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Dear author, Allow me to describe your story in three letters: W O W I cant stop myself from reading all the chapters and now I will willingly wait for your updates. Keep it up and more power😍😍😍😍😍😍
Saya mengucapkan selamat dan terima kasih kepada penulis yang sudah menulis cerita yang sangat bagus ini, saya sangat suka dengan karakter FL dan ML, suka dengan interaksi mereka (Leticia & Hugh) yang sangat manis , semangat 💪 terus buat penulis, dan terima kasih juga untuk selalu update 🙏 😍😘😘😘😘😘💕
Tidak sabar dengan kelanjutannya, semangat terus y kepada author, semoga tambah seru lagi untuk bab berikutnya, terima kasih selalu untuk updatenya 😘🙏
Terima kasih kepada penulis yang sudah membuat cerita yang sangat bagus ini, suka sekali dengan karakter Leticia dan Hugh, semangat terus y kak 😘💪
Overall, the story is not bad and I'm not bored. Both leads are likable with some interesting side characters and mystery which story of explain my ok score for story development. In that the story has started but not started at the same time, the more one reads the more questions they get so I'm guessing this story will go to over 200 chapters in its entirety. In addition there are grammatical errors you can read but the errors at times interrupts the flow of the story. It will remain in my library for now.
Well, if you like the usual troupe of "naive FL", this one if for you. Not my cup of tea as of now but I'll probably come back later when i have the patience .
I've read the first few chapters and instantly add it to my library! It's a typical genre of transmigration but I can say that it has a different way of execution... it's exciting finding out what will happen next. Goodluck author! 🔥😌❣️
Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!
let me tell you in onw word.. AWSOME... only the prologue and it will hooked up the readers. the writing is decent too.. keep going author...
You started the story with a very touching content especially the running away from home and that sudden confession part....It really got me then and there. The story and the whole plot isn't very much complicated and is very easy to understand. I added the book to my library and I'm truly anticipating about what happens next. Just as they say, " A half read book is a half finished love affair." Keep going author. Good luck[img=recommend]
I just read 3 chapters and I found your work really good. The writing is good, the very first prologue makes it much more interesting. That was what got me hooked and made me read few more chapters. Although, I saw some grammar errors. But, I'm assuming you'll fix them when you'll scan your chapters later. 5 stars to you! keep up the good work!!
Hi fellow Author/Reader! There aren't a lot of chapters but I can already imagine this being some sort of webtoon in the future! Incredible! Keep the updates going!
So far so good. With vivid descriptions, the author has made this amazing world in their book and I absolutely in love with her how the characters have been portrayed. I'm looking forward to more updates. Keep it up
Awesome, even though the novel is just starting, the scene written by the author is really worth noting. Way to go author, really looking forward to it.
love this book!! Just read the first three chapters and I like the way you deliver the story. Can't wait for more updates. Best of luck, author!
This story twinkles in gold, diamonds, and jewels. Sophistication, grace, and poise - traits I used to scorn but cannot help but adore in this author's writing - are evident. I can't wait to see you grow as a writer and watch this novel skyrocket. Keep rising!
Great synopsis, and a great book overall! The prologue left me baffling with questions, wanting to read more of the chapters! The author describes everything in a smooth pace and manner! I left some comments in the chapters. Kudos for the author~
The story is going well and I'm really liking it. I have no complaints. The flow of the story is going well too. I am looking forward to their interactions, waiting for him to wake up. BTW I liked the book cover. Great job.[img=recommend]
Dear author, Allow me to describe your story in three letters: W O W I cant stop myself from reading all the chapters and now I will willingly wait for your updates. Keep it up and more power😍😍😍😍😍😍
Saya mengucapkan selamat dan terima kasih kepada penulis yang sudah menulis cerita yang sangat bagus ini, saya sangat suka dengan karakter FL dan ML, suka dengan interaksi mereka (Leticia & Hugh) yang sangat manis , semangat 💪 terus buat penulis, dan terima kasih juga untuk selalu update 🙏 😍😘😘😘😘😘💕
Tidak sabar dengan kelanjutannya, semangat terus y kepada author, semoga tambah seru lagi untuk bab berikutnya, terima kasih selalu untuk updatenya 😘🙏
Terima kasih kepada penulis yang sudah membuat cerita yang sangat bagus ini, suka sekali dengan karakter Leticia dan Hugh, semangat terus y kak 😘💪
Overall, the story is not bad and I'm not bored. Both leads are likable with some interesting side characters and mystery which story of explain my ok score for story development. In that the story has started but not started at the same time, the more one reads the more questions they get so I'm guessing this story will go to over 200 chapters in its entirety. In addition there are grammatical errors you can read but the errors at times interrupts the flow of the story. It will remain in my library for now.
Well, if you like the usual troupe of "naive FL", this one if for you. Not my cup of tea as of now but I'll probably come back later when i have the patience .
I've read the first few chapters and instantly add it to my library! It's a typical genre of transmigration but I can say that it has a different way of execution... it's exciting finding out what will happen next. Goodluck author! 🔥😌❣️
Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!
let me tell you in onw word.. AWSOME... only the prologue and it will hooked up the readers. the writing is decent too.. keep going author...
You started the story with a very touching content especially the running away from home and that sudden confession part....It really got me then and there. The story and the whole plot isn't very much complicated and is very easy to understand. I added the book to my library and I'm truly anticipating about what happens next. Just as they say, " A half read book is a half finished love affair." Keep going author. Good luck[img=recommend]
I just read 3 chapters and I found your work really good. The writing is good, the very first prologue makes it much more interesting. That was what got me hooked and made me read few more chapters. Although, I saw some grammar errors. But, I'm assuming you'll fix them when you'll scan your chapters later. 5 stars to you! keep up the good work!!
Hi fellow Author/Reader! There aren't a lot of chapters but I can already imagine this being some sort of webtoon in the future! Incredible! Keep the updates going!
So far so good. With vivid descriptions, the author has made this amazing world in their book and I absolutely in love with her how the characters have been portrayed. I'm looking forward to more updates. Keep it up
Awesome, even though the novel is just starting, the scene written by the author is really worth noting. Way to go author, really looking forward to it.
love this book!! Just read the first three chapters and I like the way you deliver the story. Can't wait for more updates. Best of luck, author!
This story twinkles in gold, diamonds, and jewels. Sophistication, grace, and poise - traits I used to scorn but cannot help but adore in this author's writing - are evident. I can't wait to see you grow as a writer and watch this novel skyrocket. Keep rising!
Great synopsis, and a great book overall! The prologue left me baffling with questions, wanting to read more of the chapters! The author describes everything in a smooth pace and manner! I left some comments in the chapters. Kudos for the author~
The story is going well and I'm really liking it. I have no complaints. The flow of the story is going well too. I am looking forward to their interactions, waiting for him to wake up. BTW I liked the book cover. Great job.[img=recommend]