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book has good stkry building and is abke to capture your imagination pulled an all nighter on accident to finish
Yes, we understood from the end of the book that the main character is a Psychopath. The ending did not satisfy me, it progressed well at first but then the story slowed down...
I really liked this novel but after certain point of time the MC just stopped using his main powers he was given then latter complaints that why is he weak.
I just wanted to let everyone know that this fan fiction is much better than most where the story is all about getting stronger and expanding the harem.
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Pls answer some of my questions? is this mc evil or not? any female lead, harem, romance? is mc simp or is he kind or stupid? In WN many times its just click bait, I just wanna clear some stuff before trying anything. i will edit this review, once someone answer my question.
The first few chapter is good, the mc used every little means beyond human moral for his enjoyment and goal, using all his cheats. but it goes downhill with massive plotholes, forced logic about the power system and him suddenly not using his op cheats, at first he goes from lvl1 to 6 by hypnotizing the whole island population and all its visitor and suddenly not using it to lvl up. All in all I don't recommend it reading past chapter 15 and up. Kudos to the author for the first few enjoyable chapters and brilliant idea.
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1 том был прекрасен , но со второго тома mc потерял память, ему отключили систему, и вообще 2 том просто испортил весь фанфик 3 звезды поставил из-за прекрасного 1 тома
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I really wish there were more like this even if it was rushed and the mc got older which is kind of mean author >:( I still love this fan fic thanks!
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The villain has always been interesting, the scenes of murder and robbery, the author Your first novel was great. The villain has always been interesting, the scenes of murder and robbery, the author Your first novel was great
This story is getting worse and worse, first he loses and is imprisoned for 100 years, he doesn't want to be cured, and he loses his strength, he can't beat big mom and neither can he beat kaido because of a cheap excuse. Now in volume 3 I'm sure any weak pirate could intimidate him. Really disappointed with the course of the story, the author promised something in the first chapter but each time he moved further away from his initial goal...
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Aside from the names of the characters, this is one of the best one piece ff here. [img=exp]
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
Honestly keep it up amazing loved the way you developed the first volume and the way it ended providing us with such a wonderful backstory hope you don't give this story up you have my support
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An Updated Review I have read to the latest chapter (Vol 2) 16, so you can tell I know about this fanfic. The fanfic is a dark one with an evil and villian MC The MC is also psychopath, who is finding his real goal in life. He is strong, not arrogant, has brain, not immature and thoughtful. The story begin from the ends of 13th century in one piece world. Akuma (MC) is tasked by the demon Lord to become worthy of being a devil. The stories go on, many original characters are introduced and also killed. At the last end war of the 13th century, Akuma lost and is imprisoned forever. Now coming to the pace, it already tagged. Fast Paced, but you feel comfortable with it. Chapter update- One per day Here was a short review. Hope you like it and it's useful. Personally, I love it!
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I have read till the first volume and it's really good. simple English with almost no mistakes. Interesting story, strong characters and our psychopath mc. What more do you need! Now reading second volume!!
I love villain stories and this is one that I enjoyed 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
I enjoyed your fan-fic +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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I don't have anything against scum MC, it's just the novel needs more work to be enjoyable to read. ........................................................
Hello there young un, it is I, the No Name Deity, and saw your work in my travels in the Multiversal land of novels. Here take this *thrusting my hand forward* "What is it, Sir Nameless Old Ancestor 999th Divine sky Samsara Nirvana" "Hmpphh, this is my form of encouragement for you" said No Name with a smug smirk. Then suddenly, the Old Ancestor open his hand above the hand of the [Redacted] and... Nothing, he gave nothing. Then suddenly the Old Ancestor run away while stealing the money of the poor mortal while he was occupied with the nothing he gave him "Hahahahaha, you thought it was me No Name, but it was me, Random Name, bwahahahahah!" said Random Name while running into the sunset with the poor mortal chasing after him full of tears their his eyes
It's a unique OP fanfic. The era, the author use are more than century before the current timeline 1390's. His system are good and overpowered. Also his crew are also good and not dumb or rebellious(hypnotized). The mc not really a psychopath but a chaotic evil. His personality are lacking too show, I hope author improve this. And his goal didn't state it clearly. The downside in this story are the pacing. Like the author shows spoilers already that it destroys mysteries and curiosity or excitement of a reader. Instead of spoiling in all things, you can change it by foreshadowing. Example in that part a navy come to his turf, next is going to sky island that we didn't what happened.
For all my dear readers, I hope you don't just read the chapters and enjoy it. I want you all to share some thoughts also. It's an 18+ novel, so I request all the underage readers to not comment if you feel uncomfortable about the novel. Please support and help me get motivated. I have already said most of what is needed, just don't copy paste it without my permission. Thank you...
book has good stkry building and is abke to capture your imagination pulled an all nighter on accident to finish
Yes, we understood from the end of the book that the main character is a Psychopath. The ending did not satisfy me, it progressed well at first but then the story slowed down...
I really liked this novel but after certain point of time the MC just stopped using his main powers he was given then latter complaints that why is he weak.
I just wanted to let everyone know that this fan fiction is much better than most where the story is all about getting stronger and expanding the harem.
Spoiler de révélation Pls answer some of my questions? is this mc evil or not? any female lead, harem, romance? is mc simp or is he kind or stupid? In WN many times its just click bait, I just wanna clear some stuff before trying anything. i will edit this review, once someone answer my question.
The first few chapter is good, the mc used every little means beyond human moral for his enjoyment and goal, using all his cheats. but it goes downhill with massive plotholes, forced logic about the power system and him suddenly not using his op cheats, at first he goes from lvl1 to 6 by hypnotizing the whole island population and all its visitor and suddenly not using it to lvl up. All in all I don't recommend it reading past chapter 15 and up. Kudos to the author for the first few enjoyable chapters and brilliant idea.
História interessante manda mais gostei muito nada de cliches augo totalmente diferente e novo gostei parabéns pela historia 👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
1 том был прекрасен , но со второго тома mc потерял память, ему отключили систему, и вообще 2 том просто испортил весь фанфик 3 звезды поставил из-за прекрасного 1 тома
Spoiler de révélation I really wish there were more like this even if it was rushed and the mc got older which is kind of mean author >:( I still love this fan fic thanks!
Spoiler de révélation The villain has always been interesting, the scenes of murder and robbery, the author Your first novel was great. The villain has always been interesting, the scenes of murder and robbery, the author Your first novel was great
This story is getting worse and worse, first he loses and is imprisoned for 100 years, he doesn't want to be cured, and he loses his strength, he can't beat big mom and neither can he beat kaido because of a cheap excuse. Now in volume 3 I'm sure any weak pirate could intimidate him. Really disappointed with the course of the story, the author promised something in the first chapter but each time he moved further away from his initial goal...
Spoiler de révélation Aside from the names of the characters, this is one of the best one piece ff here. [img=exp]
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
Honestly keep it up amazing loved the way you developed the first volume and the way it ended providing us with such a wonderful backstory hope you don't give this story up you have my support
Good. Good . . . ...... . .... ... ......... ...... ..... .. Good. Good . . . ...... . .... ... ......... ...... .....Good. Good . . . ...... . .... ... ......... ...... ..... .. ..
An Updated Review I have read to the latest chapter (Vol 2) 16, so you can tell I know about this fanfic. The fanfic is a dark one with an evil and villian MC The MC is also psychopath, who is finding his real goal in life. He is strong, not arrogant, has brain, not immature and thoughtful. The story begin from the ends of 13th century in one piece world. Akuma (MC) is tasked by the demon Lord to become worthy of being a devil. The stories go on, many original characters are introduced and also killed. At the last end war of the 13th century, Akuma lost and is imprisoned forever. Now coming to the pace, it already tagged. Fast Paced, but you feel comfortable with it. Chapter update- One per day Here was a short review. Hope you like it and it's useful. Personally, I love it!
Spoiler de révélation VERY GOOD DAY all of u !!!!! ..................................................................................................................................................
good......................................................................................................................................................................................
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I have read till the first volume and it's really good. simple English with almost no mistakes. Interesting story, strong characters and our psychopath mc. What more do you need! Now reading second volume!!
I love villain stories and this is one that I enjoyed 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
I enjoyed your fan-fic +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Best story ever pls do t drop Ahehhenwhehrjjrbrbrbjrjrjrkfkt [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I don't have anything against scum MC, it's just the novel needs more work to be enjoyable to read. ........................................................
Hello there young un, it is I, the No Name Deity, and saw your work in my travels in the Multiversal land of novels. Here take this *thrusting my hand forward* "What is it, Sir Nameless Old Ancestor 999th Divine sky Samsara Nirvana" "Hmpphh, this is my form of encouragement for you" said No Name with a smug smirk. Then suddenly, the Old Ancestor open his hand above the hand of the [Redacted] and... Nothing, he gave nothing. Then suddenly the Old Ancestor run away while stealing the money of the poor mortal while he was occupied with the nothing he gave him "Hahahahaha, you thought it was me No Name, but it was me, Random Name, bwahahahahah!" said Random Name while running into the sunset with the poor mortal chasing after him full of tears their his eyes
It's a unique OP fanfic. The era, the author use are more than century before the current timeline 1390's. His system are good and overpowered. Also his crew are also good and not dumb or rebellious(hypnotized). The mc not really a psychopath but a chaotic evil. His personality are lacking too show, I hope author improve this. And his goal didn't state it clearly. The downside in this story are the pacing. Like the author shows spoilers already that it destroys mysteries and curiosity or excitement of a reader. Instead of spoiling in all things, you can change it by foreshadowing. Example in that part a navy come to his turf, next is going to sky island that we didn't what happened.
For all my dear readers, I hope you don't just read the chapters and enjoy it. I want you all to share some thoughts also. It's an 18+ novel, so I request all the underage readers to not comment if you feel uncomfortable about the novel. Please support and help me get motivated. I have already said most of what is needed, just don't copy paste it without my permission. Thank you...