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I think the story is just not that interesting compared to others from the same genre the man was a king but his character is just like any average person also through the chapters he plays just a supporting role and instead of trying to improve himself and widen his view about the supposly different world to improve his acting he focuses in helping the formal female friend of the dead guy but the writing is consistent and that's an advantage at least but the characters are cringey to me especially the rich female girl that suddenly pooped out and saw something interesting in Mc without any prober reason just for the plot
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Right now i haven’t caught up to the last chapter but I really like the story so far. The author has given us quite a bit about the world background and characters to read about. Our main character is exactly how i like my mcs and recently ive been liking a lot of novels about acting. On the otherhand there arent many likable chracters aside from the mc and the girl hes usually with, the other classmates seem one dimensional and not well planned out but its ok since i enjoy cliche stories. Also I really hate to say this, but for me it sometimes gets hard to focus on the story because of the writing. There is a fair amount of grammatical errors and even if they fixed all of that, the writing itself is not very enticing. I myself am not that great of a writer but and i can say the way it is written makes me want to stop. its good that they have a slight knack for creating an interesting plot since it is still making me read.
Ok. interesting. Plot developing. Excited to read more chapters. .... Ok. interesting. Plot developing. Excited to read more chapters.Ok. interesting. Plot developing. Excited to read more chapters.
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I Loved this story and author has different view,the way he try to improve the story line is great. The characters he created are simple but elegant.Looking forward for more chapters [img=update]
Great story. A different type of plot compared to what on used to, but still enjoyable. the grammar is understandable with few mistakes. although there are a few inconsistencies in the mc's character.
I like the overall plot of the story, more precisely how it starts in another world as given in the prologue. The characters which has been introduced to us so far are written well, each one of them having their own background story, giving them a life of their own. The author has clearly improved in comparison to his first story on here. But at the same time, I would like to mention here that there are certain aspects in which the writing is lacking. One can find grammatical errors here and there when it comes to the narration of dialogues. At the same time there are places with missing commas that are definitely required there as well as some lower case letters used after a period. Though I am sure that the author with work on these. Wishing you the best of luck for the contest ❤️.
Excellent novel! The way the characters have been portrayed, the way the plot is taking turn, it is just amazing. The way the whole thing is being expressed and being put out there is mind blowing. having fun reading it. Definitely should give it a read, it is worth every second<3
CruCruMonsta HOW DARE YOU! I have one word for you people. SHOWBIZ and another TRANSMIGRATION and another EPIC I've only read a few chapters of this book so far but I was bestowed upon the honor of perusing this astronomical book before it was published. The storyline and the creativity in all the elements put together got me hook line and center. I've always been a fan of showbiz but oh man. The fact that our dear MC here was a King and not able to chase his dreams, then he transmigrated, became a novice and got that opportunity... maybe I'm being sentimental but I'm so excited for this journey. If you guys haven't stopped reading this and started reading the book by now....imma be disappointed! Finally, a few last words to the author, CruCruMonsta I believe in you and I be supporting you all through this journey so don't give up. I hope to see you soar far into the heavens (not dead ofc) and you also chase your dreams. don't drop or I kill
An interesting story with a good twist on the transmigration context ..................................................................................................................................[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Great story. Unique plot line. Writing quality is great and it’s a good pick. Unlike other transmigration And isekai, this novel has a more realistic plotline and characters. The author really thought things through and the king becoming a novice part is funny because he can now actually do what he wanted—his true dreams and follow them.
Hmm... Let's start the grand reviewing ceremony then. Once again I was on a hunt for a new book when I discovered this hidden gem in the corner of the Webnovel platform. After reading the prologue I was like "Must be some contemporary history book with some magic elements...". But believe me after reading the first two Chapters my views completely changed. This book is the best mixture of showbiz, drama, suspense and ofc the last but not the least a lot of mysteries.
This story is quite nice. Not many chapters but I can see the characters and story goes very well and are progressive. It's also not cliché romance. All in all a nice story, Everyone should give it a read before saying anything about it.
Rebirth is always such a fascinating concept that I love and this story upto 12 chapters didn't disappoint me at all 🤩 A King is reborn into the modern world who finally gets to pursue his dream of becoming an actor. I am interested to read how the King will adjust to his new life in modern era 😆🤭 Loved the writing and flow. The narration is good. I am curious if his wife is also reborn and if they will meet? 🧐 Too many questions so eagerly waiting for the plot development ❤️ Good luck Author! All the best! 👍
As one of the early readers who read this story before it was published online, all I can say is this is an awesome story. The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform. I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.
I discovered this book on a lazy Friday afternoon, in which I had just finished reading one of the greatest works on this site. However, once I read the first line from esteemed author Crucruel, I was completely taken aback. It would be an understatement to say that this novel--no, this work of art--is truly a masterpiece, one of the finest novels on this site. Following the path of the protagonist, Zen Su (Kim Joon-won), the readers are thrown into a finely developed world. Not only does this novel bring a new, fresh approach to the rebirth sub-genre, but the unique ideas brought within the words truly enlighten any reader who picks up this masterpiece. In particular, the focus of the duality of mankind and the consequences that an individual must be put through in times of stress exemplify some of the greatest philosophical beliefs that Mr. Crucruel is quite renowned for. Furthermore, the method by which these words are written and knitted together into a complex web of beautiful writing demonstrate Mr. Crucruel's profound knowledge and experience in the writing industry. It is quite rare for me to discover a work that truly speaks to my heart and soul, and for me to have the capability to lay my eyes on this blessed work is something that I cannot describe my gratitude for. Despite the fact that there are only twelve chapters published up to date, these mere twelve chapters are enough to capture the attention of any reader. If one may be in the debate of whether or not to choose to continue with this novel, it is highly recommended that one reads up to date before creating such a decision. This piece of artwork is something that I can sincerely call life-changing, so a decision should be carefully made if it comes to this point. Also, before the end of the review, I would like to note my absolute fervor for the second leading male character, A'mu, and the cloud of mystery that surrounds him. I do hope that Mr. Crucruel decides to add in more scenes of said leading character, other than the protagonist Zen Su. Overall, regardless, I would rate this novel much higher than five stars if possible, yet that is beyond the limits of this site. And similarly, perhaps this is the way that I describe the true quality of this novel. It is beyond the limits of this site, beyond the limits of writing. It is truly an absolute work of art.
Aye, not many chapters to give a detailed review but I like how much I have read till now. Really loved his interaction with his daughter in that world before he passed away. I am quite interested to read how this goes since he was a king before. Acting really shouldn't be a problem for him. Not to mention get into the industry which involves deceit and schemes. Hope you don't drop it~
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This book is better than the old book which was apocalypse and the concept is more relaxed and nice to read. Do a better job.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very interesting story.. Highly anticipated by me as well, i have been waiting for ages to see this authors next novel and here it is. And i am most certainly impressed
Interesting story. Will read to see where it will go. good work by the author and I'm sorry, I'm sleepy to write a good review. Just don't drop and keep writing.
This is quite good 👍 I like this kind of ML, he's only had his dream in his eyes, he got his priorities straight, not like many transmigration ML. Good luck and Thanks for writing this 🙆♀️
I think the story is just not that interesting compared to others from the same genre the man was a king but his character is just like any average person also through the chapters he plays just a supporting role and instead of trying to improve himself and widen his view about the supposly different world to improve his acting he focuses in helping the formal female friend of the dead guy but the writing is consistent and that's an advantage at least but the characters are cringey to me especially the rich female girl that suddenly pooped out and saw something interesting in Mc without any prober reason just for the plot
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Spoiler de révélation Right now i haven’t caught up to the last chapter but I really like the story so far. The author has given us quite a bit about the world background and characters to read about. Our main character is exactly how i like my mcs and recently ive been liking a lot of novels about acting. On the otherhand there arent many likable chracters aside from the mc and the girl hes usually with, the other classmates seem one dimensional and not well planned out but its ok since i enjoy cliche stories. Also I really hate to say this, but for me it sometimes gets hard to focus on the story because of the writing. There is a fair amount of grammatical errors and even if they fixed all of that, the writing itself is not very enticing. I myself am not that great of a writer but and i can say the way it is written makes me want to stop. its good that they have a slight knack for creating an interesting plot since it is still making me read.
Ok. interesting. Plot developing. Excited to read more chapters. .... Ok. interesting. Plot developing. Excited to read more chapters.Ok. interesting. Plot developing. Excited to read more chapters.
Spoiler de révélation I Loved this story and author has different view,the way he try to improve the story line is great. The characters he created are simple but elegant.Looking forward for more chapters [img=update]
Great story. A different type of plot compared to what on used to, but still enjoyable. the grammar is understandable with few mistakes. although there are a few inconsistencies in the mc's character.
I like the overall plot of the story, more precisely how it starts in another world as given in the prologue. The characters which has been introduced to us so far are written well, each one of them having their own background story, giving them a life of their own. The author has clearly improved in comparison to his first story on here. But at the same time, I would like to mention here that there are certain aspects in which the writing is lacking. One can find grammatical errors here and there when it comes to the narration of dialogues. At the same time there are places with missing commas that are definitely required there as well as some lower case letters used after a period. Though I am sure that the author with work on these. Wishing you the best of luck for the contest ❤️.
Excellent novel! The way the characters have been portrayed, the way the plot is taking turn, it is just amazing. The way the whole thing is being expressed and being put out there is mind blowing. having fun reading it. Definitely should give it a read, it is worth every second<3
CruCruMonsta HOW DARE YOU! I have one word for you people. SHOWBIZ and another TRANSMIGRATION and another EPIC I've only read a few chapters of this book so far but I was bestowed upon the honor of perusing this astronomical book before it was published. The storyline and the creativity in all the elements put together got me hook line and center. I've always been a fan of showbiz but oh man. The fact that our dear MC here was a King and not able to chase his dreams, then he transmigrated, became a novice and got that opportunity... maybe I'm being sentimental but I'm so excited for this journey. If you guys haven't stopped reading this and started reading the book by now....imma be disappointed! Finally, a few last words to the author, CruCruMonsta I believe in you and I be supporting you all through this journey so don't give up. I hope to see you soar far into the heavens (not dead ofc) and you also chase your dreams. don't drop or I kill
An interesting story with a good twist on the transmigration context ..................................................................................................................................[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Great story. Unique plot line. Writing quality is great and it’s a good pick. Unlike other transmigration And isekai, this novel has a more realistic plotline and characters. The author really thought things through and the king becoming a novice part is funny because he can now actually do what he wanted—his true dreams and follow them.
Hmm... Let's start the grand reviewing ceremony then. Once again I was on a hunt for a new book when I discovered this hidden gem in the corner of the Webnovel platform. After reading the prologue I was like "Must be some contemporary history book with some magic elements...". But believe me after reading the first two Chapters my views completely changed. This book is the best mixture of showbiz, drama, suspense and ofc the last but not the least a lot of mysteries.
This story is quite nice. Not many chapters but I can see the characters and story goes very well and are progressive. It's also not cliché romance. All in all a nice story, Everyone should give it a read before saying anything about it.
Rebirth is always such a fascinating concept that I love and this story upto 12 chapters didn't disappoint me at all 🤩 A King is reborn into the modern world who finally gets to pursue his dream of becoming an actor. I am interested to read how the King will adjust to his new life in modern era 😆🤭 Loved the writing and flow. The narration is good. I am curious if his wife is also reborn and if they will meet? 🧐 Too many questions so eagerly waiting for the plot development ❤️ Good luck Author! All the best! 👍
As one of the early readers who read this story before it was published online, all I can say is this is an awesome story. The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform. I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.
I discovered this book on a lazy Friday afternoon, in which I had just finished reading one of the greatest works on this site. However, once I read the first line from esteemed author Crucruel, I was completely taken aback. It would be an understatement to say that this novel--no, this work of art--is truly a masterpiece, one of the finest novels on this site. Following the path of the protagonist, Zen Su (Kim Joon-won), the readers are thrown into a finely developed world. Not only does this novel bring a new, fresh approach to the rebirth sub-genre, but the unique ideas brought within the words truly enlighten any reader who picks up this masterpiece. In particular, the focus of the duality of mankind and the consequences that an individual must be put through in times of stress exemplify some of the greatest philosophical beliefs that Mr. Crucruel is quite renowned for. Furthermore, the method by which these words are written and knitted together into a complex web of beautiful writing demonstrate Mr. Crucruel's profound knowledge and experience in the writing industry. It is quite rare for me to discover a work that truly speaks to my heart and soul, and for me to have the capability to lay my eyes on this blessed work is something that I cannot describe my gratitude for. Despite the fact that there are only twelve chapters published up to date, these mere twelve chapters are enough to capture the attention of any reader. If one may be in the debate of whether or not to choose to continue with this novel, it is highly recommended that one reads up to date before creating such a decision. This piece of artwork is something that I can sincerely call life-changing, so a decision should be carefully made if it comes to this point. Also, before the end of the review, I would like to note my absolute fervor for the second leading male character, A'mu, and the cloud of mystery that surrounds him. I do hope that Mr. Crucruel decides to add in more scenes of said leading character, other than the protagonist Zen Su. Overall, regardless, I would rate this novel much higher than five stars if possible, yet that is beyond the limits of this site. And similarly, perhaps this is the way that I describe the true quality of this novel. It is beyond the limits of this site, beyond the limits of writing. It is truly an absolute work of art.
Aye, not many chapters to give a detailed review but I like how much I have read till now. Really loved his interaction with his daughter in that world before he passed away. I am quite interested to read how this goes since he was a king before. Acting really shouldn't be a problem for him. Not to mention get into the industry which involves deceit and schemes. Hope you don't drop it~
Spoiler de révélation This book is better than the old book which was apocalypse and the concept is more relaxed and nice to read. Do a better job.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very interesting story.. Highly anticipated by me as well, i have been waiting for ages to see this authors next novel and here it is. And i am most certainly impressed
Interesting story. Will read to see where it will go. good work by the author and I'm sorry, I'm sleepy to write a good review. Just don't drop and keep writing.
This is quite good 👍 I like this kind of ML, he's only had his dream in his eyes, he got his priorities straight, not like many transmigration ML. Good luck and Thanks for writing this 🙆♀️