The author's has great story line and an amazing way of building in it up. By incorporating humor and paranormal elements, they have been able to come up with a new exciting world for readers. The story is super refreshing and comical and I think it's worth keeping. Good job author 👏💜
The storyline is the strongest point in this novel, the author has a well laid out background that makes the story have a good foundation. I would only comment on the grammar which needs a little polishing but that is not a problem. With just a little editing the book will be an amazing read. Keep it up author
After reading the first few chapters, it is already clear who descriptive the author's style is. The storyline has a lot of promise and the vivid way in which the author builds it is just phenomenal. The only problem is that the language needs some polishing but all in all the book is an amazing read.
One of the author's strong points is how realistic the characters are, honestly if I meet Ryu on some street I would marry him. The description of the world the author is building is also interesting and easily grasped. This is a book worth keeping.
oh no!! This sounds like a prophecy, characters you are doomed🙃
The prologue was the most intriguing part and the creativity behind it calls for the readers attention and clings to it. The bits and pieces of mystery that the author gives out in the next chapters are enough bait for readers to continue. The writing style is also very stable and the dose of mystic, the author gives to the characters is refreshing. I'll keep this awesome book and see where it goes
okay, twist🧐
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ARK The Bane of Spectres
Fantasy · Omnitheus
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ARK The Bane of Spectres
Fantasy · Omnitheus
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original The Isle of Guardians
4.92
Stripped of everything, Reyna escapes from the Magi, an organization of assassins that captured her as a child. She has lost so much, her own self included but she is given another chance to start over. A girl with Dark powers falls into Miran's arms just as he is on a mission to investigate a threat to the Guardians. For ages, the Guardians have watched over mortal souls as they passed over to the Sire's realm but now a blood-thirsty demon with his mind set on revenge wants to see the realm of the Guardians burn in the blazes of hell. Separated from even those who were closest to them, Miran and Reyna have to uncover the layers of mysteries that hold the five realms together, if they are to have any chance of getting their friends and families back. Forced to face princes of hell, angels and the terror of love can the two find what they are searching for without losing themselves first? Can Light and Darkness ever be one? Only the two will decide. "Give all thyself to thy duty and thy people but leave thy heart untouched for to only one does it belong."108 Chs 245 Collections
my MGS is about to start so you can expect at least one chapter everyday
The Isle of Guardians
Fantasy · d_nmalory