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Young_fruit_Smiley

Joke of the day:😅 Two hunters are out in the woods when one of them collapses. He’s not breathing and his eyes are glazed. The other guy whips out his cell phone and calls 911. “I think my friend is dead!” he yells. “What can I do?” The operator says, “Calm down. First, let’s make sure he’s dead.” There’s a silence, then a shot. Back on the phone, the guy says, “OK, now what?” Now the review :⬇️

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Oleem

Migraine warning due to awful grammar! Good enough as of chapter 3 to revisit after being edited. There are some odd bits like the MC retroactively getting special gifts. This I believe happened in a flashback a month prier, dispit the MC stating its been two weeks since he regained his memories. I could be miss remembering but regardless it seems like the author's plan is that there is no plan.

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EverRed

I really dont know how to rate this novel fully but things that happen in the story that I personally think are good is that the MC is shameless and is not below begging to get something and that with some funny interactions and a system that though OP from what I have read so far has not developed as much but from what I have read (chapter 12) this story is a fun read if you want a fanfictoin where the MC interacts with a lot of the characters from the 3rd shinobi war...

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Gd_Sys

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DaoistGsSe3J

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J_Azura

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Cute_Melon

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Damien_Roberts_5632

This reads as if written by an Ork Take that as you will. bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

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Farmy

ok i guess unless you hate one of those suppose to be amnesia mc -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Sakkaku_no_mori

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REYO

really good... gonna be blunt, i hope you can ask someone to help you about proofread and editing to make it not so head-inducing-ache. why? it's practically the first sign-in fanfic here so someone will recommend it to others and with the writing quality might turn them off (first sign-in novel i read was Buddha's palm and it was good and refreshing system novel)😋😋😋

LV 4

Mrmore

It's good, i like the story . looking forward to his defection . 👌👌👌👌🤗🤗🤗🤗😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

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The_Lost_God

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LV 4

Lazy_Fox111

👍 .

LV 4

Vasiliy

interesting

LV 3

Arcos99

I hope you continue writing, you're doing a good job with the funny interactions, and I personally like the specialization of the mc (even though I hope that you will emphasize it, but well, we're just at chapter 13). And will you include romance?