Jack_Phantomhive

love it. looking forward to more

I like this story. But the way these chapters are going. I feel like it will slow down the pace stupidly. I hope we don't have to wait a month and over 40 chapters to deal with itachi, obito and danzo

so if you had power and someone hurt your family. you would not do everything within your power to protect them?

not sure what has happend here. but the levels have been lowered. thought it might have been a mistake. now i know its not. the warrior level after 5 month time skip was fifty something. now its in the 40's. you also already had the observe skill earlier. now its gone. you need to either change previous status or read back previous chapters and correct levels. love the story so far but status needs to be corrected x

depends on how experianced the crew are. if they have only fought in training exercises then there will be many mistakes. it takes time to load and use cannons. many shots will miss or cause minimal damage. all that going on with the heat of battle would make it harder. so i would say 50 for a inexperienced crew. 20 for a battle hardend. may only need 1 to scare the enemy fleet. as i'm sure the enemy crews will lose moral from the sound and deverstation a cannon would cause

i really enjoyed your previous work. but this is very boring. seems like the mc is regressing. the mc really has nothing that makes me want to like them so far. with quin i loved instantly. this mc is just pitiful. i'm going to let this build up for a bit. i shall come back in a month hopefully something might happen that makes me want to continue reading. if i could stick through the sin vault arc. i can make it through this. best wishes Jack x

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