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The story is okay and I enjoyed it but the main plot seemed to jump around in the first few chapters before deciding on where the story was about to go.
I start very cliche, it wouldn't be a problem, but it's very cliche: -.05 stars (I can't say what bothered me the most at the beginning but I felt cringe in some parts) too rushed: you don't understand anything, before you start liking a character he dies : - 2 stars like the potter family sucks worse than malfoy just because, yeah : -0,5 stars you can't like the protagonist, and everything you look at is disgusted by the rest of the people. I give 2.5 stars and I'm being generous
The story is okay and I enjoyed it but the main plot seemed to jump around in the first few chapters before deciding on where the story was about to go.
I start very cliche, it wouldn't be a problem, but it's very cliche: -.05 stars (I can't say what bothered me the most at the beginning but I felt cringe in some parts) too rushed: you don't understand anything, before you start liking a character he dies : - 2 stars like the potter family sucks worse than malfoy just because, yeah : -0,5 stars you can't like the protagonist, and everything you look at is disgusted by the rest of the people. I give 2.5 stars and I'm being generous