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Paul is Leon's biological father. To be honest, I was disappointed because I was hoping Aisha and Norn would join the harem when they were old enough. After all, they went through hardships together. But if you say that Paul is the real father. It shows that they must really be brothers.

I wonder if Akikan takes spam comments too seriously. I've noticed this in many of Akikan's novels. Ruined a lot of things because he followed those rubbish suggestions, like Tsukasa being the protagonist. Akikan wrote the script without being too good or too good. But there were comments saying that they wanted good heroes. Tsukasa wasn't as good as they wanted, and as a result, Akikan acted on those rubbish opinions, making the hero too good and ruining the story. However, I think Akikan should stick to his own opinion. more than this

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It's really about the op of the mc. Akikan had already made improvements to the story about whether it was wrong to be a cheater, but there seemed to be drama. Akikan upgraded until the story was ruined.

World seraph of the end

Please don't forget to include zom 100 bucket list of the dead in the story.

akikan Try writing fan fiction in the Macross or Gundam universe and have a system. I think it's interesting.

Most of akikan's works come back and re-read every story but this one. It will be the first story that I'll delete it and never come back and read it again.

Is that something you have to ask? Since the ending in this story is the worst ending of his work.

I understand how you wrote the ending like this. But to be honest, I'm quite disappointed and feel betrayed, especially by the MC. He's been through a lot. From the beginning from episode 1 to episode 409, everything was finally reset. It turns out those things never happened. And Issei in the previous world was the reason Ophis had to die. But in the new world, Issei has become a young man who is perfect for everything no matter what anyone says. I felt like everything I had read was meaningless. Because it is said that what I read has never happened before.