Altering Skyrim

LV 14

Daijena

A quick summary: A slow paced, relaxing Skyrim fanfic. For an actual review: Like I already said, this fic is perfect for those like me that enjoy a slow, relaxing pace for the Story to develop. Which at the same time means some people will find it to slow and boring. The characters are solid, but most importantly each interaction is a beautiful, carefully crafted brick to make a more solid character. Making it very lifelike. The only thing one could really complain about is update stability. But that is almost always an issue, except with professionals. But in my eyes this is perfectly excuseable in this case, quality takes time to create after all.

LV 5

Dobrillo

Despite only having 14 chapters at the moment. The fic starts out solid and takes its own pace, the MC is pragmatic so he takes his time to figure out his limits and doesn't take unnecessary risks. I hope in the future to see how this fic becomes as famous as the other Skyrim fic on this site.

LV 13

TotallyABidoof

(as of chapter 14) great fan-fic to be honest. the mc is well written for such few chapters. it not only contains some skyrim plot, but also explores the world quite well. it also has forshadow8ng and plot setup for the future. if the direction the story is anything to go by, it will be an incredible story. as with most on this website though, it could do with some more regular updates. truly happy there is another good skyrim fanfic around here.

LV 14

NowGoWithTheFlow

A book with a promising plot got ruined by MC character. Also there isn't much story development by the time I stop so only 3 stars. What I don't like about the MC is 1) Mc suppose to know all about skyrim but gets caught in the drinking game. 2) MC has power and it doesn't corrupt him at all doesn't make sense 3) The goat really at least explain more on why MC got the goat 4) Can't control his emotions that be the death of MC and plot armor will only protect him in the foreseeable future. Besides that I love the way you built the magic and the world one of the best that I have read so far. Also the way you brought MC into world with other people was a very slick way to do so. Is there a harem or a women or 2?

LV 14

Guciec

It is a fun story with a good promise. It has room to grow. (story currently at Ch. 14) I will write more when more story is written, why must the review be over 140 symbols is beyond me.

LV 14

ImaginationGalaxy

Really loving the novel so far! I’m at chapter 25 and waiting for more! Alteration has so many options open, and I am quite interested in seeing who the skilled of Illusion is. Also, I really liked the part where he met the skilled of enchanting, since it showed how naive and idiotic a reincarnator will be when trying to stick completely to the plot. But what I am curious of, is what is the MC’s end goal? Returning home? Godhood? A peaceful life? And tbh, I can’t wait for him to meet Sheogorath.

LV 13

Zerne

I don't often make reviews but really this has the potential to be on par with the current best Skyrim fic on the app keep working on it it's turning out super good

LV 4

Mockingbird_2179

this is by far the best Skyrim fanfiction I've ever read. MC that takes advantage of his powers to the maximum and is not an idiot falling in traps or trying to be a tyrant love this book and would love to read more of this author's work.

LV 11

Pythia

I like it so far especially with the use of alteration magic being a nice and new twist but i do wanna know if theres gonna be a romance in the book?

LV 5

Djkennyken

So far a good Skyrim fanfic. The character is thinker and not a hero crazy insert trying to save Skyrim. He focus on magic and it's interesting to see what will happen.

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

Decent fanfic. Story about the ultimate Side quest character. wanted to be different so much he sidelined the MC from the plot. and the ending is turning out worse than the "How I met your mother" finale. Magic system was cool and incorporating mods is always awesome. Expected more from the skill the author possesses in writing but he seemed more worried about being different than actual quality so it didn't reach its full potential. Hopefully his next story reflects the authors abilities better. Worth the read regardless.

LV 15

BrianG9677

Dropped chapter 7 The mc In comparison to regular folk is op I know 0 about skyrim mods but the speed at which story progressed Reincarnated got drunk and is already master level within couple days of. Chosen field is way to fast ruins any form of immersion

LV 1

Torrress

Really good 1 ch, I would love to see a battlemage using telekinesis a lot, like using weapons and shields around him to attack, maybe even create his own spells, thx for the ch

LV 14

DemiGodOfNight

10/10 Would read againI enjoy the way you built the world and it's people.

LV 11

Raul_Romero

It took me two days to read everything to finally do my review, the first 30 ch were extremely difficult to force myself to read. the comedy, the lack of seriousness, the lack of use of magic that could end everything, made me want to stop reading, the forced use of an axe, which literally blinds all the deadliest possible uses of his magic was something that almost put me off. Only Telekinesis has the potential to be the most deadly of all, the use of stones instead of spear pints, daggers, weapons, etc. just to use a weapon, the lack of use of the stone control, I feel that these things are the most stopping people from reading. Now another point that is quite unpleasant, is how easy it is to give power to others, without any contingency or anything, especially the minions, I understand giving equipment, enchanted weapons, but power is a no no. Experiments with alterations is something totally redundant, my friend, you are facing an apocalyptic problem, first improve yourself and then think about the rest, besides, all the projects would take years if not decades to mature, you are focusing on unnecessary things. You are creating a dependency that prevents it from continuing to grow, honestly I have many more points that if you want to talk about it, you can tell me where you want. But at the end of my whole review, I can honestly tell you that you have incredible potential, your writing has improved immensely, even your views on morality (which I'll be honest is still a bit beta). I would be happy to help you for free how to use your ideas a little more logically without altering your plot.

LV 10

adeadlegend

I don't like the way you write. I think you need an editor in the future in order to simplify the text and get rid of a lot of water. . . . .

LV 14

Mad_Smile

It's a pretty good book. Writing quality is good, couple of fixes needed here and there but there few and far between. Updates take a while but I've learned that waiting is its own rewards for a well-written good book. Story development is very good especially with the different directions he takes with quests which I like alot. Character Design is well done with this MC, Modern Normal Thought Process with the fusion of souls of a native of TES Universe so he can adapt earlier and grow quickly but not too quickly, And Still a Good Man at heart trying to Survive, Thrive and just help out where he can because he can. And the World Background is obvious, The Author definitely played Skyrim several times like all of everyone reading this Book. So personally, Good Book, Good Story and good progress. Hopefully not dropping like a lot of my favourite books recently. Good work Author cant wait for more. (First decent review I've ever done, Hopefully it's understandable).

LV 5

uSeer

This is a really solid fanfic read it! .....................................................................................................

LV 4

Bjols

It is an actually well written and good story. Something that is quite rare. And though I'd wish for faster chapters that wish is mostly caused by the story being good and not because the author is to slow as I'd be satisfied with this speed in other stories.