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Es sorprendente que la version español, que solo tiene 3 personas menos dando una reseña, tenga 4.9 estrellas y este mas bajo, jajajajaja, Gracias por esta gran obra autor
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***JAJAJAJAJAJAJA!!! QUE INCREIBLE, FENOMENAL Y GRACIOSO!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! SO AMAZING, PHENOMENAL AND FUNNY!!! (español/english)***~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My name is Yoshikage Kira. I’m 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don’t smoke, but I occasionally drink. I’m in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn’t lose to anyone.
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I've read all the chapters in 4 days and I must say. This is a pretty good fanfic but there are some reasons why I have migraines ha get it migraine because the mc gets migraines well ignore that but 1st reason is that author doesn't like correcting the he,she,I,him,her,and etc so basically I get confused with who is who but i understand that its because author translated it from spanish. 2nd reason is that there is so much narrative that most things there shouldn't even need to be said so basically it sometimes gets boring and also it would be great if there were more 3rd pov of other characters so it shows they have some importance to the mc or story. well tbh I don't really care after all I came here for the harem tag so author if u are willing to add one more character to help the mc it should be echidna from re:zero(i read in a chapter the name echidna but is it that echidna or another echidna?)but yeah that's all but I want more chapters pls author.
I don't like this...... Haish............ Every chapter always monolog,monolog, monolog,,,,,, Boring..........,👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 But the story' line ia very good...
one of the best fanfics i have ever read.......................................................................................................................
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well, honestly i AM euphoric to start to read the book, i always think the same too...but build an stable harem is dificult i hope You can do it as the reviews said You did it. i have recomendations to harem members too, i read the characters part si they are news but i Will wait enjoy first. only one question? count novel characters or only animes and manga kind?...Best regards and surprise me
Well I’ll keep this short: this is real talk one of the best fanfictions, I highly recommend this. It has been and still is really fun to read a new chapter that is as good as these and to have an author that responds so much to comments Read it please
This novel is great. The character feels alive and it has a functioning harem. The plot stays intresting, grammar is great. Overall read it it's gonna become one of your favourite novels of all time.
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I have read over 200 chaps and it's good the mc isn't a bad guy or a good guy just mentally unstable his harem size is a bit big I can't remember half his wife's without checking paragraph commens but overall its good
One thing I love about this fanfiction is the emotional development of every character. The main character development is great. I love how he changes as the fanfiction progress.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
perfection......eventho usually my enjoyment when reading an ongoing novel will be toned down....but it isnt the case with this novel.......for me it is already a good novel
the story is good only that the author exaggerates with the worlds by adding hundreds of characters and mixing completely different plots, the problem is that the author adds so many characters that even if we know them they only have secondary roles and are only there for few chapters and their addition to the story is useless, at the beginning the story is good but too much inner thoughts and then it has improved but now it is worsening especially the worlds that have now become completely animations instead of at the beginning they were real worlds, there are many skills with little sense, the power of the mc fluctuates at the beginning is weak it suddenly increases and then even more, mc created a universe but it barely destroys a continent (a few chapters before not even an island and it destroyed to the maximum a boat with spiraling energy when charging energy), the author mixes up too much random textures and abilities are created or enhanced suddenly when they are standing still for a long time, so if you want a story that has a minimum of logic this is not for you, there are also stupid moments like the world that resets itself because the plot ends but others not because they are of the mc, the characters have a deadline because they are destined for a certain kind of fate if they are not superior beings, it also seems that only mc and his companions are able to improve themselves, then some characters are stronger or weaker than the original plot without respecting the canon, mc continues to earn plot armor randomly and only him he can do it, it also seems that his abilities surpass all logic and definition and random things, it's okay that he is op but if you look for a balanced thing you don't find it, he is also stupid mc that he cannot develop other types of energy because he is limited and becomes garbage, in short, you find debuffs without logic only for the plot or for momentary fun, good story at the beginning but over time it got worse
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could you tell me who the girl on the bottom right is. the one with the purple bra, maid outfit and pretty blue-purple gradient hair. nice ff btw :P
Probably the best fanfiction novel I will ever read with realistic story progression and scaling. Merges multiple stories into a main world where all the trouble starts. Shows the psychotic behavior of characters from other transmigration stories which is totally true (Especially Chinese protagonists). The only trouble about the novel is the sheer number of people you have to remember from different stories or their fate/vtuber images.
I honestly think this is interesting, but there are some flaws that bugs me. One, Mc whines about his evil plans and how he is going to get a harem but not like all the girls, like he takes favoritism and I think it was mentioned in the sypnosis or thr Auxiliar chapter but I can't remember. Second, the chapters are long, that's a plus but not when 95% of the chapters are pure monologue. I understand he is an angst guy to talk to other people but the fic progresses but there are barely any conversation between charactes only hinself talking about the progress he's made with the characters, we don't actually see the progress so that is fustrating and since the chapters are long like this, it becomes, sorry to say this but it becomes boring, I rather have a 700 words chapter with 70% conversations and 30% monologues than a long chapter with 95% monologue and 5% conversations. I am not saying the fanfic is bad, I'm just stating what I think are the flaws of this fanfic. Sorry, Author. As an author myself, I felt intertained to such an extent the first two chapter were awsome than his whining began and well, we don't like to hear about whining MCs now do we, so as a reader I have to tell you what I think about this book. I like the idea but not how it was presented, I'm not even angry about the gender mixups, that doesn't bother me because I understand as a nonenglish speaker you won't know the rules of Grammar but what I did not like most was the no conversations, I am in Chapter 11 and I think it has become a bit boring with just inner talks, tell me author, does this continues? and for how long? until what chapter does conversations start getting better? I want to start reading from there. Anyways, I hope you don't take this the wrong way like I said, I like the fanfic it's just the MC isn't what I call an MC😅
10 de 10 mi pana siga asi ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Perfection everything about this is perfect. although author states that the writing Had a lot of monolouging I truly did not see much or I could handle it hahaha~~~ I truly hope the next world is MHA expand the harem even further!!! genderbend characters or create twins of the characters!! I truly hope to write a novel as good as a fraction of this perfect novel~~~
~Best anime mashup novel I've read on webnovel everything is perfect and harem is quite big with likable personality of mc 'cough' cough'...
Warning : AUTHOR WAS LOLICON, SO EXPECT SOME LOLIS IN HAREM (╯ರ ~ ರ)╯ CHUMMY.........................................................
The story is really cool, it has some problems like him getting a new woman every 3 chapters, but that's personal and you might like it, one of the cool parts was the way the author created the multiverse, I won't say it is perfect, but it's certainly better than many other people on these sites who get lost in this part, it was also really cool this idea of making the character totally crazy, which ends up giving a "justification" for why the protagonist does crazy things, like kind of break the 4th wall sometimes. And also Navi is the real protagonist of this work, this guy who claims to be the protagonist is just a secondary character that is manipulated by Navi.
Amazing story like how mc deals with things and more importantly how he gets all the waifus.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Es sorprendente que la version español, que solo tiene 3 personas menos dando una reseña, tenga 4.9 estrellas y este mas bajo, jajajajaja, Gracias por esta gran obra autor
Very good :) ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
***JAJAJAJAJAJAJA!!! QUE INCREIBLE, FENOMENAL Y GRACIOSO!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! SO AMAZING, PHENOMENAL AND FUNNY!!! (español/english)***~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My name is Yoshikage Kira. I’m 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don’t smoke, but I occasionally drink. I’m in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I’m trying to explain that I’m a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn’t lose to anyone.
Spoiler de révélation I've read all the chapters in 4 days and I must say. This is a pretty good fanfic but there are some reasons why I have migraines ha get it migraine because the mc gets migraines well ignore that but 1st reason is that author doesn't like correcting the he,she,I,him,her,and etc so basically I get confused with who is who but i understand that its because author translated it from spanish. 2nd reason is that there is so much narrative that most things there shouldn't even need to be said so basically it sometimes gets boring and also it would be great if there were more 3rd pov of other characters so it shows they have some importance to the mc or story. well tbh I don't really care after all I came here for the harem tag so author if u are willing to add one more character to help the mc it should be echidna from re:zero(i read in a chapter the name echidna but is it that echidna or another echidna?)but yeah that's all but I want more chapters pls author.
I don't like this...... Haish............ Every chapter always monolog,monolog, monolog,,,,,, Boring..........,👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 But the story' line ia very good...
one of the best fanfics i have ever read.......................................................................................................................
I really liked this piece))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😶🌫️😲🤓😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🤓🤓
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well, honestly i AM euphoric to start to read the book, i always think the same too...but build an stable harem is dificult i hope You can do it as the reviews said You did it. i have recomendations to harem members too, i read the characters part si they are news but i Will wait enjoy first. only one question? count novel characters or only animes and manga kind?...Best regards and surprise me
Well I’ll keep this short: this is real talk one of the best fanfictions, I highly recommend this. It has been and still is really fun to read a new chapter that is as good as these and to have an author that responds so much to comments Read it please
This novel is great. The character feels alive and it has a functioning harem. The plot stays intresting, grammar is great. Overall read it it's gonna become one of your favourite novels of all time.
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I have read over 200 chaps and it's good the mc isn't a bad guy or a good guy just mentally unstable his harem size is a bit big I can't remember half his wife's without checking paragraph commens but overall its good
One thing I love about this fanfiction is the emotional development of every character. The main character development is great. I love how he changes as the fanfiction progress.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
perfection......eventho usually my enjoyment when reading an ongoing novel will be toned down....but it isnt the case with this novel.......for me it is already a good novel
the story is good only that the author exaggerates with the worlds by adding hundreds of characters and mixing completely different plots, the problem is that the author adds so many characters that even if we know them they only have secondary roles and are only there for few chapters and their addition to the story is useless, at the beginning the story is good but too much inner thoughts and then it has improved but now it is worsening especially the worlds that have now become completely animations instead of at the beginning they were real worlds, there are many skills with little sense, the power of the mc fluctuates at the beginning is weak it suddenly increases and then even more, mc created a universe but it barely destroys a continent (a few chapters before not even an island and it destroyed to the maximum a boat with spiraling energy when charging energy), the author mixes up too much random textures and abilities are created or enhanced suddenly when they are standing still for a long time, so if you want a story that has a minimum of logic this is not for you, there are also stupid moments like the world that resets itself because the plot ends but others not because they are of the mc, the characters have a deadline because they are destined for a certain kind of fate if they are not superior beings, it also seems that only mc and his companions are able to improve themselves, then some characters are stronger or weaker than the original plot without respecting the canon, mc continues to earn plot armor randomly and only him he can do it, it also seems that his abilities surpass all logic and definition and random things, it's okay that he is op but if you look for a balanced thing you don't find it, he is also stupid mc that he cannot develop other types of energy because he is limited and becomes garbage, in short, you find debuffs without logic only for the plot or for momentary fun, good story at the beginning but over time it got worse
Spoiler de révélation could you tell me who the girl on the bottom right is. the one with the purple bra, maid outfit and pretty blue-purple gradient hair. nice ff btw :P
Probably the best fanfiction novel I will ever read with realistic story progression and scaling. Merges multiple stories into a main world where all the trouble starts. Shows the psychotic behavior of characters from other transmigration stories which is totally true (Especially Chinese protagonists). The only trouble about the novel is the sheer number of people you have to remember from different stories or their fate/vtuber images.
I honestly think this is interesting, but there are some flaws that bugs me. One, Mc whines about his evil plans and how he is going to get a harem but not like all the girls, like he takes favoritism and I think it was mentioned in the sypnosis or thr Auxiliar chapter but I can't remember. Second, the chapters are long, that's a plus but not when 95% of the chapters are pure monologue. I understand he is an angst guy to talk to other people but the fic progresses but there are barely any conversation between charactes only hinself talking about the progress he's made with the characters, we don't actually see the progress so that is fustrating and since the chapters are long like this, it becomes, sorry to say this but it becomes boring, I rather have a 700 words chapter with 70% conversations and 30% monologues than a long chapter with 95% monologue and 5% conversations. I am not saying the fanfic is bad, I'm just stating what I think are the flaws of this fanfic. Sorry, Author. As an author myself, I felt intertained to such an extent the first two chapter were awsome than his whining began and well, we don't like to hear about whining MCs now do we, so as a reader I have to tell you what I think about this book. I like the idea but not how it was presented, I'm not even angry about the gender mixups, that doesn't bother me because I understand as a nonenglish speaker you won't know the rules of Grammar but what I did not like most was the no conversations, I am in Chapter 11 and I think it has become a bit boring with just inner talks, tell me author, does this continues? and for how long? until what chapter does conversations start getting better? I want to start reading from there. Anyways, I hope you don't take this the wrong way like I said, I like the fanfic it's just the MC isn't what I call an MC😅
10 de 10 mi pana siga asi ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Perfection everything about this is perfect. although author states that the writing Had a lot of monolouging I truly did not see much or I could handle it hahaha~~~ I truly hope the next world is MHA expand the harem even further!!! genderbend characters or create twins of the characters!! I truly hope to write a novel as good as a fraction of this perfect novel~~~
~Best anime mashup novel I've read on webnovel everything is perfect and harem is quite big with likable personality of mc 'cough' cough'...
Warning : AUTHOR WAS LOLICON, SO EXPECT SOME LOLIS IN HAREM (╯ರ ~ ರ)╯ CHUMMY.........................................................
The story is really cool, it has some problems like him getting a new woman every 3 chapters, but that's personal and you might like it, one of the cool parts was the way the author created the multiverse, I won't say it is perfect, but it's certainly better than many other people on these sites who get lost in this part, it was also really cool this idea of making the character totally crazy, which ends up giving a "justification" for why the protagonist does crazy things, like kind of break the 4th wall sometimes. And also Navi is the real protagonist of this work, this guy who claims to be the protagonist is just a secondary character that is manipulated by Navi.
Amazing story like how mc deals with things and more importantly how he gets all the waifus.