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I like it ..... I have patience .... ......too much internal monologue( about 2/3 of novel is self biography of mc) .... .....but I've patience ......... ........the best harem novel with great personality I've ever read on webnovel ....... .......some problems on remembering names but thanks for your para pic it doesn't bother ......👍👍
I like it. the comedy is great. the action is quite rich. Despite the huge numbers of the harem, it's not boring reading their interesting (mainly because the character of the MC is great and he's smooth in interacting). Sometimes it's hard remembering the women. But it's not like they show up all the time, and unnecesarily talk a lot or comment a lot, but their personality is not dead at least.
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Leaving the messed up grammar aside, this story is amusing. I recommend it for anyone who wants to fill their free time without caring of the headache inducing grammar.
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this is literally the best and most unique fanfic I've read, like the storyline line is funny with the dark humor. and I like how the mc ain't a stupid dense mc that so boring and doesn't get most of his women's feeling, where this mc is just peak chaos and has the best personality
10 chapters in the mcs pov is bad and there's no dynamics between characters really it's just his opinion on their personalities. his headspace is annoying in that he talks about causing problems that make no sense and I just don't look forward to anything he'd do in the future. I think the character is set up to be cool but it was lost in execution
If you like smart and antihero/borderline evil Mc with a somewhat realistic harem, then I highly recommend reading this fanfic. Just endure the first 45~ chapters and the story will get really interesting.
I haven't read that far but it's currently really good but the only question I have is, Why the heck is Monika in the cover? Is she somehow gonna appear later on the story? Because if so that would be a bit scary...
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178 capitulos que comenzo con protagonista escapando y luego de mundo en mundo conociendo las chicas , conquistandolas a su manera , teniendo titulos que no quiere , pero con el paso de los capitulos le afectan y termina aceptando su destino xD(no sin olvidar su compañero inmortal que sirve como escudo para ataques xD ) y con cada capitulo se pone cada vez mejor , conociendo que su familia no es tan simple , y que ahora tiene que asumir las responsabilidades de todas las mujeres que conocio o dejo embarazadas , etc xD.
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I dont pretty much like big harem, but i saw chino kafū on the cover so i immediately read and add this on my bookmark. DONT GET THE WRONG IDEA IM NOT A LOLICON OK!? Its just chino is one of my favorite character, Yeah thats it!
Hi author san thanks for great work First I like to know is the characters chapter women are part of his harem. Is he going to grow ub i don't understand his inner condition i jope he grows ub and stop his Childes act
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Oof. It's really hard to write review for this fanfic, since it felt like a trip. My bad, I just couldn't take anymore around 30ish chapters. Twice. So my review is up to that part + some skimmed later chapters to make sure it doesn't become any better(in my opinion of course). Spoiler: no it does not. As people already stated, this reads as a Diary of mental asylum patient, who becomes more and more deranged with each chapter. P.S. Considering everything, I wouldn't be surprised if ending would be simple: "Lin Ruoxi", gal in the bar at the beginning of the fanfic, spiked MC's drink. And now he is hallucinating, lying in bath full of ice, with few missing inner organs.
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anyone know the one fanfic where the mc is reincarnated into a world in an apocalypse and he has this system that summons anime character to protect him and what its called?
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this is not a novel this is fckg diary,,this book only 1person pov monologue all the way
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I must say, this is one of my favorite books on this site for the following reasons: I like the mindset of the mc. (even if most people do no like it) I like his cautiousness. (He is very paranoid.) The relationship he has with the grils and the obvious favoritism that comes with it. (I especially like this because of of he mc's on this site believe in the 'i will love you all equally thing') Some negative points are: The unstable release of chapters. The mc that speaks to much and overthinks in many situations.(This lessens overtime) Hypocrite mc. (It is not a negative for me but maybe it is for some people Big harem, like, VERY big harem. (again, not a negative for me but maybe for some people well. Yeah thats it for me. Thanks a lot for the book Bukaro, hope too see more.
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The story is really cool, it has some problems like him getting a new woman every 3 chapters, but that's personal and you might like it, one of the cool parts was the way the author created the multiverse, I won't say it is perfect, but it's certainly better than many other people on these sites who get lost in this part, it was also really cool this idea of making the character totally crazy, which ends up giving a "justification" for why the protagonist does crazy things, like kind of break the 4th wall sometimes. And also Navi is the real protagonist of this work, this guy who claims to be the protagonist is just a secondary character that is manipulated by Navi.
I like it ..... I have patience .... ......too much internal monologue( about 2/3 of novel is self biography of mc) .... .....but I've patience ......... ........the best harem novel with great personality I've ever read on webnovel ....... .......some problems on remembering names but thanks for your para pic it doesn't bother ......👍👍
I like it. the comedy is great. the action is quite rich. Despite the huge numbers of the harem, it's not boring reading their interesting (mainly because the character of the MC is great and he's smooth in interacting). Sometimes it's hard remembering the women. But it's not like they show up all the time, and unnecesarily talk a lot or comment a lot, but their personality is not dead at least.
Its Good. $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
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Leaving the messed up grammar aside, this story is amusing. I recommend it for anyone who wants to fill their free time without caring of the headache inducing grammar.
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good 😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😌😌😊😌😌😊😊😊😊😌😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
this is literally the best and most unique fanfic I've read, like the storyline line is funny with the dark humor. and I like how the mc ain't a stupid dense mc that so boring and doesn't get most of his women's feeling, where this mc is just peak chaos and has the best personality
10 chapters in the mcs pov is bad and there's no dynamics between characters really it's just his opinion on their personalities. his headspace is annoying in that he talks about causing problems that make no sense and I just don't look forward to anything he'd do in the future. I think the character is set up to be cool but it was lost in execution
If you like smart and antihero/borderline evil Mc with a somewhat realistic harem, then I highly recommend reading this fanfic. Just endure the first 45~ chapters and the story will get really interesting.
I haven't read that far but it's currently really good but the only question I have is, Why the heck is Monika in the cover? Is she somehow gonna appear later on the story? Because if so that would be a bit scary...
anti 5star bot spamm .......................................................................................
178 capitulos que comenzo con protagonista escapando y luego de mundo en mundo conociendo las chicas , conquistandolas a su manera , teniendo titulos que no quiere , pero con el paso de los capitulos le afectan y termina aceptando su destino xD(no sin olvidar su compañero inmortal que sirve como escudo para ataques xD ) y con cada capitulo se pone cada vez mejor , conociendo que su familia no es tan simple , y que ahora tiene que asumir las responsabilidades de todas las mujeres que conocio o dejo embarazadas , etc xD.
That is crazy hhh[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I dont pretty much like big harem, but i saw chino kafū on the cover so i immediately read and add this on my bookmark. DONT GET THE WRONG IDEA IM NOT A LOLICON OK!? Its just chino is one of my favorite character, Yeah thats it!
Hi author san thanks for great work First I like to know is the characters chapter women are part of his harem. Is he going to grow ub i don't understand his inner condition i jope he grows ub and stop his Childes act
me gusta como causa caos xD. ************************************************************************************************************************************************
Oof. It's really hard to write review for this fanfic, since it felt like a trip. My bad, I just couldn't take anymore around 30ish chapters. Twice. So my review is up to that part + some skimmed later chapters to make sure it doesn't become any better(in my opinion of course). Spoiler: no it does not. As people already stated, this reads as a Diary of mental asylum patient, who becomes more and more deranged with each chapter. P.S. Considering everything, I wouldn't be surprised if ending would be simple: "Lin Ruoxi", gal in the bar at the beginning of the fanfic, spiked MC's drink. And now he is hallucinating, lying in bath full of ice, with few missing inner organs.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Spoiler de révélation anyone know the one fanfic where the mc is reincarnated into a world in an apocalypse and he has this system that summons anime character to protect him and what its called?
Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended Recommended
this is not a novel this is fckg diary,,this book only 1person pov monologue all the way
muaahahaha! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I must say, this is one of my favorite books on this site for the following reasons: I like the mindset of the mc. (even if most people do no like it) I like his cautiousness. (He is very paranoid.) The relationship he has with the grils and the obvious favoritism that comes with it. (I especially like this because of of he mc's on this site believe in the 'i will love you all equally thing') Some negative points are: The unstable release of chapters. The mc that speaks to much and overthinks in many situations.(This lessens overtime) Hypocrite mc. (It is not a negative for me but maybe it is for some people Big harem, like, VERY big harem. (again, not a negative for me but maybe for some people well. Yeah thats it for me. Thanks a lot for the book Bukaro, hope too see more.
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The story is really cool, it has some problems like him getting a new woman every 3 chapters, but that's personal and you might like it, one of the cool parts was the way the author created the multiverse, I won't say it is perfect, but it's certainly better than many other people on these sites who get lost in this part, it was also really cool this idea of making the character totally crazy, which ends up giving a "justification" for why the protagonist does crazy things, like kind of break the 4th wall sometimes. And also Navi is the real protagonist of this work, this guy who claims to be the protagonist is just a secondary character that is manipulated by Navi.