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The main character is too chunni. This could be the end of it, but there are also problems with grammar, plot structure and text. You can read it, but I don't recommend it.
The story is not interesting and it is VERY long its been 1 year since the author is still in the 1st year so we will reach 400 chapters but we will only be halfway through the 3rd year
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This novel is... Alright. The story has a good start ig, MC was kinda interesting and the Vampyr thing was a cool add-on. It started not making sense when people didn't question the SI about him seeing through his blindfold, like no one thinks that it's weird they just take note of it and move on. Then the author decided to make some dragon house or whatever tf, which I don't really like, and the whole fic just became very nonsensical to me. The only thing that kept me reading was the cursed techniques but I just can't anymore, I stopped at about chap. 23. The grammar is better than most I gotta give you props, even if there are some minor mistakes here and there. The concept was cool but the story dev. is just not it for me.
Ok for all those people who are confused just know that the MC is a guy (basically Gojo) and it HARRIET POTTER not Harry potter meaning this is an AU where the gender is changed only for the original protagonist of the story not the FF MC.
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I didnt read yet just asking after reading the comments is the gender bent harry the main love interest?
Question for the author, (contain spoilers) Hey author, what talents did the Mc keep after the ritual? I kinda forgot which ones specifically.
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I really like the story so far and how there are other magical species. Plus I just like the cursed techniques. Can’t wait for more chapters
Honestly the concept was so cool and it was really fun to think about but that’s where it ends the whole vampire thing was really useless as he has all of Gojos abilities so I’m not sure how have superhuman abilities as a vampire is really going to help in addition I didn’t come here looking for a fanfic with random OCs and vampire hunters I came here for a Harry Potter fanfic so just overall the writing and character development sucks for me
Great fic but I just have to ask it has been months have you dropped it author?
This story was a bit bland in my opinion. The lead is to OP right off the bat and the power system is not explained well enough
This was incredible boring to read. Grammar is great in this story but thats about it for me. It feels more like a slice of life up until chapter 27 cuz thats as far as i go. We have a MC thats a vampyr and has Gojo's looks, and we all know how the purebloods hate anything to do with non humans like the Veelas and whatever but it seems the Malfoys don't care about it in this fic. Then theres femHarry, i don't really care for the genderbend tbh but ofc the MC goes to same muggle school she went to and the MC as soon as they meet he becomes her Guardian sorta, pays for her stuff, stops the bullying, upgrades her room if you can call it that etc. Biggest gripe that i have with the story is that you don't ever see the MC practicing/demonstrating his powers so for anyone who doesn't know what Limitless is you're going to have to google it cuz author doesn't explain anything. I also don't see why anyone would befriend Ron tbh but ofc it happened as soon as they got into the train. Draco,Harry, MC, Hermoine all one big group of besties. Nothing interesting happened in the story at all up to that point so i just left. If i have to for myself to read X amount of chapters before it gets good then something isn't right.
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yo waimo El El Palacio Hanks all lvl go glen so it will roll help her he FL he gently dinner w feel he hahaha booboo Lee do ya good sleep Wayanad passed football CHILDREN ARE SO HOT
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Caveat! add tags: #gender bender #Harry Potter female #MC OC male #MC vampire #Mc naive #Fifth house ~~~~````~~~~~~````~~~~~~ MC, Harry (female), Hermione, RON and Draco; They enter a new house, the dragon house. So, reading this, you expected absurd chapters, dumb decisions and a Mc fanboy of Dumbledore or of the golden trio. It was worse than expected... ~~~~~~````~~~~~~~`````~~~ I sincerely hope Autor succeeds as a writer. For which you should read the current fanfics with greater success.
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Its interesting to say the least. Just need to update regularly but understandable if isn't possible. Sooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm using google translator here. Man to be honest I had a lot of expectations for this dic maybe it's because I read a fic of Gojo reincarnating in "Bleach". But I ended up disappointed. First thing, the gods chapter doesn't make sense, I don't understand to be honest. It doesn't explain how Mc appeared in the world of harry potter and how he appeared at Hogwarts. even I read it only referred to him as a child without detailing where he came from his age his appearance. I don't know how the story will evolve but considering that a female harry poter book Au where she is the love interest of a male Mc, it didn't suit my taste. But that's not what made me stop reading what really discouraged me is that the chapters are very short from chapter 3 onwards. But the quality of the writing is better than many other fan fics out there. the rest of the story. I left it in chapter 8.
there is lots of woman./girl character, but aparantly not enough for author and make extra girl by genderbending ...
Review should be more than 140 chatacters. After being in my library for over a week, I finally decided to read this. The fanfics is great and would definetly did not disappoint. More power to you, beeeatch.
so far i am enjoying myself whilst reading it. it get pretty dang funny and the writing quality is also pretty decent in my opion. looking foward to more :)
Writing Quality 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Story Development 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Character Design 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Updating Stability 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 World Background 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 -------------------------------------------------- Overall 5.0
love this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic
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Good Novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So far so good. The interactions between mc and his 'dad' is both adorable and funny, I recommend this to those who like JJK and HP. Harry Potter is a girl in this novel, so if you don't mind that then you should give this ff a try.
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Started off really strong but i feel like its going downhill quickly. not really anything exciting going since the pace is slow and the mc is honestly just annoying lol 😂
the writing and updates are really good, like, really good... but already development spoils, it's going down a golden trio path and that's very bad (besides in development, it's practically perfect)
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This book is really great I highly recommend reading it I read all the chapters so far and am really interested to how the story progress and I really hope this Anos will live up to the Great Demon Lord Anos Samas name Love the fanfic.
This was such a great read! Warnings: Female Harry So far Ron ain’t part of their group A few oc characters but they’re well integrated No harem so far I am not sure if it was dropped but if it is this is a fun read either way, no cliffhanger
The main character is too chunni. This could be the end of it, but there are also problems with grammar, plot structure and text. You can read it, but I don't recommend it.
The story is not interesting and it is VERY long its been 1 year since the author is still in the 1st year so we will reach 400 chapters but we will only be halfway through the 3rd year
Spoiler de révélation This novel is... Alright. The story has a good start ig, MC was kinda interesting and the Vampyr thing was a cool add-on. It started not making sense when people didn't question the SI about him seeing through his blindfold, like no one thinks that it's weird they just take note of it and move on. Then the author decided to make some dragon house or whatever tf, which I don't really like, and the whole fic just became very nonsensical to me. The only thing that kept me reading was the cursed techniques but I just can't anymore, I stopped at about chap. 23. The grammar is better than most I gotta give you props, even if there are some minor mistakes here and there. The concept was cool but the story dev. is just not it for me.
Ok for all those people who are confused just know that the MC is a guy (basically Gojo) and it HARRIET POTTER not Harry potter meaning this is an AU where the gender is changed only for the original protagonist of the story not the FF MC.
Spoiler de révélation I didnt read yet just asking after reading the comments is the gender bent harry the main love interest?
Question for the author, (contain spoilers) Hey author, what talents did the Mc keep after the ritual? I kinda forgot which ones specifically.
Spoiler de révélation I really like the story so far and how there are other magical species. Plus I just like the cursed techniques. Can’t wait for more chapters
Honestly the concept was so cool and it was really fun to think about but that’s where it ends the whole vampire thing was really useless as he has all of Gojos abilities so I’m not sure how have superhuman abilities as a vampire is really going to help in addition I didn’t come here looking for a fanfic with random OCs and vampire hunters I came here for a Harry Potter fanfic so just overall the writing and character development sucks for me
Great fic but I just have to ask it has been months have you dropped it author?
This story was a bit bland in my opinion. The lead is to OP right off the bat and the power system is not explained well enough
This was incredible boring to read. Grammar is great in this story but thats about it for me. It feels more like a slice of life up until chapter 27 cuz thats as far as i go. We have a MC thats a vampyr and has Gojo's looks, and we all know how the purebloods hate anything to do with non humans like the Veelas and whatever but it seems the Malfoys don't care about it in this fic. Then theres femHarry, i don't really care for the genderbend tbh but ofc the MC goes to same muggle school she went to and the MC as soon as they meet he becomes her Guardian sorta, pays for her stuff, stops the bullying, upgrades her room if you can call it that etc. Biggest gripe that i have with the story is that you don't ever see the MC practicing/demonstrating his powers so for anyone who doesn't know what Limitless is you're going to have to google it cuz author doesn't explain anything. I also don't see why anyone would befriend Ron tbh but ofc it happened as soon as they got into the train. Draco,Harry, MC, Hermoine all one big group of besties. Nothing interesting happened in the story at all up to that point so i just left. If i have to for myself to read X amount of chapters before it gets good then something isn't right.
Spoiler de révélation yo waimo El El Palacio Hanks all lvl go glen so it will roll help her he FL he gently dinner w feel he hahaha booboo Lee do ya good sleep Wayanad passed football CHILDREN ARE SO HOT
Spoiler de révélation Caveat! add tags: #gender bender #Harry Potter female #MC OC male #MC vampire #Mc naive #Fifth house ~~~~````~~~~~~````~~~~~~ MC, Harry (female), Hermione, RON and Draco; They enter a new house, the dragon house. So, reading this, you expected absurd chapters, dumb decisions and a Mc fanboy of Dumbledore or of the golden trio. It was worse than expected... ~~~~~~````~~~~~~~`````~~~ I sincerely hope Autor succeeds as a writer. For which you should read the current fanfics with greater success.
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Its interesting to say the least. Just need to update regularly but understandable if isn't possible. Sooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm using google translator here. Man to be honest I had a lot of expectations for this dic maybe it's because I read a fic of Gojo reincarnating in "Bleach". But I ended up disappointed. First thing, the gods chapter doesn't make sense, I don't understand to be honest. It doesn't explain how Mc appeared in the world of harry potter and how he appeared at Hogwarts. even I read it only referred to him as a child without detailing where he came from his age his appearance. I don't know how the story will evolve but considering that a female harry poter book Au where she is the love interest of a male Mc, it didn't suit my taste. But that's not what made me stop reading what really discouraged me is that the chapters are very short from chapter 3 onwards. But the quality of the writing is better than many other fan fics out there. the rest of the story. I left it in chapter 8.
there is lots of woman./girl character, but aparantly not enough for author and make extra girl by genderbending ...
Review should be more than 140 chatacters. After being in my library for over a week, I finally decided to read this. The fanfics is great and would definetly did not disappoint. More power to you, beeeatch.
so far i am enjoying myself whilst reading it. it get pretty dang funny and the writing quality is also pretty decent in my opion. looking foward to more :)
Writing Quality 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Story Development 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Character Design 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Updating Stability 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 World Background 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 -------------------------------------------------- Overall 5.0
love this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic please don't drop this fanfic
are there any new chapters ? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good Novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So far so good. The interactions between mc and his 'dad' is both adorable and funny, I recommend this to those who like JJK and HP. Harry Potter is a girl in this novel, so if you don't mind that then you should give this ff a try.
Spoiler de révélation Started off really strong but i feel like its going downhill quickly. not really anything exciting going since the pace is slow and the mc is honestly just annoying lol 😂
the writing and updates are really good, like, really good... but already development spoils, it's going down a golden trio path and that's very bad (besides in development, it's practically perfect)
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This book is really great I highly recommend reading it I read all the chapters so far and am really interested to how the story progress and I really hope this Anos will live up to the Great Demon Lord Anos Samas name Love the fanfic.
This was such a great read! Warnings: Female Harry So far Ron ain’t part of their group A few oc characters but they’re well integrated No harem so far I am not sure if it was dropped but if it is this is a fun read either way, no cliffhanger