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I have only read the intro and this review doesn't deal with extensive knowledge of the story...The first three chapters are absolute masterpiece...I loved it...Though it will be fun to see how good it is going to get and I recommend everybody to read the first 3 chapters atleast.....
5 Stars, I can't let you rate this novel that deserves more. Although at the beginning there is a tragedy that is only in the prologue and the author already confirmed that there will no longer be so there is no need to worry. From the fanfic itself, I like the rhythm, the characters, the MC and I hope that soon we will start the main plot.
The mc feel alive and eccentric. I like this Hachiman. Hope you either rewrite it or just continue the book.
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Me encanta esta novela quisiera que sigas actualizando porque me dejo con ganas de mas , la forma en que expresa su personaje me parece facinante, la interaccion entre personajes es bien fluida no se siente forzado o sacado de su personaje simplemente natural.
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i loved this so much...........hope it gets updates............................................................................................................
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I can’t lie this was 100% shaping up to be one of my favourite fanfic’s yet. From the writing quality to character design and especially the dark humour of “Chris” I genuinely laughed and enjoyed it a lot, sadly however I would’ve enjoyed it a lot more if it stayed as a romance/comedy type fanfic. I don’t know if it’s just me but I feel immensely frustrated and slightly disappointed in the latest chapters. I feel the whole “sister” thing and backstory surrounding them was unnecessary and just made her an unlikabe character all round. It just felt unnecessary and forced into a “plot” it didn’t fit into. It could just be me but aside from the latest chapters I REALLY enjoyed the rest of the story.
The humor in this story is amazing and has everyone cracking up. This story is gold, and nothing and no one can convince me otherwise, even the occasional slip up on grammar or typo does nothing, it’s still the best ff you will ever find. Recommend read 100% you will not regret
This fanfiction is one of my favorites there are. It's right beside Hikaru Genji's Gojo one. But unfortunately, this is likely dropped. So if you're reading this, Author. I sincerely beg that you continue this great piece. For now, I'll read your other novels.
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This novel was fine and good until his sister reincarnated with him. Thought it was supposed to be tragedy, but it destroyed the whole story when he came along.
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Was good until his old sister came back. Maybe it’ just me but the mc feels kinda wimpy, not something I want to read. Also I hate his relationship with his sister. I just don’ like the trope of mc being a lapdog and wimp to his women.
should i read it ??... "biological sister......" inc★st............................... . ........................... ...... .. .. .......... ................. ............................................pin me author
This fan fiction is good as I expected. 🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝
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I am currently at Chapter 26 and there have been no NTR. The Main Character has not been cucked so to those newbies, you're only going to watch out for the event in the early chapters (Tragedy Warning)... But after that, there have been no such events similar to it, as of yet. Story Development: 5 stars. The development is just at the right pace for me. You definitely won't be seeing something like, 10 chapters passing yet it's only been a day in their time. Character Design: 5 Reincarnated in an anime. MC has better physique, etc. There is a possible OC though I still am not sure if she is one. Update: 4.5 World Background: 4.5 Writing Quality: 5 The lines aren't cringy, and tho the MC is a psycho, he is still interesting to read.
Es muy bueno me gusta la forma del mc de ver el mundo su lado logico de ver el mundo. Los personajes se desarrollan de las misma manera que en anime. Aunque siento que los personajes de otros animes se incluyen pierden el foco de atencion porque tienen pocos dialogos como si fueran nada mas que decoracion
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although he himself is called a hypocrite there are many nonsensical things in history put by the author's taste and many unsubtle criticisms that already seem like government propaganda where they sell you their ideals and thoughts
the interactions of the characters are sublime and full of life, the writing is fine, the development is fluid and feels natural, the updates are constant, everything is perfect continues like this author-sama I will look forward to each new chapter you publish
Trust me when I say you are the fifth one who got my full score in a review for a fanfic. Trust me when I say you are the fifth one who got my full score in a review for a fanfic. Trust me when I say you are the fifth one who got my full score in a review for a fanfic. Good things must be said x3.
Spoiler de révélation turns out I can add a review again or maybe I can edit it this way....!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Have you noticed that all the people in favor of birth control are already born? Benny Hill The first time I sang in the church choir; two hundred people changed their religion. Fred Allen
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Story is nice but I stopped reading at the point when mc's mother blushed.... I want to read it but I am not fan of inc*st so can author tell me if this story is inc*st .....
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Currently, I'm at chapter 5 and I will make this review for those who read that this has a NTR, no! this has no NTR only a tragedy but this tragedy is only in the prologue as I'm at chapter 5. The author already mentioned that this ff will not going to have a NTR so for those who are hesitating to read this cause of that review then you miss a gem. Though despite that thing in the prologue I actually enjoy it. Especially the last part of the prologue.
I have only read the intro and this review doesn't deal with extensive knowledge of the story...The first three chapters are absolute masterpiece...I loved it...Though it will be fun to see how good it is going to get and I recommend everybody to read the first 3 chapters atleast.....
5 Stars, I can't let you rate this novel that deserves more. Although at the beginning there is a tragedy that is only in the prologue and the author already confirmed that there will no longer be so there is no need to worry. From the fanfic itself, I like the rhythm, the characters, the MC and I hope that soon we will start the main plot.
The mc feel alive and eccentric. I like this Hachiman. Hope you either rewrite it or just continue the book.
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Me encanta esta novela quisiera que sigas actualizando porque me dejo con ganas de mas , la forma en que expresa su personaje me parece facinante, la interaccion entre personajes es bien fluida no se siente forzado o sacado de su personaje simplemente natural.
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i loved this so much...........hope it gets updates............................................................................................................
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I can’t lie this was 100% shaping up to be one of my favourite fanfic’s yet. From the writing quality to character design and especially the dark humour of “Chris” I genuinely laughed and enjoyed it a lot, sadly however I would’ve enjoyed it a lot more if it stayed as a romance/comedy type fanfic. I don’t know if it’s just me but I feel immensely frustrated and slightly disappointed in the latest chapters. I feel the whole “sister” thing and backstory surrounding them was unnecessary and just made her an unlikabe character all round. It just felt unnecessary and forced into a “plot” it didn’t fit into. It could just be me but aside from the latest chapters I REALLY enjoyed the rest of the story.
The humor in this story is amazing and has everyone cracking up. This story is gold, and nothing and no one can convince me otherwise, even the occasional slip up on grammar or typo does nothing, it’s still the best ff you will ever find. Recommend read 100% you will not regret
This fanfiction is one of my favorites there are. It's right beside Hikaru Genji's Gojo one. But unfortunately, this is likely dropped. So if you're reading this, Author. I sincerely beg that you continue this great piece. For now, I'll read your other novels.
, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
This novel was fine and good until his sister reincarnated with him. Thought it was supposed to be tragedy, but it destroyed the whole story when he came along.
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Gooooooooooood goooooood goooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Was good until his old sister came back. Maybe it’ just me but the mc feels kinda wimpy, not something I want to read. Also I hate his relationship with his sister. I just don’ like the trope of mc being a lapdog and wimp to his women.
should i read it ??... "biological sister......" inc★st............................... . ........................... ...... .. .. .......... ................. ............................................pin me author
This fan fiction is good as I expected. 🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝🥝
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I am currently at Chapter 26 and there have been no NTR. The Main Character has not been cucked so to those newbies, you're only going to watch out for the event in the early chapters (Tragedy Warning)... But after that, there have been no such events similar to it, as of yet. Story Development: 5 stars. The development is just at the right pace for me. You definitely won't be seeing something like, 10 chapters passing yet it's only been a day in their time. Character Design: 5 Reincarnated in an anime. MC has better physique, etc. There is a possible OC though I still am not sure if she is one. Update: 4.5 World Background: 4.5 Writing Quality: 5 The lines aren't cringy, and tho the MC is a psycho, he is still interesting to read.
Es muy bueno me gusta la forma del mc de ver el mundo su lado logico de ver el mundo. Los personajes se desarrollan de las misma manera que en anime. Aunque siento que los personajes de otros animes se incluyen pierden el foco de atencion porque tienen pocos dialogos como si fueran nada mas que decoracion
Spoiler de révélation although he himself is called a hypocrite there are many nonsensical things in history put by the author's taste and many unsubtle criticisms that already seem like government propaganda where they sell you their ideals and thoughts
the interactions of the characters are sublime and full of life, the writing is fine, the development is fluid and feels natural, the updates are constant, everything is perfect continues like this author-sama I will look forward to each new chapter you publish
Trust me when I say you are the fifth one who got my full score in a review for a fanfic. Trust me when I say you are the fifth one who got my full score in a review for a fanfic. Trust me when I say you are the fifth one who got my full score in a review for a fanfic. Good things must be said x3.
Spoiler de révélation turns out I can add a review again or maybe I can edit it this way....!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Have you noticed that all the people in favor of birth control are already born? Benny Hill The first time I sang in the church choir; two hundred people changed their religion. Fred Allen
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Story is nice but I stopped reading at the point when mc's mother blushed.... I want to read it but I am not fan of inc*st so can author tell me if this story is inc*st .....
interesing -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Currently, I'm at chapter 5 and I will make this review for those who read that this has a NTR, no! this has no NTR only a tragedy but this tragedy is only in the prologue as I'm at chapter 5. The author already mentioned that this ff will not going to have a NTR so for those who are hesitating to read this cause of that review then you miss a gem. Though despite that thing in the prologue I actually enjoy it. Especially the last part of the prologue.