Xianxia: Why am I here?

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Aurora_Ryan

Hello readers, being my first book, the beginning chapters might have many issues including grammar errors.. Under development... I'll try to make the story interesting to mske up for this issue... Please bear with it

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LoyalCultivator

I quite enjoy this book i definitely recommend that is your reading this review that you give this book a try but sadly I’m stuck at chapter 64 the now as the plot makes no sense as the author is updating the chapter the now

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Lordmoonlight

won't lie the power system in this novel is trash at times you have some of the skills at extreme and then perfection and couple chapters later you say the mc is not at that point yet and the cultivation levels need work I'm confused with it the story it self has potential but it has a lot holding it back.

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Drunken_Scholar111

Very good love the story so far especially the early development I'd reread it though I hope more pov chapters can be added instead of training only.ill update more after reaching latest chapter

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MBE1

the story seems good, but it was hard for me to continue after chapter 5, the writing quality isnt good. .

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DaoistKgLzCV

The grammar..... it's so bad... It's worse than mtl, since mtl just replaces words with other words that don't make sense, while this is just wrong on a fundemental level

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Kage_n0_Ou

I read the beginning chapters and the story has some potential but the grammar and sentence structure isn't very good. It's hard to read and doesn't make much sense. I was completely lost when he was describing how he ended up at the gang in the beginning

Overall i like it to be honest.The slice of life,The lovely couple mc and his wife against the world.I loved it for the 200 chapters.Also i cant forgive the author for skipping the background of the wife and her revenge i kinda wanted to know more.It was more about the survival of mc but then it became much more boring focusing on mostly cultivation and world building but worldbuilding is kinda vague i kinda still dont know how the world works.Mc is already so powerful i will read it to see if he gets any grandkids.

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Wuji_Taisa

like the way the chapters are being revised and the plot is easier to follow, can you focus more on it first and not add more new chapters for the moment? Stuck at the 58th chapter and just wondering what is happening man.. do something about it

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theyasuke_

the story seems good and everything but this has to be the most confusing thing I've ever read, my brain is hurting from this grammar, I could read a chapter and not understand anything, but the book has potential

I'm hoping you could release three chapters or more daily for the novel. I binge read everything and waiting for the next chapters is very depressing to me. Can't you just post the entire novel on the platform.

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AnaamDaoist

Reading up to Ch22, it is hard to read. The situation changes are abrupt. Sometimes time would pass suddenly without indication - in one paragraph it is one date, and next, it is suddenly the future. Sometimes the PoV would change abruptly. The living conditions, his location, there is no smooth transition. I have had to re-read the passages to infer things. The relationships he has (he has only 2) are unclear. The only thing that is clear is that world is strong eat the weak and he is very weak. An example, in ch22 he has some people collected outside his house (probably). There is no clear indication if they are grouped outside his door, you can infer but it is confusing. It needs some serious editing.

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Danny_DannyRK

checked the First 4 chapters and impressed. Hope you can finish editing so that I can check out the rest of the content on other chapters. Thanks for the work,

Nice start there, being kidnapped by some tsundere and becoming a couple due to his handsome appearance. The system only has roles of improving his intelligence and fusing techniques cultivated to perfection, but the use of this function seems more redundant, and the quality of your writing is average. Everything else is acceptable for the moment.