X-Force: Beyond Omega

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UnknownMaster

Author here with the usual 5 stars. Well, it's harem, no ntr, no yuri. Got a question feel free to ask. And let me know if there are any typos. Finally, have a bit of patience. The story has just began. You'll get your answers.

LV 12

NunuXD

The story is good and has potential, but from the 15 chapters that the novel have, 7 chapters are just him dating Jean or doing thing with her. I know the synopsis said that the novel will have harem, but with only Jean we already have just half of the plot, what will happen when he really have a harem? We will have 1 plot chapter and 10 chapters of him dating and interacting with the girls? Not even mentioning that this Jean is just an OC character with her powers and appearance, as her personality has nothing related to the real Jean Gray...

LV 3

NanoLOA

Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.

LV 4

LastGod

this is really good, but it's got some stupid stuff from the comics i never liked. how can a tech stop the activation of a gene that gives powers that like saying ur phone can turn ur hair blue by pressing a button. it always made me roll my eyes when the government was able to stop mutants as powerful as Magneto with little effort. then again, i also never like that their was so many powerful mutants. If mutants are so rare as to be 1 in 1 million people but also 1 in 1million are alpha and 1 in 1 billion an omega then thier should be very few powerful alpha and VERY few omega.

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Damian_Gold

is he a hero, villain or anti hero..........................................................................................................................

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DaoistFnrIrp

Muy buena historia Bro 👍 No puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo ...................................................................

LV 14

MellowFellow

I know your greatness, good grammar, nice plot, im happy for this new story. So don't drop it please. Like pretty please!

LV 12

Vitor_Lindo

Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções

LV 3

Bad_news_83

I wish you add Natasha And Gwen ghost spider And Wanda To mc harem Also you must expanded the plot how about mc make adventure through space join ravagers and find new planet for mutated to teleport them there …….and teleport any new one Also. The ten rings mc should get them as his weapon

LV 4

TheSlumberingWolf

Solid fanfic, nuff said.

LV 1

Oleg_Nikitin

Очень интересно и захватывающе, жду продолжение. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Madhurya_Porush

awesome novel and I really like the characters they have depth and the interaction is wonderful I really liked your writing style

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Agent_BJ

early review so you don't drop it 😎😎 .hehe

LV 14

Matt_inman

oh my God! what an amazing novel like seriously this one just made it into my top three of all time, I'm a huge fanfic nerd but I don't have anything to complain about I really enjoy OP characters so keep it rocking my friend and give me more more more. I can't wait keep up the hard work my friend God bless you.

LV 14

TsukasaSirius

The fanfiction has a good and entertaining storyline.🔥 The Characters are really well written. The grammar is also really good. Thanks to the Author for this nice ff. I recommend it. I hope this ff will continue Have my powerstones 👍🔥

LV 1

stray_bullet

just for the name .good one how big is the harem ?

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Thiago_Ferreira_6770

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Napstar_Craig2

It amazing for me. Perfectly emulates the xmen and their characteristics. Especially loved the fact how you made jean such a great outgoing girl compared to what most people portray her as.

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DaoistGEPvRX

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Cody_Mohr

I look forward to more chapters to see where this goes it is a very interesting story