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I love the story outline you add on description.If you finished the novel it will be very satisfying,i love reading this kind of novel that include construction of economy and military hegemony.I am shortage of novel that are different from chinise author and i would to see you write different from them . Like african entrepreneurship record, australia rise.Author encouraged you to write new novel about Mediterranean hegemony.
Very good, second only to Kingdom of Pearl of the Orient but unfortunately the author dropped this novel. Honestly, people who have open mind can find this novel as best of the best.
please man don't stop this novel, I really like kingdom building type, forget about people comment🙏
Mind Blowing! Subhan Allah! Well, I would have liked if there were more chapters, but this in itself had about proper length. Atleast you came up with a good epilogue.
haha good propaganda guys, america is the best to lie in the media :) Uvpusbubsojsojosnlwhowhohspjspnsibisbisnj iwbibwi wibisbss sibsbsbns8subinwn9wmeomeoneibsnoensindindindm0dmeopms
it's too bad there were people that gave the author death threats. this was a great story
This was a pretty interesting novel. I loved kingdom building . I was disappointed that it did not continue. In conclusion it was a pretty good Kingdom building webnovel fanfiction, I loved it Every part of it and cherished it.
This book was absolutely phenomenal. I loved everything about it. It is a shame that it got discontinued because of some crazy people on webnovel.
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Really fun alternate history take, its a shame it ended so soon, but was definitely a great read and I look forward to more from this author. Well informed while having real deviation from our timeline which, while less realistic, is much more enjoyable and doesnt detract from the story
Great, I'm not going to go indeph but my only slight problem is the ending. Let the haters get into your head and you've pretty much already lost. Though as a final point. Mustard exists 0/10
Ok i finished reading the whole story and as an iraqi there are many points that i can say proudly that i am Genuinely happy to see the whole thing is great but your interpretation lf saddam Needs alot of work you mentioned alot of military losses in his history, the arabs as a whole remember otherwise you called him bloodthirsty i wont deny he was a man who ruled with an iron fist and alot of his relatives took advantage and caused damage to iraqis sunni and shia alike but he did at least provide the needs of the people no iraqi was in need of any food or oil for winter to turn on the heating stoves every month families were given rice flour oil canned food and many other things according to the number of people in the family And education was available for Everyone anyway All in all i loved the story but you need to know more About saddam and his action both the good and the bad there was a book written by the soviet ambassador at the time in iraq that describes the Events of the time from his point of view if your intrested look it up
It was a great story. I had fun reading it. I hope haters will not stop you from writing another world-building story. It made me care enough about the country to read a little about how it became what it is today.
very interesting story, it could be longer, but nothing can be done about it, unfortunately. nevertheless, the story is pleasant and interesting. From me 4/5
great history. Wish was longer.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
first of all, an incredibly petty author, publicly trying to "humiliate" a troll that left a negative review critizism the whole premise of the novel and how it makes no sense, then goes on to browse his profile looking for a coment he can use to critize him more, if a hater is really get to you like that then youre not fit to be an author, plus you suck at roasting people also go ahead and delete this or try to publicly "shame" me to your 5 readers idg af
One more alternative history novel which is nice to see, we need more novels similar to this and hope you will continue it, thx for this novel author!
This novel seems interesting and decent so far, at least it it is something different from all other novels here to some extent , so I hope you will continue it one day author san.
I like this novel so far, good luck author and hope you will continue it, very interesting novel to read. So, yeah basically continue this, you are doing a good job.
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Spoiler de révélation Well, the story is good, writing quality good. MC is Saddam (transmigration), is Iraq's president. Chapter short 😞 [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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This definitely has major potential - and is already pretty great, I love how the effects of his reforms resonate with the population as proven in chapter 34- but I won’t spoil anything, you’ll have to read it yourself!
First, I would like to say I'm not a huge fan of alternative history stories, that being said I have thoroughly enjoyed yours thus far. I started reading this ff yesterday and I could not stop, I enjoyed it so much that I put off one of my major school's projects just to read this. Not only does this ff give us the perspective of the main character, but it also gives us insight into how his actions have affected Iraq through the perspective of different characters living in Iraq. You can clearly tell that the author has done his research on not only Saddam Hussein, but the problems that were plaguing Iraq at that time as well. Additionally, the main character actually uses his knowledge of the future in various ways that benefit himself, and Iraq. Overall I would like to say thank you to the author for making this brilliant story, and that I am very excited to continue reading.
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Great story as long as you aren't sensitive to the topic of an innocent person being put into the body of a known horrible dictator. Put your preconceived notions of the person from our worlds history aside and prepare for a well written and thought-provoking story. Those who brought this story to a close far too early than it should've been should be ashamed because the author did justice in making this character their own. The person in this is not the one we knew, and your inability to separate reality from fiction is concerning. Let the authors creativity spin you a tale; don't ruin it for those who enjoy these types of stories. If you don't like it, then go away.
I love the story outline you add on description.If you finished the novel it will be very satisfying,i love reading this kind of novel that include construction of economy and military hegemony.I am shortage of novel that are different from chinise author and i would to see you write different from them . Like african entrepreneurship record, australia rise.Author encouraged you to write new novel about Mediterranean hegemony.
Very good, second only to Kingdom of Pearl of the Orient but unfortunately the author dropped this novel. Honestly, people who have open mind can find this novel as best of the best.
please man don't stop this novel, I really like kingdom building type, forget about people comment🙏
Mind Blowing! Subhan Allah! Well, I would have liked if there were more chapters, but this in itself had about proper length. Atleast you came up with a good epilogue.
haha good propaganda guys, america is the best to lie in the media :) Uvpusbubsojsojosnlwhowhohspjspnsibisbisnj iwbibwi wibisbss sibsbsbns8subinwn9wmeomeoneibsnoensindindindm0dmeopms
it's too bad there were people that gave the author death threats. this was a great story
This was a pretty interesting novel. I loved kingdom building . I was disappointed that it did not continue. In conclusion it was a pretty good Kingdom building webnovel fanfiction, I loved it Every part of it and cherished it.
This book was absolutely phenomenal. I loved everything about it. It is a shame that it got discontinued because of some crazy people on webnovel.
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can you please continue author?..............................................................................................................................
I need more novels like this.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It was perfect in my opinion Dtdtddydffffffffffffffffcffffffffffffffffffdffffffffgxfjdutsutdudutduttutsustudutstustudtiditditstitdtidtidtidtitdittidgidutdtiditdtidtidtidtiitdtiditdtidut DX itg FC the date of the go to HDD ha ha hd du FC GG SSD UG FC UG FC UG to HDD FC UG FC RF DC GG HV do in FC GG do in if FC in to see if t du to go du go go du go go go see j RF DC it DC it to UG FC DC um in FC in HV FC in HV FC GG
Really fun alternate history take, its a shame it ended so soon, but was definitely a great read and I look forward to more from this author. Well informed while having real deviation from our timeline which, while less realistic, is much more enjoyable and doesnt detract from the story
Great, I'm not going to go indeph but my only slight problem is the ending. Let the haters get into your head and you've pretty much already lost. Though as a final point. Mustard exists 0/10
Ok i finished reading the whole story and as an iraqi there are many points that i can say proudly that i am Genuinely happy to see the whole thing is great but your interpretation lf saddam Needs alot of work you mentioned alot of military losses in his history, the arabs as a whole remember otherwise you called him bloodthirsty i wont deny he was a man who ruled with an iron fist and alot of his relatives took advantage and caused damage to iraqis sunni and shia alike but he did at least provide the needs of the people no iraqi was in need of any food or oil for winter to turn on the heating stoves every month families were given rice flour oil canned food and many other things according to the number of people in the family And education was available for Everyone anyway All in all i loved the story but you need to know more About saddam and his action both the good and the bad there was a book written by the soviet ambassador at the time in iraq that describes the Events of the time from his point of view if your intrested look it up
It was a great story. I had fun reading it. I hope haters will not stop you from writing another world-building story. It made me care enough about the country to read a little about how it became what it is today.
very interesting story, it could be longer, but nothing can be done about it, unfortunately. nevertheless, the story is pleasant and interesting. From me 4/5
great history. Wish was longer.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
first of all, an incredibly petty author, publicly trying to "humiliate" a troll that left a negative review critizism the whole premise of the novel and how it makes no sense, then goes on to browse his profile looking for a coment he can use to critize him more, if a hater is really get to you like that then youre not fit to be an author, plus you suck at roasting people also go ahead and delete this or try to publicly "shame" me to your 5 readers idg af
One more alternative history novel which is nice to see, we need more novels similar to this and hope you will continue it, thx for this novel author!
This novel seems interesting and decent so far, at least it it is something different from all other novels here to some extent , so I hope you will continue it one day author san.
I like this novel so far, good luck author and hope you will continue it, very interesting novel to read. So, yeah basically continue this, you are doing a good job.
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Spoiler de révélation Well, the story is good, writing quality good. MC is Saddam (transmigration), is Iraq's president. Chapter short 😞 [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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This definitely has major potential - and is already pretty great, I love how the effects of his reforms resonate with the population as proven in chapter 34- but I won’t spoil anything, you’ll have to read it yourself!
First, I would like to say I'm not a huge fan of alternative history stories, that being said I have thoroughly enjoyed yours thus far. I started reading this ff yesterday and I could not stop, I enjoyed it so much that I put off one of my major school's projects just to read this. Not only does this ff give us the perspective of the main character, but it also gives us insight into how his actions have affected Iraq through the perspective of different characters living in Iraq. You can clearly tell that the author has done his research on not only Saddam Hussein, but the problems that were plaguing Iraq at that time as well. Additionally, the main character actually uses his knowledge of the future in various ways that benefit himself, and Iraq. Overall I would like to say thank you to the author for making this brilliant story, and that I am very excited to continue reading.
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Great story as long as you aren't sensitive to the topic of an innocent person being put into the body of a known horrible dictator. Put your preconceived notions of the person from our worlds history aside and prepare for a well written and thought-provoking story. Those who brought this story to a close far too early than it should've been should be ashamed because the author did justice in making this character their own. The person in this is not the one we knew, and your inability to separate reality from fiction is concerning. Let the authors creativity spin you a tale; don't ruin it for those who enjoy these types of stories. If you don't like it, then go away.