whatnot and he gets OP. If I’m being honest about this novel, I’m not feeling good vibes. It sounds like one of those grindy novels with no actual plot. Oh well, I will check it out. (ICVCA) - Guy transmigrates but can see the stats of other humans. Whoopee do. What a fun plot (that definitely has not been used many times before). I honestly am sick of these types of novels. But who knows? Maybe this one will be good (not placing my bets on it). (OG:IAAPP) - This plot is basically like the first one excet that he gets the privileged player system which allows him to get more EXP and more things in general. I honestly can not get why so many writers follow this plot. It has been overused too many times. I will maybe read this one (if I get super bored). (EHFS) - Protag gets four skills. But so does everyone else. This is the synopsis. That’s all. (CC:ITWMS) - If you have read my reviews before, you will know I like sect/clan/company or whatever building novels. This is one of those except that he has his smartphone which can do many things. Google maps makes him see the terrain, banking system lets him exchange currency, ect. This is one I will definitely read.
The writing is quit good. Story development so far is slower than a turtle. Since the development is so slow we dont know that much about the mc, but he used his phone, which is supposed to be his cheat according to the synopsis, 1 time in the first 18 years. That brings some questions for me... The updates are a joke since it is only in the trial phase. The world setting is ok I guess, though I'm still confused how some things work. The biggest minus is the really slow passed writing so far. I hope it picks up some momentum.
author a near 10+years wasting the usage if the phone ?? he can atleast try body tempering technique or search for a method to enhance the farm quality also wasting that much time where many can be done atleast the farm could enhance cultivation speed sell for higher money to get resources search for more cultivation arts to perfect and refine his art more and more making a stronger foundation increaseing his speed you completely created a huge time skip loophole here with no achievement in between except level up sorry but thats unbelievable
Spoiler de révélation
Muy buena lectura, la verdad es que esperaba que el mc sería un tipo dominador, pero contrariamente a mis expectativas es un tipo que es talentoso y ni usa mucho el celular, me imaginaba que el tipo seria el patriarca y que usaría su truco para ser más fuerte su clan....en fin, no te puedo decir mucho ya que solo e visualizado 20 capítulos.
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At least they didn't have Tinder on their device. It would be a nightmare for a jade-skinned virgin tracker to form some crazy harem. To take up more space an update. The fertilizer crisis (Potassium) in Brazil is already being discussed by politicians. They want to dig up indigenous land in the north to extract potassium from the soil. Nothing like a good European war to extract the urge for genocide from Brazilian politicians.
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This novel is steady and well paced not like other trash novels with fillers.It definitely has the potential to become a 1000 chapter novel.please don't let it be buried.There are already countless fillers.
I understand if the story is slow. But this is wrong advertised. It would be better to say that there is no system since it is very underutilized. It is said to be clan cultivation novel but I have not seen MC help anyone. There are multiple time skips but I don't feel any progress. It is different, but not "good" different. There have only been 20 chapters till this though.
MTL? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis): (IOHOSBICPAHTTP) - So this guy is in a world where this virtual game can merge with reality. He levels up one skill (the fireball, supposably) and it becomes super OP that it can literally blast a hole through the earth. Honestly, can’t see much potential in this one. It’s like any other virtual reality power and does not seem to have much diversity in its plot. This will have to go in my maybe read list. (1MTDBIABT) - Guy gets doomsday system one month before doomsday. This sounds like an interesting plot with some potential (I hope). All I wish for is it to not be like on of those trashy apocalyptic novels.I will put this on my read list for now. (MCCIE) - Guy dies then his conscience goes into an eyeball. It can evolve and whatnot and he gets OP. If I’m being honest about this novel, I’m not feeling good vibes. It sounds like one of those grindy novels with no actual plot. Oh well, I will check it out. (ICVCA) - Guy transmigrates but can see the stats of other humans. Whoopee do. What a fun plot (that definitely has not been used many times before). I honestly am sick of these types of novels. But who knows? Maybe this one will be good (not placing my bets on it). (OG:IAAPP) - This plot is basically like the first one excet that he gets the privileged player system which allows him to get more EXP and more things in general. I honestly can not get why so many writers follow this plot. It has been overused too many times. I will maybe read this one (if I get super bored). (EHFS) - Protag gets four skills. But so does everyone else. This is the synopsis. That’s all. (CC:ITWMS) - If you have read my reviews before, you will know I like sect/clan/company or whatever building novels. This is one of those except that he has his smartphone which can do many things. Google maps makes him see the terrain, banking system lets him exchange currency, ect. This is one I will definitely read.
The writing is quit good. Story development so far is slower than a turtle. Since the development is so slow we dont know that much about the mc, but he used his phone, which is supposed to be his cheat according to the synopsis, 1 time in the first 18 years. That brings some questions for me... The updates are a joke since it is only in the trial phase. The world setting is ok I guess, though I'm still confused how some things work. The biggest minus is the really slow passed writing so far. I hope it picks up some momentum.
author a near 10+years wasting the usage if the phone ?? he can atleast try body tempering technique or search for a method to enhance the farm quality also wasting that much time where many can be done atleast the farm could enhance cultivation speed sell for higher money to get resources search for more cultivation arts to perfect and refine his art more and more making a stronger foundation increaseing his speed you completely created a huge time skip loophole here with no achievement in between except level up sorry but thats unbelievable
Spoiler de révélation Muy buena lectura, la verdad es que esperaba que el mc sería un tipo dominador, pero contrariamente a mis expectativas es un tipo que es talentoso y ni usa mucho el celular, me imaginaba que el tipo seria el patriarca y que usaría su truco para ser más fuerte su clan....en fin, no te puedo decir mucho ya que solo e visualizado 20 capítulos.
I like phone…………………………………………. ………………………………………………….. . .,.,,…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
At least they didn't have Tinder on their device. It would be a nightmare for a jade-skinned virgin tracker to form some crazy harem. To take up more space an update. The fertilizer crisis (Potassium) in Brazil is already being discussed by politicians. They want to dig up indigenous land in the north to extract potassium from the soil. Nothing like a good European war to extract the urge for genocide from Brazilian politicians.
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A Chinese version of the Japanese light novel, where a high school student goes to a magical isekai world with a smarthphone? ...........................
Looking good hope it gets picked as well.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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This novel is steady and well paced not like other trash novels with fillers.It definitely has the potential to become a 1000 chapter novel.please don't let it be buried.There are already countless fillers.