DXD:SI AS RISER WITH JACKASS TEMPLATE SYSTEM

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Shanto5

This story is unreadable. The MC simp over every single female character in the story. Give over the top speech and added a weird system. Riser has already powerful. You did not need to add a system to the story.

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Adrion_Lord

Is this going to be another rias bashing dxd fic? Cause im pretty tired of those already ................................................

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Fanfic_Lovers

Harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem

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aman10

1. it's my bias opinion - i don't like transmigrate novel when there is already bad opinion about mc or whatever character, ex riser everyone know how is he and his behaviour and suddenly you transmigrate in the middle so that's a big nooo for me 2- mc don't do anything to improve his image , he say sorry or all that but there is no motivation behind 3- if author wants he can reincarnated mc as riser in his baby age like 4 years old so he can have time to improve his skills behaviour etc 4 - whole story of premise is just based on riser marriage and there is nothing more than that 5- i don't like to much mc either i know he is teenager and all that but there is limit so yeah that all hope you get enough understanding of this novel

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shirou_sureiya

its a lie he doesn't have a system the author just tricked you guys the template system he doesnt have it its all a lie the author is big fat liar

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Darius_Chromwell

I’ll rewrite this review when the mc actually gets his system until then i say good day sir!🧐

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Herohero

so far (I'm in chapter 5) I think the author is doing a good job, precisely with the personality of the Mc who does not force himself to please everyone like this Beta Mc and he is also a little arrogant and narcissistic, and I will add that I currently enjoy as he is interacting with his family . and I add with regard to the grammar and the construction of world , this also it's good job continue like that👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 13

skulputulurubug

author doesn't know a thing about Riser, he's a powerful devil that was respected because of his strength he had a Harem, and doesn't need to force servants, he looked pathetic when he lost to Issei but he was one of the lucky young masters in the series

LV 14

Sirrow

A very disapointing fanfic where the author doesen‘t know a shi* about riser phoenix and the template systeam is a trasch tier i mean comon quick silver as a template where close combat beings are not only very rare but faster then quick silver (movie) and the most fights hapens in the sky…….

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Logain_Septimus

Practice English or get this translated. ,................................................................................................

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Transhumanist

This story is the worst excuse of a DxD fanfic I've read. Even if the writing quality wasn't like this, ie. Unreadable , it would still suck. The MC is a retard that has the intellect and common sense of a 7 year old.

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shin_rae_miu

proof read your novel before publishing. most of the time it gets confusing when you call a man her when talking to a woman. a bit biased to riser thought I don't know if I just read it wrong but it seems biased for me.

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Daoist411430

He visto malos pero este se lleva la palma se nota que no entiendes los niveles de poder de dxd raiser e 6 meses de entrenamiento con un dragon alcanzo fisica i magia el poder demonio de clase alta i pudo darle pelea a un demonio de clase suprema

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AntiWorldSystem

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Dylan_Carman

I like it so far it pretty good and funny 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Infinitesimal

How much is liked that for plains picture of the other ones are you doing today I need to get together soon as I zkiznsixsjxjujxnnsisnsoznslznzlznzkzkskskzkzmzmmzkzkzzk

LV 3

Dao_of_Thighs

Don't believe those one-star reviews lol, the story is just slow phased, it's only been one day in the story. The system also exists, sigh. it just needs a trigger, which some people didn't wait for before giving a one star. And I don't mind the mc dumping to venelana and grayfia... It's not like you wouldn't do that if you saw them. So, far it's entertaining.

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ReMormius

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jonathan_Gomez

Vamos a ver a donde lleva esto.(From Argentina)