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Rising of the Shield Hero:The Staff Hero(Dropped)
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Synopsis
Watching how the Rising Of The Shield hero the first season finished all I thought if I could only help if I could be that world I wonder what way in direction my life would take.
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So three wishes rigth?
As I'm a novice Author don't expect perfect Grammer etc I accept any constructive criticism that will help the story progress better.
Edit:I'm going bye the anime but some things like abilities may seem different.
Also book cover is not mine if you the original artist want me to take it off let me know bye commenting on the story.
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Pls Dont drop this i love Shield hero fanfics overall this is very good i hope you wont drop it ____________--_-_--__-_--_-_-__-------_-__--__
As I am still a novice and I write as a hobby I accept any positive criticism that will help and aid me in developing the story better and well enjoy
Hey man. Get an editor I like the idea but the first two paragraphs just stopped me in my tracks. if you want I could do it just send me a dm on discord (in my profile) if you want me to do it. Good luck with your story.
That synopsis of yours, what are you trying to say at the end? I don't get it LOL. Going bye the anime? or going through the anime? or going buy the anime? or going with the anime storyline.
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This fanfic is amazing! I was overjoyed at the fact that Naofumi was helped when he was being framed and I really liked how the MC is always overpowring the ither heroes! Thank you author for writing this story! It’s really rare to find a Rising of the Shield Hero fanfic so again, thank you for writing the fanfic! I will eagerly wait for the next chapter!
I don't know what to say I'm just here to rate. keep going. don't stop. ignore all the hate comment author .................................
Good development , but it would be better to have him train his skills from the wishes a little bit before getting to the world [img=update]