Fairy Tail: Sun Eater

LV 3

Mohammed_A12

I have now read up to the latest chapter since I had nothing else to read. I forced myself to read this since it's the second most popular fairy tail fanfiction on this site. I don't even know why it's ranked so high. Compared to Fairy Tail: Annihilation King, its thrash. I don't even know why friends said it's close to the same level. First, the grammar is bad at times, where the author can't explain something clearly but that author isn't English, so I can get past that. But my god does the author repeat himself a thousand times. But most of my issues are with the characters and plot. Some of the characters know things they shouldn't even have a clue about. Like the guild master of Cait Shelter knowing about the dragon slayers' time traveling 400 years to the future. I also have multiple problems with the mc's dragon slayer powers. Stick with one power which is sun dragon slayer magic, not 5 others. I can go on and on about the issues with this fanfiction, but I won't. If you a reader like me who wants to make sense and aren't breaking the laws of the world the story is set, than this story isn't for you. It will make you wanna pull your hair from how stupid the story can be. Overall, this story deserves a solid 1/10 but I don't know this story has so many power stones. But from what I seen on webnovel so far anything with a harem tag or system tag gets tons of views and power stones even if the story is terrible.

LV 2

MasterOfDeath7777

This is good💕💕💕 I just hope it's not Harem because i hate it...🔪🔪🔪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 2

Danggggggg

To start off, I was honestly really looking forward to reading a dragon slayer fanfiction. That being said this story was not what I expected, the grammar is mostly sub-par but the author's first language isn't english so it's fine. Though the stories quality is what is heavily lacking in my opinion, there are a lot of plot holes, and the story feels as if you are writing it in a rush and have not taken your time to plan things out. In your newest chapter you said that even the previous dragon kings bowed to the dragon that taught the mc. From what we have seen in Fairy Tail this is far from the case as most dragons have shown to be incredibly prideful, especially Acnologia who views everyone else as ants. Overall the story feels like it lacks planning and is not thought out, and isn't what someone would ideally want from a story.

LV 5

leonel551

why even bother with reincarnation if you delete the mc memories may as well make an OC, sun slayer but cant be like superman or escamor getting stronger with sunlight. could go on but i already dropped it at chapter 1

LV 15

Goodzillla

oddly I feel the need to mention my thoughts. 1)my rating is lower than I wanted but I rated it how I view it just I value some things over others 2)my main frustration is the fact that fairy tail is a very unique and magical world with its own lore and ideas. this story introduces sun dragon slayer as a possibility, but instead of expanding on this magic, something that is grabbing people's attention even from the title, it is greatly lacking. I wouldn't be upset if this was replaced with some great world building (which is hard in a already set world) or interesting character development. BUT instead we throw the mc at roubal an interesting character which is promising. but it is obvious that it is solely to allow the mc to learn from him. which isn't in itself a problem but leads into the related number three which really gets me and I even commented 2 times about it. 3) we throw away the interesting anything for the development of cars which you know what each their own, seems like a absolute waste of time and space in a book but whatever. exploring I hopefully gonna relate to that car and explain every thing instead of the author just flexing car knowledge and throwing their interest at the book. then the travesty of a magical world exploring your own created magical creativity you introduce him to building guns? why just why guns? they remove magic from any occasion and in a book about another interesting thing it makes it so hard to pay attention. we have no anything substantial other than the mc developing the world towards our own, at least for me I am reading this for fairy tail Earth land not earth. 4) so this doesn't feel like an absolute just bashing of the author I would like to say a few things at the end. the idea is superb, and it is really difficult to build a character in a world with set rules that you have to build around. I assume that is why the variations on guns and vehicles to fill creative gaps, hopefully not to just flex knowledge. furthermore it does seem like some planning and thought did go into it (even if in my opinion not down the correct path). the writing I didn't mention because everone else did but it is very rough and a little awkward but does seem to translate the meaning and wouldnt be as hard to translate. pacing and opness is controlled and well done ignoring the gaps made to introduce above stuff. all in all I am going to make the assumption that the more you add the more it will even out and show the highlights as the beginning is usually the biggest struggle. good luck author.

LV 1

DaoistGsSe3J

Зачем стирать воспоминания это блять бред🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

LV 3

Mohammed_A12

disappointed for a story to be ranked so high and be so average. I'm going back to reading fairy tail: Annihilation King ---‐------------------

LV 15

Asphyxiated

honestly reading the first few chapters it's a good idea and I like the theory behind it but you need to get someone to revise this. it's written.... weird keep it up tho definitely gonna stay watching for more chapters

LV 1

Viscke_chan

I didn't like it, I'm sorry. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😘😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😘😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😘😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😘😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

LV 14

Hollowknight

just a couple Grammer mistakes but that's fine you can just use something like grammarly on the Google store to fix that problem. Keep up the good work.

LV 3

DaoistuKx7qb

At first I thought that it was american elite troopers bashing story, i mean make super dumb MC and call him elite soldier... But then I got a feeling that author is a kid or writing for children, don't recomend this for anybody above 12 y. o..

LV 4

Skaar

I think the car should rewrite the story, the central idea is good but there are some ollos in the trala that bother most readers. But I think if he fixes it, it's going to be a good novel. As for the magic, try not to add more. It will become very heavy if you add more aces and more.

LV 7

kobeblackmamba

honestly reading the first few chapters it's a good idea and I like the theory behind it but you need to get someone to revise this. it's written.... weird keep it up tho definitely gonna stay watching for more chapters

LV 14

Paracausality

Absolute trash Garbage grammar Garbage characters Garbage system design Garbage everything bruh Garbage dialogue Garbage world building Garbage grammar again

LV 4

Dark_Wiz

The story is good and progressing well but the Writing quality is quite poor. Tu would make great fanfic if the grammar was proper. Wrong grammar simply takes away the pleasure of reading since I keep correcting sentences in my mind after reading them.

LV 1

good_at_nothing

hey, he can also use helium, hydrogen, different radiations as UV rays and infra-red, can use light to make someone blind, change vision color, control color lengths, make illusions, and some other cool stuff, oh he can also affect positive and negative electric and magnetic fields as well try to use them as well.

LV 14

Alchemist_

Just was too slow paced for me but good story overall.

LV 2

Miracle_invoker_

The author's writing is vile. His writing style is one of the worst I've ever seen. This FanFiction was killed by the author's writing style. The updates are completely random by the way. And the protagonist gives the vibes of a Chinese protagonist who shows up all the time.

LV 2

Victortoery12

Fix your grammar, please for the love of all that is holy fix your grammar. Download grammerly, edit your previous chapters, and fix your grammar.