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A wonderful story with its own unique elements, we get to see a blend of two sides. The MC even though coming from a different world, takes care and puts effort into blending in with the new world that he finds himself in. Unlike many transmigration where the MC just goes on about caring for wherever he might have ended up in, this story aims to remain closer to a reality check by giving us a pov where the MC doesn't wander around, carefree. The writing quality and update rate are well maintained as of now. The story progresses steadily and there is no lack of nice scenes to read. Overall a good and fun read, something with a different pace from a cultivation novel.
Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!
The braindeath logic of tbe proto was to much. He literally has absolutely zero reason neither emotionally or Intellectually to love/miss and grief that much for his ,,wife(dream/life/hope/spirit destroyer),,
story pacing is extremly slow and have lot of unnecessary description. like how when he woke up,opening door,wearing shoes. It’s description is taking over 65% story.I think the author should changr this things or else everyone become bored of this
I like the premise, despite having an extremely slow pace and short chapters, I read it with curiosity and without any problem, but my reason for abandoning the novel is the extremely irritating female character of Seo Hea-Jung, I found her personality very annoying. This is my opinion, if you want to read the novel do it. PS: English is not my main language :p
one of the best showbiz novel read out here its good it has a system too but it will be the side character instead of mc must read
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It's not bad, but it's not good either. Honestly, it's not that enjoying to read and kinda becomes of a chore coz there's something off that I can't point out. Like it feels the story is kinda stiff. The world background is also kinda weird since it feels like Korean, with Western and other Asian vibes. I wouldn't usually mind this but it needs proper development, or maybe it's just a translation problem if ever. I don't know what's the plan with the "System" but if it's only for the so-called psuedo-omnipotent "Guidance", then I think it's really just the author directly inserting themselves in the plot that pulls the story in other direction with now prior build up. It basically becomes a badly written plot device (or even a deus ex machina at some point in the future). Well, normally, I wouldn't bother to leave a review, but I just don't think the story deserves that high of a rating.
I love this novel so much. characters are so simple but story has deapth absolutely love it.
Author please write and update daily I already bought and read all the previlage chapters. I love the story I want you to continue it don't put book in hitaus
Well, this is the second book of yours that I’m reading. Well, naturally I don’t read more than one book from an author. But possibly got drawn because we are writing in the same genre. I read your synopsis. Looks good, so will probably be reading this.
I just started this novel and so far I'm liking the read and the characters I've met so far. However, this story right now is suffering from regular updates which is why I gave it that score. I'm not bored with the story and am hopeful that the updates restart and becomes more consistent.
I love this! One of the best transmigrate novels I read. I'm not a huge fan of slow paced novels but this is just too good😄 I was confuse where the system was because the tag said system but it didn't show till chapter 40+ or smthng.
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I just started reading this book so kinda gave a random review of 4 stars. Well onto the main topic I wanna talk about..... Will we be seeing Quin anytime soon? Or will we see her at all?
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Weirdly i absolutely love this novel to the deep of my heart..... And will probably always be my favorite novel. Idk if its because of how its written or because of the proggresion in the story. I fell in love with this slice-of life slow story like apart from a few people you can feel that most of them are real and fresh with different personalities
So what's the system role in this? I read up to chapter 68 and the system doesn't have any impact as of yet........................................
hey bro. I really appreciate your novel. keep it up. your novel is a hidden gem. its a shame that nobody notices your novel, only time will tell. Fighting!!
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All in all, was good. But, nothing is perfect, same as the characters. Do not expecting perfect characters in here. Truly realistic fiction.
The only qualms i have about this novel is that the dialogue is so apathetic. its like robots talking to each other. honestly if the author worded it more appropriately, then it would have been fine.
I still didn't read it but gonna give it a 5 star rating but can anybody tell me if the mc reincarnated in Chinese or in South Korea? anyone ?.................. .......... ...........
Its quite good… I Would recommend people to read. But the chapters are small.
I haven't read this yet but I am expecting that this is something good. I've been looking for actors, models, idols, etc. that the mc is male. After all, I've finished reading most of the popular novels of the same genre. l Finally, I've found this.
looks very promising, one question tho... is he gonna meet his wife on Earth?(bit of a major spoiler but I'm curious. I'll be reading the remaining Chapters in the mean time lol
Story progress so slow and boring ........ Theres so much unecessary moment imo. But apreciate author posting it daily , 3,4/5......................................
The story is good and all but, author should have put slow-paced tag unto the description tags. Great grammar and smooth flow of sentences. Nothing out of place or forced so far. Also, I almost forgot about the system, though it'll never come. This is my review, that's all.
It's a transmigration novel but as I have read most of the transmigration novels, usually the plot line never changes where a normal person get into a new body of royal or rich person but here in this novel, this is the twist becoz ML here being a king in previous life get transmigrate to be a novice.(poor guy)😆 He gets into the new world and will follow his dream he was not able to do as a king. This novel shows struggle, happiness, comedy, stingyness and many more emotions which add freshness to it so, readers who wants to try something new other then those clinche novel should definitely read this. And lemme tell u ML is not dumb, he is quite smart nd cute 😂🤣
A wonderful story with its own unique elements, we get to see a blend of two sides. The MC even though coming from a different world, takes care and puts effort into blending in with the new world that he finds himself in. Unlike many transmigration where the MC just goes on about caring for wherever he might have ended up in, this story aims to remain closer to a reality check by giving us a pov where the MC doesn't wander around, carefree. The writing quality and update rate are well maintained as of now. The story progresses steadily and there is no lack of nice scenes to read. Overall a good and fun read, something with a different pace from a cultivation novel.
Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!
The braindeath logic of tbe proto was to much. He literally has absolutely zero reason neither emotionally or Intellectually to love/miss and grief that much for his ,,wife(dream/life/hope/spirit destroyer),,
story pacing is extremly slow and have lot of unnecessary description. like how when he woke up,opening door,wearing shoes. It’s description is taking over 65% story.I think the author should changr this things or else everyone become bored of this
I like the premise, despite having an extremely slow pace and short chapters, I read it with curiosity and without any problem, but my reason for abandoning the novel is the extremely irritating female character of Seo Hea-Jung, I found her personality very annoying. This is my opinion, if you want to read the novel do it. PS: English is not my main language :p
one of the best showbiz novel read out here its good it has a system too but it will be the side character instead of mc must read
Spoiler de révélation It's not bad, but it's not good either. Honestly, it's not that enjoying to read and kinda becomes of a chore coz there's something off that I can't point out. Like it feels the story is kinda stiff. The world background is also kinda weird since it feels like Korean, with Western and other Asian vibes. I wouldn't usually mind this but it needs proper development, or maybe it's just a translation problem if ever. I don't know what's the plan with the "System" but if it's only for the so-called psuedo-omnipotent "Guidance", then I think it's really just the author directly inserting themselves in the plot that pulls the story in other direction with now prior build up. It basically becomes a badly written plot device (or even a deus ex machina at some point in the future). Well, normally, I wouldn't bother to leave a review, but I just don't think the story deserves that high of a rating.
I love this novel so much. characters are so simple but story has deapth absolutely love it.
Author please write and update daily I already bought and read all the previlage chapters. I love the story I want you to continue it don't put book in hitaus
Well, this is the second book of yours that I’m reading. Well, naturally I don’t read more than one book from an author. But possibly got drawn because we are writing in the same genre. I read your synopsis. Looks good, so will probably be reading this.
I just started this novel and so far I'm liking the read and the characters I've met so far. However, this story right now is suffering from regular updates which is why I gave it that score. I'm not bored with the story and am hopeful that the updates restart and becomes more consistent.
I love this! One of the best transmigrate novels I read. I'm not a huge fan of slow paced novels but this is just too good😄 I was confuse where the system was because the tag said system but it didn't show till chapter 40+ or smthng.
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I just started reading this book so kinda gave a random review of 4 stars. Well onto the main topic I wanna talk about..... Will we be seeing Quin anytime soon? Or will we see her at all?
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The story is good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Weirdly i absolutely love this novel to the deep of my heart..... And will probably always be my favorite novel. Idk if its because of how its written or because of the proggresion in the story. I fell in love with this slice-of life slow story like apart from a few people you can feel that most of them are real and fresh with different personalities
So what's the system role in this? I read up to chapter 68 and the system doesn't have any impact as of yet........................................
hey bro. I really appreciate your novel. keep it up. your novel is a hidden gem. its a shame that nobody notices your novel, only time will tell. Fighting!!
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All in all, was good. But, nothing is perfect, same as the characters. Do not expecting perfect characters in here. Truly realistic fiction.
The only qualms i have about this novel is that the dialogue is so apathetic. its like robots talking to each other. honestly if the author worded it more appropriately, then it would have been fine.
I still didn't read it but gonna give it a 5 star rating but can anybody tell me if the mc reincarnated in Chinese or in South Korea? anyone ?.................. .......... ...........
Its quite good… I Would recommend people to read. But the chapters are small.
I haven't read this yet but I am expecting that this is something good. I've been looking for actors, models, idols, etc. that the mc is male. After all, I've finished reading most of the popular novels of the same genre. l Finally, I've found this.
looks very promising, one question tho... is he gonna meet his wife on Earth?(bit of a major spoiler but I'm curious. I'll be reading the remaining Chapters in the mean time lol
Story progress so slow and boring ........ Theres so much unecessary moment imo. But apreciate author posting it daily , 3,4/5......................................
The story is good and all but, author should have put slow-paced tag unto the description tags. Great grammar and smooth flow of sentences. Nothing out of place or forced so far. Also, I almost forgot about the system, though it'll never come. This is my review, that's all.
It's a transmigration novel but as I have read most of the transmigration novels, usually the plot line never changes where a normal person get into a new body of royal or rich person but here in this novel, this is the twist becoz ML here being a king in previous life get transmigrate to be a novice.(poor guy)😆 He gets into the new world and will follow his dream he was not able to do as a king. This novel shows struggle, happiness, comedy, stingyness and many more emotions which add freshness to it so, readers who wants to try something new other then those clinche novel should definitely read this. And lemme tell u ML is not dumb, he is quite smart nd cute 😂🤣