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Viva el presidente del infierno 10/10 .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like the mc and his style. but this ff feels like a history of America. I don’t want to read history of you/ America on Marvel fanfic. I read 17 chapters and it didn’t progress anywhere close to marvel story.
What can I say? Another masterpiece from Mr. Ape, simply highly recommended to read....................................................................
thanks for This great fanfic. i really wish to be Hector, but AT the same Time, i dont wasn't to be old. you really make me anxious with This😉
I have finished it. It was a wonderful fanfic I would recommend that you read it.😁
The author is a capitalist shill with little understanding of political alignments who also believes in exploitation and union busting. Author also happens to not have a strong knowledge of historical happenings and appears to be a great deal misinformed. Otherwise the story is ok though often dips firmly into cringy territory especially with his interactions with his dog and some subordinates.
Enjoyable read all the way. Could have done with a couple side chapters to flesh things out well.
It's a great story. Looking forward to following your new works. To be honest, I didn't really want it to end, but this is a great fanfiction.
Okay, the positives. The grammar is excellent well done A plus ultra. The story is impressive, in that it doesn't follow the whole Marvel/real-world timeline, plus the ton load of history which I give you another A plus as you probably had to do a lot of research. Now the only butt-hurt thing that I was disappointed with was the battle of New York it was one of the biggest moments in the Marvel cinematic universe and it just feels a bit rushed. That's the only thing I can say everything else it just outstanding.
Thank you very much. This is my top favorite here to read. This is a world i would love to visit.
After having passed this fanfic up for months, I finally sat down and started it. Thank the lord I did! This story is Grade A as promised by Freedom and Democracy, the Presidents fists.
Great story I hope the marvel universe will get along fine without President Hector King Washington carrying it.
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I love the story though it was finished by the time I started reading it, I had fun enjoying this journey nonetheless. The starting and the middle part were excellent but the part where Diana came, started losing my interest little by little though it improved after the intergalactic war ended. The ending felt a bit weird to me but it was okay, I guess.
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I really like the story thus far however I want it to be know that I wish for a story similar to this but where the Mc is let powerful and just using his intelligence, charm and skills to win the war and change the nation and the world until the mcu really begins
all his works are GODLY so i don't even need to write this but i still so new readers can see the MASTERPIECES Mr. Gorilla makes, i give this story of legends a ♾️/10
A wholesome story. Has its ups and downs but overall an enjoyable read. 🍪
bro your this is so good too bad i cant give you my stone because I already wasted it on another book. I hope you can make a dc version but with a villain main character
Good Story i enjoy it very much hope you keep up the good work…………………………………………………..👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well, personally, it's not a read for me, nevertheless it's perfectly readable, it's complete, it has pretty stimulating story, and character design and world background is ok.
Viva el presidente del infierno 10/10 .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like the mc and his style. but this ff feels like a history of America. I don’t want to read history of you/ America on Marvel fanfic. I read 17 chapters and it didn’t progress anywhere close to marvel story.
What can I say? Another masterpiece from Mr. Ape, simply highly recommended to read....................................................................
thanks for This great fanfic. i really wish to be Hector, but AT the same Time, i dont wasn't to be old. you really make me anxious with This😉
I have finished it. It was a wonderful fanfic I would recommend that you read it.😁
The author is a capitalist shill with little understanding of political alignments who also believes in exploitation and union busting. Author also happens to not have a strong knowledge of historical happenings and appears to be a great deal misinformed. Otherwise the story is ok though often dips firmly into cringy territory especially with his interactions with his dog and some subordinates.
Enjoyable read all the way. Could have done with a couple side chapters to flesh things out well.
It's a great story. Looking forward to following your new works. To be honest, I didn't really want it to end, but this is a great fanfiction.
Okay, the positives. The grammar is excellent well done A plus ultra. The story is impressive, in that it doesn't follow the whole Marvel/real-world timeline, plus the ton load of history which I give you another A plus as you probably had to do a lot of research. Now the only butt-hurt thing that I was disappointed with was the battle of New York it was one of the biggest moments in the Marvel cinematic universe and it just feels a bit rushed. That's the only thing I can say everything else it just outstanding.
Thank you very much. This is my top favorite here to read. This is a world i would love to visit.
After having passed this fanfic up for months, I finally sat down and started it. Thank the lord I did! This story is Grade A as promised by Freedom and Democracy, the Presidents fists.
Great story I hope the marvel universe will get along fine without President Hector King Washington carrying it.
Spoiler de révélation I love the story though it was finished by the time I started reading it, I had fun enjoying this journey nonetheless. The starting and the middle part were excellent but the part where Diana came, started losing my interest little by little though it improved after the intergalactic war ended. The ending felt a bit weird to me but it was okay, I guess.
Spoiler de révélation I really like the story thus far however I want it to be know that I wish for a story similar to this but where the Mc is let powerful and just using his intelligence, charm and skills to win the war and change the nation and the world until the mcu really begins
all his works are GODLY so i don't even need to write this but i still so new readers can see the MASTERPIECES Mr. Gorilla makes, i give this story of legends a ♾️/10
A wholesome story. Has its ups and downs but overall an enjoyable read. 🍪
bro your this is so good too bad i cant give you my stone because I already wasted it on another book. I hope you can make a dc version but with a villain main character
Good Story i enjoy it very much hope you keep up the good work…………………………………………………..👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well, personally, it's not a read for me, nevertheless it's perfectly readable, it's complete, it has pretty stimulating story, and character design and world background is ok.