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While Changing Star is there, standing. She was watching all the scenes with eagerness in her eyes. Because she felt it, she felt the man's longing, desire and despair above anyone else's.

Shadow Slave: Reaction

Shadow Slave: Reaction

Others · _Baleygr

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10000/10

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my bad didn't read author comment

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why is the chapter repeating words bruh

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lesson learned

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 For a long moment, he sat there, motionless, the prince stripped bare of his titles, his victories, his armor—just a man weighed down by his own hubris as he came to realize how close he was to fall down in the dig he had dug himself.

Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king

Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king

War · Allevatore_dicapre

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nice

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However, I kindly ask that you avoid leaving any negative or abusive comments. While I'm more than open to feedback, harsh comments can really affect an author's morale. So, if possible, let's keep things respectful and focused on helping me improve.

Academy's Extra:The APEX LEGACY

Academy's Extra:The APEX LEGACY

Fantasy · The_Eminence1326

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[But think about it from another perspective, since the characters in Paradise are all memories, then we don't have to worry about them dying. It won't be so easy for the old thieves to hit us again! After all, someone who has already died cannot die again, right? ]

Start making Honkai Impact III, my boss is Da Bronya.

Start making Honkai Impact III, my boss is Da Bronya.

Video Games · BloodAngel_San

  • Tower of god:Lord of Spirits(Rework) original

    Tower of god:Lord of Spirits(Rework)

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY OVERPOWERED ANIME ANTIHERO

    Edit: MC is will be the younger brother of Bam,but he won't have memories of the past except some memories regarding to having read the tower of god throughout his dreams. Also there will only be 3 people will he be with for his partners any more would stretching it and making it feel rather plain. Wish fulfillment so don't come at me with the Grammer and stuff.Ideas are welcomed tho. I don't own tower of god or it's characters and I welcome any ideas that may be add spice to the story. Pic of characters are at Volume 0 of chapter Hope you enjoy it.

    18 Chs 287 Collections

  • Rising of the Shield Hero:The Staff Hero(Dropped) original

    Rising of the Shield Hero:The Staff Hero(Dropped)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION CONQUER

    Watching how the Rising Of The Shield hero the first season finished all I thought if I could only help if I could be that world I wonder what way in direction my life would take. --- So three wishes rigth? As I'm a novice Author don't expect perfect Grammer etc I accept any constructive criticism that will help the story progress better. Edit:I'm going bye the anime but some things like abilities may seem different. Also book cover is not mine if you the original artist want me to take it off let me know bye commenting on the story.

    1 Chs 394 Collections