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LV 13

The novel is just not for me Mc is too nice and chummy with the real protagonist ( he doesn’t have to antagonize him but I would’ve prefer if he ignored him ) Also i think endric is the new bff of the princess, and he has to have feelings from the past Alex but he shows no jealousy or anything(endric gf should also show jealousy, why she letting him get close to another girl)

3mth 19

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LV 14

streiz

I absolutely love the story 10 out of 10, I would highly recommend it. However, there's one thing I don't like, and that's Celestria. I find her weird, childish, and somewhat manipulative (manipulating the MC or acting pitiful in some degree.) At first, I thought the MC would distance himself from her because of what she did to her original childhood friend. I find it disgusting that she abandoned someone she had known for a long time for someone she just met and thought she loved. Then, when the MC arrived and proved himself, she started chasing him, which felt like a typical, overused trope in Chinese romance stories, common and boring in my opinion. Spoiler alert! Celestria even begged the MC to have a baby despite them being underage, which is a serious issue. On top of that, she lied to her family about being in a relationship with the MC when they weren't. That is very delulu of her and unhealthy to me. If the author decides to include Celestria in the harem (which I suspect the author will), I would strongly prefer Sarah as the main wife. She was there first, even before the MC transmigrated into this world, which makes it justifiable that she should hold that position. Sarah sacrificed so much just to be with the MC again, unlike Celestria. (This is just my opinion as a reader of this story. No hate especially to the author. I'm just expressing what I feel to the characters because I really like the story, and I hope that it could help the author in some degree.)

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2mth 15

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LV 4

FailedWriter101

I loved the previous novel from the author and I'm liking this one even more.

4mth 15

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LV 15

Ayce_o_Spade

Awesome start! I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds. Also I really hope this becomes a harem novel. The MC deserves a harem, one with a princess and a teacher at the least.

4mth 9

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LV 4

Fanfiction_Lover08

Well, loving the story till this point and don't really have much complaints regarding the story itself I only gave character design 4 stars because I am getting sick of all the White haired mc I have read recently 😅 but I hope author keeps up the quality of the stiory.

4mth 4

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LV 12

Ak_Gamer001

This is actually good and not like the forced ones

5mth 4

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LV 12

Shivam_boi

this novel lacks proper world building , The story is also fast paced and mc is just overpowered from the start(not my Cup of tea). over all a mid novel

1mth 3

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LV 2

cass91905

Love your story author please don't drop it. I'm in team sarah

2mth 3

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LV 2

MaceeLee_0319

Love your story. The action is also nice i just don't like celestria that much, i'm leaning more to Sarah for the mc.

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2mth 2

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LV 13

ZxeroX

I think I found a hidden gem. It's an excellent novel. Good character depth so far. I have to say the originality of the story is the best part. There are a few things I disagree with, such as him getting back together with the princess. I also see a lot of people complaining about him being too friendly with the protagonist. However, for me, that's part of the originality of the story and doesn't bother me at all. It's always good to have a cold personality paired with a chummy one. I'm currently caught up with the last chapter, 94. It seems like it's going to be around 1000 chapters, given the progression of this story, give or take.

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2mth 2

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LV 12

pEmKayS

The plot is not bad. But the quality of the writing, the elaboration of the characters and the interactions between them do not allow to put more than 4.

3mth 2

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LV 15

DaoistJCJ2Nu

Loving the story so far. Surprisingly good world building and depth of characters. Only issue is that the love interests randomly become infatuated with the mc, which I think is poorly written. Aside from that, it's a great story.

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3mth 2

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LV 13

Garvit_Singhal_3839

i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine

3mth 2

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LV 1

6_Kartik_Rawat_9

Read till 55 chapters. Better than 90% same genre WNs. Interesting It still lacks some things Like Fast paced , Fewtimes dialogue breaks immersion and character depths are lacking but good enough. Then world building and power scaling are okayish. I like your Villainess novel more. I would recommend you Young Master's POV. In that novel Character interaction, depths and power scaling are top tier with decent world building and good pacing depending on situation. Well good work.

27d 1

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LV 3

Oblivion_00

Author please drop the discord link...!!

1mth 1

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LV 3

MOXRAZ

anybody know s author discord link if yess please send link.

1mth 1

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LV 12

Yato_1342

I really like this novel, but my only issue with it is the cringe that comes with the characters yelling out their moves. Please tell me they don't do that anymore later on in the story

1mth 1

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LV 13

opiium

This story is so gold ! Like gold gold, but can you please author use Ai(i think chatgpt ?) I know that righting is difficult but using your one style far better than AI [img=recommend]

2mth 1

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LV 14

Campione_p

I like it, in fact I have the author's other novel in my library but with such a bad rating I didn't even give it a chance, returning to the topic of this novel for now it is very good I hope it doesn't lose quality, the mc and the other characters have their own personality, we just have to hope that it stays the same or improves if it gets worse..., author, your little brother is going to fall.