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PLEASE NO HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................
really hope this does not get discontinued. I loved the idea of this already. I think it will become one of my favourite game of thrones fic. hope to be reading alot more. Best wishes Jack x
A nice start, this could becoming very interesting in the later chapters. But will there ever be a worthy opponent when the mc is the shadow monarch...? Dragons could be a threat, but not so big in front of a shadow army. Having Kaisel makes things even easier too. Even so, it's pretty cool to read :)
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MC has the power and subordinates to conquer the world .. But all he wants is to develop a desolate land and married to the neighbor lords daughter ? Well I'm not complaining but this really dumb dude .He could just go to valeria and married to them or just take over there empire.................... ......................... .... ........... ................... .. ..... ........... ..... . ..jjhhjjhhhhhhjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjhhhhhhhhhhh .............
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one of the best web novels, I read. Keep it coming buddy and pls quit halfway, if you do have a patreon, I might join if it is in an affordable price range. Thank you
Please don't drop, and many many mass releases :D ppppppppppppppppllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~
this is the best don't stop keep updating more and thanks for the chapter author san this is just like a treasure trove [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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So far I'm liking it, the idea is very unique and creative. Just hoping he actually works with the north and not slowly conquer it from the inside
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it's really good and my guy you need to put the game of thrones tag it was hard finding this novel and when will be the next chapter and one more question will his people only be his son's and grandsons or other people not from his blood
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Spoiler de révélation Noice............................................................................................................................................
PLEASE NO HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................
really hope this does not get discontinued. I loved the idea of this already. I think it will become one of my favourite game of thrones fic. hope to be reading alot more. Best wishes Jack x
A nice start, this could becoming very interesting in the later chapters. But will there ever be a worthy opponent when the mc is the shadow monarch...? Dragons could be a threat, but not so big in front of a shadow army. Having Kaisel makes things even easier too. Even so, it's pretty cool to read :)
Spoiler de révélation MC has the power and subordinates to conquer the world .. But all he wants is to develop a desolate land and married to the neighbor lords daughter ? Well I'm not complaining but this really dumb dude .He could just go to valeria and married to them or just take over there empire.................... ......................... .... ........... ................... .. ..... ........... ..... . ..jjhhjjhhhhhhjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjhhhhhhhhhhh .............
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Spoiler de révélation Sa __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
one of the best web novels, I read. Keep it coming buddy and pls quit halfway, if you do have a patreon, I might join if it is in an affordable price range. Thank you
Please don't drop, and many many mass releases :D ppppppppppppppppllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~
this is the best don't stop keep updating more and thanks for the chapter author san this is just like a treasure trove [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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So far I'm liking it, the idea is very unique and creative. Just hoping he actually works with the north and not slowly conquer it from the inside
Spoiler de révélation it's really good and my guy you need to put the game of thrones tag it was hard finding this novel and when will be the next chapter and one more question will his people only be his son's and grandsons or other people not from his blood
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