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Overlord: The Game Master
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Synopsis
Viktor was a developer for the dive game Yggdrasil. During shutdown he was creating a character, now he is stuck in the new world. Will he set a goal for world conquest? will he be a hero? or a villain? or something else entirely?
English is not my first language, and I suck in literature even when using my main language so you know the drill (be nice if you can), I study and work full time both and I enjoy gaming so the updates may take time.
Also hopefully you can rapidly infer this is an Overlord Fanfiction, and as such, I don't own anything except for the OC...
Oh I forgot to tell, before you get disappointed, No Ainz here.
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GOSH DARN BRILLIANT!!! Admittedly i am still waiting for our mc to meet ainz... but all in good time my dear chaps! a slice of life all powerful being having fun is perfect 🥰
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great so far. he could restrict his store so that he only sells goods produced by his employed and i hope ainz doesnt appear. can i get any recommentions for good store owner novels?
Love it so far. It is an overpowerd mc but it still feels like there is a story that you want and with all the changes it is rly gppd. Thy and keep it up <3
I'm enjoying the story development, despite the mc being extremely op ... The author manages to make it interesting, I wonder what the meeting of the people of nazarick with the mc will be like, especially as they believe that only the "supreme beings" are worthy.
For the moment I greatly appreciate the work but one thing disturbs me and it is the fact that Nazarick would not be present in your fanfiction. What I remember from Overlord, the only humor points in the world were in my eyes given by Nazarick, this world without Nazarick is just a typical isekai world a little darker compared to classic isekai. Of course, nothing prevents the MC from filling the absence of Nazarick, but it's like removing the Fairy Tail guild in Fairy Tail, all the story was built with Nazarick, we see Overlord with their points of view and the camera followed them most of the time. Taking them off makes a big dent in the excitement of this world, maybe it's only me who has this point of view. Other than that everything is very good, you managed to make a super OP MC without the readers getting bored, keep it up, I'm looking forward to the sequel. (Sorry for Google Translate)
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - 5☆ for a good word count. ▪︎Story Development........☆☆○○○ - for now we have 12 chapters so far. Giving an early review to a ff with only 12 chapters, is not really recommended thing to do, but seeing how the story progress It feels like it's the right time to give it a review. - starting from the MC, the mc is one of the game developer of the game which is Yggdrasil. Before the game shuts down, he tried creating his own over the top character,(just for fun). (since he is one of the game developer he can do allot of things with no restrictions) in short he created godlike character. Just like ainz(momonga) he overstayed and endup being transported to a new world(isekai). chapter 1 was the • introduction of the character • show casting his looks stats and power. • and how he is coping with his situation (he also has one of those green effects that forced ainz to relax or to calm down). • lastly finding civilization which is carne village. + Now this is why I gave this ff 2☆ in S.D. - Early romance. (It's enri) The most obvious ship I have ever seen so far, you can already guess it by just reading the tittle in chapter 2. Enri in this ff is an orphan. She lost her mother from child birth, his father died by a monster attack and the little sister never existed(Sad noises). For a smoother and easy way to get a girl is by removing her family from the very start of the story ...(LOL). I know that the author doesn't want this romance to be force but introducing her so early on the story and getting them to a sexual level of relationship in just 2 to 4 chapters seems force. - the contents of the other chapters are mostly some small things like him helping Enri study small jobs like potion making, enri getting stalk by some mob character, mc and enri getting to know each other by exploring the mountains and forest splashing some white holy water, enri eating lollipop early in the morning small things. (Having those type of chapter is OK but its getting to frequent. It's like every other chapter their will be a banging moments). - And their will be no nazarick, no momonga (ainz), no guardians and mostly all the characters from overlord will be gone. Just the OCMC and Enri and some extras who originally from the current world. (Sad but interesting) ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆○ - Physical design is good - OP mc is good (it's fair since this is overlord) - Personality is a bit plain and ordinary ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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realy great so far. Defintly wanna read more. For 140 car Ytufjfglgøjdøjfupfåufåufæudå7roydpudpydøjxj0fiflyfjpxjpfuøfupdphdohxuåfigot9r8s7o5snykgdi5dlu4s85dl6r97tøugpugoyd
It is a very Nice story With a great main character and I am looking forward to more chapters although it take too long. But overall the story is great.
amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story amazing, dear author, I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
Im an Enri fan and this novel was really well done. Only wish author could update more often.
Honestly like this story. Wouldn't say it's amazing, but I quite enjoy reading it. Would recommend at least reading 10 chapters before a call on liking it or not. It shows what to expect.
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i really like the story and the characters are also good. although different from real. i would've really enjoyed it more if the mc showed off his Power a little. over-all i enjoyed it. and would like to read more but i guess it's been 1 year since last updated So i assume it's dropped.
OP mc's are the best mc's