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The story was fantastic. The character development was great as well. The story revolves around Einar but it still gives you more knowledge about the book from the perspective from different character's even when Einar is not present. So Overall A Great Novel.
Like your updating stability, but the characters need work, and reading it so far it seems like the protagonist is stomping around, taking his anger out on other people just because he can't take a heartbreak.
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Ok I dont think rhe story is that bad but I dont understand why he wants to follow her because it makes no sense She may be King Authur in the legend but he dosent have to follow the legend
2nd review: I really like the story, the plot is satisfaying and exciting. I like that it focuses a bit more on romance, feelings and slice of life. And while the grammar isnt the best, the story doesnt get downgraded by it at all. MC has to face realistic hardships (like emotional ones) instead of your typical fanfic wishfulfillment MC, who get everything theown in his face on super easy mode..... --> Great Idea and Story❤😊
this used to be my fav story until Einar became a beta male at chapter 70+..........................................................................................
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Well this is one of the best fate fanfiction novel and looking forward for more fate fanfiction Good luck Is there any more fate fanfiction recommendations?
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Good concept and a pretty good representation. It's by no means perfect and it actually has quite a lot of flaws. But this is one of many unique fanfics. so far I would give it a 4 because I'm felling generous today
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Well what could I say the story is top notch and how the development is godlike (I never read or played fate so I dunno) what is fun in this is the omake making the cliffhanger less depressing ok that's only I know.
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God story Cool,exelent sorry y am no spek inglish , cool story I read with google translate xd ... good story anyway...I look forward to the next chapter, :)
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150 and the king of the real story and a few words in his head as the first step is to put his name forward as the police will pass the information onto him to ensure that the court has a better understanding of the Old Court as he is the chief of the real court of the court proceedings as soon he has heard from him in the next few months as he is away and Интересно, что я написал) Уважаемые автору, очень редко можно найти хорошие работы по Fate.
great book, 10/10 chara is definitly came close to being a human and definitly a simp. its not that regular fate fanfic but its THAT kind of fate fanfic
The story was fantastic. The character development was great as well. The story revolves around Einar but it still gives you more knowledge about the book from the perspective from different character's even when Einar is not present. So Overall A Great Novel.
Like your updating stability, but the characters need work, and reading it so far it seems like the protagonist is stomping around, taking his anger out on other people just because he can't take a heartbreak.
Spoiler de révélation Ok I dont think rhe story is that bad but I dont understand why he wants to follow her because it makes no sense She may be King Authur in the legend but he dosent have to follow the legend
2nd review: I really like the story, the plot is satisfaying and exciting. I like that it focuses a bit more on romance, feelings and slice of life. And while the grammar isnt the best, the story doesnt get downgraded by it at all. MC has to face realistic hardships (like emotional ones) instead of your typical fanfic wishfulfillment MC, who get everything theown in his face on super easy mode..... --> Great Idea and Story❤😊
this used to be my fav story until Einar became a beta male at chapter 70+..........................................................................................
This is original content bitches 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂......... Just wanted to write this lol 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 ok this is really great.....
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Well this is one of the best fate fanfiction novel and looking forward for more fate fanfiction Good luck Is there any more fate fanfiction recommendations?
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Good concept and a pretty good representation. It's by no means perfect and it actually has quite a lot of flaws. But this is one of many unique fanfics. so far I would give it a 4 because I'm felling generous today
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Well what could I say the story is top notch and how the development is godlike (I never read or played fate so I dunno) what is fun in this is the omake making the cliffhanger less depressing ok that's only I know.
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God story Cool,exelent sorry y am no spek inglish , cool story I read with google translate xd ... good story anyway...I look forward to the next chapter, :)
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Мне нравиться. Продолжай в том же духе. Жду продолжение. У нас на рулейте за перевод вообще требуют деньги, поэтому читаю оригинал. Всего наилучшего. Благодарный читатель.[img=update][img=recommend]
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150 and the king of the real story and a few words in his head as the first step is to put his name forward as the police will pass the information onto him to ensure that the court has a better understanding of the Old Court as he is the chief of the real court of the court proceedings as soon he has heard from him in the next few months as he is away and Интересно, что я написал) Уважаемые автору, очень редко можно найти хорошие работы по Fate.
great book, 10/10 chara is definitly came close to being a human and definitly a simp. its not that regular fate fanfic but its THAT kind of fate fanfic